So far the beginning of Tempting Fate has been violent. Showing Lukas to be.... Well I can't say here. But he's prone to strike out when angry. Which is 99 percent of the time.
Should I keep going with this route or have Ari have a happier beginning? Lukas could probably be out on a trip while Autumn and Ari kinda just nope outta there.
Ive had one draft where Ari was at least a bit normal. I think it started with him filling out paperwork for Team Rocket or something to get out of it as someone, Archer, accidentally burnt the place down whilst Giovanni was gone. Actually yeah that was how it started out. He and his mother having a bit of an argument because he wanted to go away again. (At this point he's been through ****** and Rocket)
Changing this also requires changing chapter 1 because Ari wouldn't be scratched by a Liepard.
Though he'll have enough trouble with Team Plasma already. So maybe no drama would be better? That kind of Parent trope is kinda overused but meh. :T Ju-just meh.
Ranger, from what you've seen do you like Lukas as a beginning antagonist? (Yes he and Autumn are mine too. I forgot to say that in PM bc i momentarily forgot about his parents xD) I mean he never shows up past the Prologue because I have no clue how to shoehorn him in with the rest of my plot and the plot of pokemans. So at this point he's a short ended plot point that basically serves no purpose and never really shows up again.
I'd thought about integrating him into the story as the main boss, but that'd make no sense. It would also make -spoiler- his brother... Well adopted brother for original story reasons. Spoiler reasons. You should probably Play Black or White reasons. Not much context is really needed but it's highly encouraged.
Chuggaaconroy's Lping the game if you do want context but don't want to play it for yourselfAlso Autumn cant cook. Which is funny.