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My first Oekaki! by Asa Willow

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My first Oekaki!

Postby Asa Willow » Sat Jan 28, 2012 8:27 pm

I just want to see what people think... Any ideas on how to imrove?
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Re: My first Oekaki!

Postby Asa Willow » Mon Jan 30, 2012 11:12 am

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Hello there!
I'm Asa, and I'm a full-time student who loves to draw and animate. Don't hesitate to HMU if you want a commission, art trade, or a good chat!

I was formerly Lovenature100

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•Point/USD commissions are open on my DA!
•Art trades are open! I love doing them and I'm not picky, check out my DA above for examples <3
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***If I owe you art and you have the sneaking suspicion that I have forgotten, please PM me!

pssst... check out
my comic
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Re: My first Oekaki!

Postby KariSohma22 » Mon Jan 30, 2012 11:13 am

I really like it! You could make the toes more detailed though. ^_^
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When you get what you want but not what you need
When you feel so tired but you can't sleep
Stuck in reverse

And the tears come streaming down your face
When you lose something you can't replace
When you love someone but it goes to waste
Could it be worse?

Lights will guide you home
And ignite your bones
And I will try to fix you

And high up above or down below
When you're too in love to let it go
But if you never try you'll never know
Just what you're worth
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Re: My first Oekaki!

Postby ~Firebird Rising~ » Mon Jan 30, 2012 11:14 am

This is good for your first! All I would say is you may want to make the snout longer. :)
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Re: My first Oekaki!

Postby Asa Willow » Mon Jan 30, 2012 11:27 am

- Yeah I didn't put in that much time so I didn't get into details

-and I noticed that... the chain looks like it's overlapping the snout; I had difficulty with that I had to redraw it at least ten times.. im a beginner so it looks really ameture
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Hello there!
I'm Asa, and I'm a full-time student who loves to draw and animate. Don't hesitate to HMU if you want a commission, art trade, or a good chat!

I was formerly Lovenature100

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•Point/USD commissions are open on my DA!
•Art trades are open! I love doing them and I'm not picky, check out my DA above for examples <3
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Re: My first Oekaki!

Postby NoLongerOnCS » Mon Jan 30, 2012 11:54 am

this is an amazing okekia be proud of it, its better than alot of my work, the only thing i would suggest is working on the grass, use the blend tool and streak int back and forth along the edge of the grass up and down to make it
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Re: My first Oekaki!

Postby acethepurpleowl123 » Mon Jan 30, 2012 12:05 pm

Thats an AWESOME PIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: My first Oekaki!

Postby Asa Willow » Mon Jan 30, 2012 12:15 pm

ok thank you so much for the tips i'm new to this software.
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Hello there!
I'm Asa, and I'm a full-time student who loves to draw and animate. Don't hesitate to HMU if you want a commission, art trade, or a good chat!

I was formerly Lovenature100

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•Point/USD commissions are open on my DA!
•Art trades are open! I love doing them and I'm not picky, check out my DA above for examples <3
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Re: My first Oekaki!

Postby NoLongerOnCS » Mon Jan 30, 2012 12:29 pm

=P Well u did very good
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Re: My first Oekaki!

Postby Apple Cider. » Mon Jan 30, 2012 12:40 pm

it's very good! (:
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