Arya22 wrote:@claire
What do you mean exactly with 'scripted'?
Other than that, thanks!
I could then:
Add paragraphs (my worst, I've always been bad at it, even at school)
And make dialogue in a normal color?
@minty
Thanks!
I'll see what I can do to it then.
Uh, I guess what I mean is that I like how the characters talk like real people. I like when characters talk in a more natural way, and laugh and have fun, so I really like the conversation between Gwen and Ethan because it does that really well. So it's not 'scripted' in that way, because it reads like a real conversation
And yeah! The format change would make it easier to read, and since you've already got a good story, that'll make it super! Paragraphs are the kind of thing that take a while to get used to, but after you do, it becomes easier! I've been writing for a long time but I still forget sometimes lol
(sorry I am awful at explaining myself oops)