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there was actually another puppy in the box! cloud hadn't really talked with any other dogs since... well... ever. except nady and his mother of course, but that was different. there he was, suddenly surrounded with three other dogs, and a puppy in a box! what a strange thing to happen, he thought. but he was also getting nervous... nadylana had never told him this directly, but he had noticed that she never trusted other dogs, without thinking about it, he had started doing the same. then one of the dogs lifted the pup out of the box. he suddenly got very nervous.. what if they would harm the puppy? he barked ''nady! help!'' and nadylana came running the small distance to save him. when she got there she noticed that there was no actual danger for cloud, so she stopped running and calmly picked cloud up again. ''s'ry 'bout 'ny 'ouble, she tried to say, still holding cloud in her mouth.
but cloud wanted to save the puppy, becues he thought the other dogs would harm the pup. ''no! we have to save the puppy!''
she put cloud back on the ground, looking up at the sky. it was going to rain soon... ''cloud... don't bother. the pup's not going to survive very long anyway'' that was it, the other dogs would think badly of her now, not that she actually cared, she did what she had to do to survive, and saving another starving pup was not something she could or wanted to do right now. she was sure the other dogs would solve it.
''no! i won't leave!'' cloud barked, suddenly feeling like a rebel. ''fine with me'', nadylana muttered, as she walked away, leaving cloud behind with the strange dogs.
cloud watched her go with a very hopeless look in his eyes.
((she will come back for cloud later but for now she was angry, and feeling very uncomfortable with the other dogs so she walked of to cool down, before she would do something she would regret later))((again, kinda long
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