Signature Criticism! [v.1]

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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby xanthocat » Tue May 05, 2020 3:20 pm

I enjoy the overall vibe of it, but I feel the gif with the background really doesn't fit. Maybe removing it or replacing it may do some good?
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby Aseria Greane » Mon May 11, 2020 12:21 am

I like the format, such as the aligning to the left at the top and they hyphen spacers, although the image to the right is a little off in terms of height. Maybe lessen the empty space on top or right-align the image on the same line with the last line of text; this'll fix the height difference.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby glitter » Mon May 11, 2020 4:12 pm

like that you took the time to code your signature. you've put some time towards it, good job! I like the establishing connection, loading etc quotes that you have. they are very creative and i think it makes your sig unique! you've also done a good job with editing the images. i think your sig could use some spicing up though. Maybe coloring in the text, adding symbols/borders and bolding things could help with that. Right now it's a bit flat. The spaces above and below the text box could also be filled up with images and help make your sig look more 'full' or complete.




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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby cottagecore » Mon May 11, 2020 4:13 pm

I like it,, cute and simple..
Maybe if it had more Lion King things related that would be nice
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby ANETRA » Mon May 11, 2020 4:28 pm

OK it's adorable?? I love the image, definitely a great one considering the hard times everyone's going through. It definitely gives off a happy, friendly vibe! Also hey there fellow Midzy :)

The pink color of the font is a teeny bit hard on my eyes but I also have a multitude of eye-related problems, so it may just be me haha. I also think that the text is a bit dense (as in there's a lot of it) so it may be hard to find info if someone's looking for somethign specific. Maybe breaking it up into chunks (background info, art, trade info, etc. from what I saw) may help. But I honestly love it how it is right now!
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby glitter » Wed May 13, 2020 11:22 am

i like the formatting of your signature! the colors are really soft and go well together. i like how the two photos continue your quote - very creative! the microphone png looks nice where you put it and its obvious you've put a lot of thought/time into this.

honestly there's nothing bad i can really say. i've seen your sig around for a while now and every time i just think its pretty.
if anything i'ld bring the lines/image on the far right to the left so that the text would be more in centre/balanced but thats just my taste.
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby bark » Wed May 13, 2020 11:24 am

Very well done! You did a great job formatting your sig and adding extras in it to fit in the little box. It's simple yet clean. Great work!


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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby glitter » Wed May 13, 2020 11:27 am

your layout is really nice. it is very creative. good job
my one complaint would be that there's a lot going on and is a bit overwhelming

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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby XxanimewolfgirluwuxX » Wed May 13, 2020 11:32 am

I think that you could use another color for the text that would better match your signature. I also thought that the beehive didn't quite fit. Otherwise, it's a wonderful signature!
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Re: Signature Criticism! [v.1]

Postby Aseria Greane » Thu May 14, 2020 3:19 pm

Your sig is balanced between type and images, although the text doesn't hold as much weight as the images do. This could be due to the length of centered text in a line, or the color. Your color palette is very nice with the red and the related candle and right side text, it looks really nice! The text on the left side might need to be adjusted to be a bit higher, if you want everything to be lined up, as your shop link sticks out from everything else. Love the theme btw
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