❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby χaphan » Fri May 17, 2019 7:39 am

God, I suck at writing the beginning of things o.o still working on the story for my OC Neo, it's just tough to get the first couple of sentences out D: *pulls myself together* you can do this! Come on!
I am working on a brainstorm on the side as well, just so I keep on writing something down...
- It's just so weird having to write his story out, where it's supposed to be on a storyline of some sort, in my head, everything didn't have to be in the right order or time x'D
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby anxious ghost » Fri May 17, 2019 8:22 am

@destiel
i find it's easiest to just write down scenes as they come to you, then piece them together in the order they're supposed to go in
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby χaphan » Fri May 17, 2019 8:30 am

@anxious ghost ; I guess I could try that - kind of like what the others earlier have said as well c:
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby cribunni » Fri May 17, 2019 1:34 pm

thank you for all the feedback !! Glad you guys liked it~

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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby χaphan » Sat May 18, 2019 7:40 am

I have found a way I want to write my story for Neo - I'll be making a long, detailed and book-like story and then I'll make one where there are only the key points because I need some story for him for roleplays c:
- Thank you all for your kind ideas and such, it has been really helpful ^-^
Now it's just the next thing to get past, English not being my first language o.o'' there are bound to be some mistakes...

Also, what do you guys use to write in/on? I have Open Office on my pc atm, but I will be getting word at some point when I start school again, but should I be using google docs instead? o:
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby anxious ghost » Sat May 18, 2019 8:32 am

@destiel
i personally use google docs, so that i can write at home on my laptop and out on my phone. but it's really up to personal preference.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby Crookedleaf » Sat May 18, 2019 8:42 am

Thank you guys for the feedback on that little drabble I wrote!
Its based off these two OCs of mine
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby anxious ghost » Tue May 21, 2019 3:59 pm

i wrote some more angst...........

Riley’s eyes were earnest and his voice pleading. “Come on Mack. Run away with me. We could go anywhere. We could be anything!” He held her hands tightly in his and squeezed them. “Please, Holly.” His eyes were red and puffy, like he’d spent the night crying. It wouldn’t surprise her if he had; he’d done it before, sometimes over the phone with her at three a.m.
“Don’t ask me to do that. You know I can’t. I have obligations. To my family.”
“I’m your family!” He cried out. “They don’t care about you or what you want! They have their own agenda and it doesn’t involve your happiness!”
“My happiness doesn’t matter anymore! How can you be so selfish all the time? I want to make my parents proud. This isn’t about me or you anymore. We’re nearly adults now, it’s time to grow up!”
He flinched back and she wrenched her hands from his grip.
“Join me or say goodbye, Riley Williams. You’ve got two days to decide before I leave.”
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby Ranger of the North » Tue May 21, 2019 10:06 pm

Why must you torment me them in this manner
The world is quiet here.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜ V2

Postby anxious ghost » Wed May 22, 2019 6:49 am

Ranger of the North wrote:
Why must you torment me them in this manner


because it's actually really good stress relief and also it's my job as a writer to make you them suffer
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