[Shiro Okami Kokoro]

I got bored.. This is my first drawing on the Oekaki ever, haha.. It sucks, I know.. But it's a work in progress so far.. I would've done more on it, but I gotta sleep! XD

I used a mouse for it, I hope it doesn't suck too bad so far.. Any ideas on what to fix to make it look better would be greatly appreciated!:D

I'm thinking of making a background later and stuff, adding more detail later of course.. I felt like this was pretty quick, the timer is lying! I started out drawing something else and then erased it XD I also took some breaks..

I feel like his muzzle should be at a different angle, maybe shorter? And maybe his eye should be bigger.. I don't know! Something's bugging me though, and I don't know what it is! If anyone can tell me, I'd be happy to try and fix it.. (:

Achak is a character of mine, and I made him up (:
I drew the picture, and the only reference I used was for the eye.. Eye Reference

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kool!

[Shiro Okami Kokoro]

kool!

Thanks (:

[hiday567]

Yes.. The eye should be a bit bigger to fit proportions. Wolf ears are just a little bigger than what ya have... And perhaps the muzzle should be a tiny bit longer because you're looking at it from a frontward-slant position. Since it is at this slant, it would be a little longer. But if you were looking at it in a direct-slant (almost looking directly in to face/back) it would be shorter, but you're looking at it from the side.
Sorry about all the critique. I just sketch A LOT of wolves and dogs idle, along with cats.
Anyway, you did a very good job.

[Shiro Okami Kokoro]

Yes.. The eye should be a bit bigger to fit proportions. Wolf ears are just a little bigger than what ya have... And perhaps the muzzle should be a tiny bit longer because you're looking at it from a frontward-slant position. Since it is at this slant, it would be a little longer. But if you were looking at it in a direct-slant (almost looking directly in to face/back) it would be shorter, but you're looking at it from the side.
Sorry about all the critique. I just sketch A LOT of wolves and dogs idle, along with cats.
Anyway, you did a very good job.

No, thank you! You don't need to say sorry, I really like the critique it's very helpful and will only make me better! (:
I found it much harder to draw with a mouse than with a paper and pencil (What I usually draw with..). But it was fun nonetheless!

[hiday567]

Same here with paper/pencil and mouse. XD

[Shiro Okami Kokoro]

Same here with paper/pencil and mouse. XD

Haha, yeah! I started out like, 'oh, this should be fun! I draw with paper and pencil all the time!'

After a little while in I realized that this was way harder than I thought it would be.. Haha.

[hiday567]

Same here with paper/pencil and mouse. XD

Haha, yeah! I started out like, 'oh, this should be fun! I draw with paper and pencil all the time!'

After a little while in I realized that this was way harder than I thought it would be.. Haha.

XD That's how I was when I drew meh grass in Night Time. Didn't look right so I smudged it or whatever.. Unlike my pencil/paper art.XD I think we're gonna become good friends. XD

[Shiro Okami Kokoro]

Haha, yeah! (:

I just need to get around to fixing this thing up.. If it were on paper I would've erased it by now XD

And I think that background you made looks cool! (hope you don't mind my looking..)

[fireflies.]

Nice!