Signature Criticism! [v.1]

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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby glitter » Sat Jan 01, 2022 12:08 pm

i rlly like how aligned everything is. even though u went for a minimalist look, it doesnt look empty and it is pleasing to look at.

maybe instead of using dashes etc, you could find png brackets to give ur sig a more solid look. or add blocks of color.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby viles » Sat Jan 01, 2022 12:13 pm

  • i had prepared to talk about the fact that the bottom line of your signature was much farther right than the rest of the signature, but it seems that you have removed it, likely due to the issue i mentioned. i guess if i have to say something i'm not the biggest fan of the gif in the middle. i think it's slightly different color and aesthetic than that rest of the signature. however, it's not blatant or anything, and i feel nitpicky bringing it up. honestly, other than that, i don't see anything i would change. the layout is good, i like the symbols you've chosen for the borders, and the color palette is pleasing. it's a well-made signature!
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby dxmxnxc » Tue Jan 04, 2022 6:37 am

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    it’s … beautiful
    maybe make the lips colored to match the emojis?
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby heizou » Wed Jan 12, 2022 3:29 am

    i don't know how to fault this sig, maybe make the coloured text more purple instead so it's a little easier to read while still matching the image?
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby ChevyTheQH » Wed Jan 12, 2022 3:31 am

I love the gif, maybe add more so its more spread out long ways? It seems really crammed into one corner
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby Ebony Stardust » Wed Jan 12, 2022 3:34 am

Pretty neat, but there's a lot of empty space near the top. Maybe move the lower part up closer to the quote?
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby heizou » Wed Jan 12, 2022 3:37 am

    i think there's too many colours and some lines of text being much longer than other lines of text is stressing me out
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby Apollyon. » Wed Jan 12, 2022 7:22 am

i really like ur signature! only think i would change would be to somehow fix it so that the tiny white spaces between the thick black lines for the border would disappear, making the border blend into itself more nicely. other than that, great job!






























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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby axelandria » Fri Jan 14, 2022 9:02 am

    i really like it, especially the art! the vibes and aesthetic is so cool looking :)

    the bottom left image looks a little squished though. the tiny little thing that bothers me is that the zodiac signs line is shorter than the pronouns and name line, making it uneven.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby kal! » Fri Jan 14, 2022 9:04 am

i like how it's all in a line, but i do sort of wish the sign fit in the bg on the smore. other than that, it looks nice! ^^
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