[Moonncloud]

Ok here is my last page for the week end! Sorry about the crappy rain. Next time I have it rain I`ll make it look better!
I feel that my backgrounds a looking a little better now too :3 not much but they do look better then the first few pages of this comic.


Previous!....
Next!...

OKay now for the box's!

Read left to right!

all four box's:

Tyke: I hope their alright. (I found a write-o XD) (Write-o Type-o Same thing) (I probably have a lot of those XP)
Cressa: It's getting ready to rain...
Drake: Her scent is pretty strong now!
Faolan: I smell another wolf to.
Faolan: La-L-Larain?!

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I would like to give credit to ---Chard--- for the idea of bringing a new wolf into the story like this
The new wolves name will be posted on the new page next time!

Hope you enjoy!

[*Ghost*]

Awsome job! Happy Almost Birthday and great job with the comic!

[Moonncloud]

Thank you!! :3

[susie.]

I'm starting a comic series any tips
and did you do the 10 hours all at once

[susie.]

Great job too I love the series

[LTwoof]

woo! I love it!

[Moonncloud]

Thanks Im glad everyone likes it :3

Hmm tips well, I'm not really sure. I'm new to this so it's kinda hard to say, Some of the problems I have run into are, my work boxs are to small for all my words, So I retype them below in my post and some times I add different words that I wanted to use or extend what the character was saying. Something I do when I draw out my characters is I sketch them on a different layer then I draw them on another same with the coloring, and when I first started out with the comic I did the backgrounds in a seperate layer the same thing goes for the words and word boxs. This made it easyer on me when I miss spelled a word or something, that way I could erase the word I miss spelled with out erasing the box as well. I think that is all I can give you so far, oh it could help to write your story first on a note book or on the computer, that way you could go back and see what is supose to happen next incase you had to stop the comic for some time (like me) and forgotten what you were supose to right/draw next. Granted this maybe hard if you want to have people sign up. It just all depends on what you want to do. I hope this helps!

And this really didn't take me 10 hours XD I would of died if it did. I leave my art up on my computer alot so dont believe the time on any of my art inless it under an 1 or 2 then it should be correct.


Thank you so much for posting and or hitting the like button And im glad that even if you didn't post, you viewed my comic page :3

[percabeth.]

The best comic ever! Can't wait for the next one!

[SPG]

.. O.O Is Larain alive?

[SPG]

Last panel, lol Faolan doesn't have blue on him. XD

EDIT:
Now, reading the next page, I know who it is, sorry! :3