by Boredom Queen » Fri Jul 13, 2018 3:34 pm
I like AmberPaw’s and PuddlePaws personality,
It was just really difficult to read as it felt like your sentences were running-on, other than that, it was amazing, keep up the good work!
Just a writer
in desperate need of inspiration
and trying to actually
finish a book for once!
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Peter is my son.
I shall protect him at all costs.
He needs all the hugs.