Tim_B wrote:The nights get longer
The days get sorter
The winters tests
To every pest
And I am no acception
The mice move into people's homes
The squirrels makes homes in trees
The bears sleep in the cave
All the birds fly away
And then your left with me
My test is diffrent from the animals
My test lies deep withing the walls
The walls of my head
Where all my thoughts dread
Winter, don't test this pest tonight
I really like this one~ Mind if I offer some feedback and small grammatical fixes?