Rate The Character Above You V. 5

[QuiteDainty]

9/10
She reminds of a scene dog with the hair who decided to cut it XD No, but seriously it's a lovely character! The colors and fur length work well together, the only complain being the collar. It doesn't really fit her.


Dainty
Art by trollishthetroll on CS

[☼ ℓ ʋ м σ s]

9/10
What a cute little cinnamonroll! <33 his colors are lovely and I love deer, as I don't see them too often. The only thing that is throwing me off is the blue star, I feel like it doesn't really flow with the rest of the design. The star is cute, it's just the color; I'd suggest either making it orange like the hooves and the insides of the ears, making the ears and hooves the same shade of blue, or making the eyes blue. Overall, really neat character!

How about my precious little S'more child, Coquina? <3

Everything by me.

Her backstory is a bit long ^^; if you don't want to read it, just rate her design.
Coquina is type of rock composed of seashells, hence her pattern and her collar

Coquina was a kittypet for some time and she lived with two very nice housefolk. Though she was quite bored most of the time, she never dared to step outside, for she lived in a city unlike others. A large government of cats who called themselves the Mis-aggregation, controlled the alleyways and the streets, and treated stray or wondering cats as slaves, though they didn't bother the humans or the kittypets who stayed inside. However, Coquina was always curious about what it was like out there. Coquina's good friend, Nox-a stray snowshoe Siamese cat, who was an associate of another group of cats called The Division- always came to visit her, but they only talked through one of the glass windows. Eventually, Coquina succumbed to her curious nature, and stepped outside from the safety of her home. The air was so fresh, and the grass felt wonderful under her paws! She couldn't help but linger outside a bit longer. A few moments after, she payed dearly for her decision. She was attacked by a few members of the Misaggregation, held against her will and forced into slavery.
Nox traveled to her house the next day, only to find she had disappeared. Coquina had never left her home, so Nox immediately knew something was wrong. He searched for her all over, but he couldn't find her anywhere. Disappointed and worried, Nox went back to his own correlation, The Division. Some days later, he agreed to work undercover in the Misaggregation, as a spy. He unexpectedly crossed paths with Coquina there, having no clue she had been captured. Coquina looked frail and week, her ribs were showing beneath her pelt and her usually enthusiastic blue eyes were filled with scorn; she didn't look like her usual self at all. This is because Coquina had never learned to properly hunt, and the Misaggregation regularly took half, or all of the prey she managed to catch. She was starving and losing strength. Nox couldn't bare to see her like this, and he promised her he would free her one day. There's a lot more to the story, but I'll just skip on ahead-
Nox eventually gets Coquina out of the dreaded place, where he helps her seek refuge in the sewers where his camp was hiden. Coquina was accepted into The Division; there she is taught how to fight and how to hunt, and becomes a very respected member of the correlation. Some time afterward, Coquina is wondering through the sewers, and she catches a highly respected, and ranked she-cat named Jupiter, from the Misaggregation, snooping around to gather information for her group. Coquina tackles her aftershocks refuses to leave, and the two cats tussle. During the fight, both she-cats fall over the edge of the sewer, into the water. Jupiter tears Coquina's collar off while they are struggling under water, and it floats to the surface. A while after, both Coquina and Jupiter drown. Nox is devastated as he spots her collar, but not her. The cats of The Division drag Jupiter's body out of the water, but Coquina's is no where to be found. A few days later, Coquina's body is found further up the sewers, and a proper vigil is held for her.

[kittykore]

10/10 YES YES YES.




Mimi? She just got her revamp by this flawless person ahh!

[QuiteDainty]

10/10
This reminds me of a darker Lucky Cat. Still love it of course! No flaws really, all the colors work well and it's realistic as a cat.


Dainty
Art by trollishthetroll on CS

[amaoretto]

[strike]10/10
I've always loved this character, the colours go well together and it's just a cute character


my kalon, marlow?
the blue strip on his tail is called a shine, it's part of the species
species by Glow -- design by Alphaistic

[BeaztVibe]

10/10 I love the colors and the spotting on it <3

This Emojaw? Need opinions on both the species and the design please <3 Art/design/species are mine


Description of the species.
They represent and feed off of different aspects of emotion. Love, sadness, greed, sins, ect. They can harness these elements and use them for powers, but they always portray the emotion they represent in some way. The glass like marking on their back shows a hint as to what emotion they represent. happier ones have happy shapes, while more sinister ones have more jagged and uncomfortable shapes. If they feed off of evil emotions, it doesn't make them evil, and if they feed off of good emotions it doesn't make them good. Females and males look almost exactly the same. They are a mixture of Dragon, Kangaroo, raptor, bat, and wolf. As well as some other unknown species, so mutations are to be expected. Their tails are usually slender and not very fluffy, because they use them to wrap around each other in affectionate manors as well as using as whip like weapons. Their hair always covers their eyes mainly because its thought that either most of them don't have any, or the ones that do have really beady eyes that are both cute and creepy. They are also thought to die if the gem like glass on their back cracks because that is where they store their food and energy to be used to make other more emotion based weapons. Some focus on Psychological warfare while others can make tangible weapons form their stored food.They use their bat like ears like a honing beacon. They use sonar to get around as well as to sense where they can absorb their next meal using the smaller ears. The more negative emotions have droopier hair, while the more upbeat and happy ones have more up hair. The lay eggs and males or females can carry the child around in a pouch. The eggs are the size of a new born Kangaroo baby at first, but grow big enough to be nested after a few weeks. Babies feed off of care and affection in order to hatch, and the emotion they feed off of is randomized based on the parents. 2 negative emotinoed parents give off a negative emotion child, and vise versa. Mixing the two however has a slight chance of hatching a sin feeder.

[steamplonk]

10/10. just. wow.


design by hoot

[leg]

10/10 !! the design is so cute and the colours go so well together. it feels really nice and not an eye burner too. i love the markings they have, it all goes really well together.

hemp, art and design by me. bit of a wip, but the background behind them rn is something along the lines of a creature that guides others to the realm of the living or the dead if they're persistent in staying on the 'bridge' between both, hence the part of the compass on the bottom right of their cloak. they usually help younger souls along the bridge as the other caretakers of the beings resistant usually have a more frightening appearance.

[☼ ℓ ʋ м σ s]

10|10
Wow. This character of yours is just one of a kind! It's so unique in every way and the story behind it is fascinating.

How about my precious little S'more child, Coquina? <3

Everything by me.

Her backstory is a bit long ^^; if you don't want to read it, just rate her design.
Coquina is type of rock composed of seashells, hence her pattern and her collar

Coquina was a kittypet for some time and she lived with two very nice housefolk. Though she was quite bored most of the time, she never dared to step outside, for she lived in a city unlike others. A large government of cats who called themselves the Mis-aggregation, controlled the alleyways and the streets, and treated stray or wondering cats as slaves, though they didn't bother the humans or the kittypets who stayed inside. However, Coquina was always curious about what it was like out there. Coquina's good friend, Nox-a stray snowshoe Siamese cat, who was an associate of another group of cats called The Division- always came to visit her, but they only talked through one of the glass windows. Eventually, Coquina succumbed to her curious nature, and stepped outside from the safety of her home. The air was so fresh, and the grass felt wonderful under her paws! She couldn't help but linger outside a bit longer. A few moments after, she payed dearly for her decision. She was attacked by a few members of the Misaggregation, held against her will and forced into slavery.
Nox traveled to her house the next day, only to find she had disappeared. Coquina had never left her home, so Nox immediately knew something was wrong. He searched for her all over, but he couldn't find her anywhere. Disappointed and worried, Nox went back to his own correlation, The Division. Some days later, he agreed to work undercover in the Misaggregation, as a spy. He unexpectedly crossed paths with Coquina there, having no clue she had been captured. Coquina looked frail and week, her ribs were showing beneath her pelt and her usually enthusiastic blue eyes were filled with scorn; she didn't look like her usual self at all. This is because Coquina had never learned to properly hunt, and the Misaggregation regularly took half, or all of the prey she managed to catch. She was starving and losing strength. Nox couldn't bare to see her like this, and he promised her he would free her one day. There's a lot more to the story, but I'll just skip on ahead-
Nox eventually gets Coquina out of the dreaded place, where he helps her seek refuge in the sewers where his camp was hiden. Coquina was accepted into The Division; there she is taught how to fight and how to hunt, and becomes a very respected member of the correlation. Some time afterward, Coquina is wondering through the sewers, and she catches a highly respected, and ranked she-cat named Jupiter, from the Misaggregation, snooping around to gather information for her group. Coquina tackles her aftershocks refuses to leave, and the two cats tussle. During the fight, both she-cats fall over the edge of the sewer, into the water. Jupiter tears Coquina's collar off while they are struggling under water, and it floats to the surface. A while after, both Coquina and Jupiter drown. Nox is devastated as he spots her collar, but not her. The cats of The Division drag Jupiter's body out of the water, but Coquina's is no where to be found. A few days later, Coquina's body is found further up the sewers, and a proper vigil is held for her.

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[ALittleLoony]

@ ~Lazy Lobbyist~ That's super sweet of you, thank you dear. ;u;
10/10 Super cute! I absolutely love the sea-shell theme, it goes perfectly with her design and really makes her stand out from other cats. The story is nice as well. ^^


(I apologize in advance for the huge image and block of text ;u;)
This is an unnamed Nouloux male, the first of an original species I'm planning on turning into adoptables. If you don't want to read the species info please just rate the design. <3

Nouloux are the time-capsules of Lunaryk, a mere echo of what the world once was. They are the only known survivors of the prehistoric era; large, raptor-like creatures with a full coat of feathers to keep warm in their colder, mountainous climate. Omnivorous, nocturnal and bear-like in behavior, they spend most of their time hidden in the great caves within the mountains. The females, during nesting season, go even deeper into the darkness to rear their young. The young are born white; a blank canvas from which they paint their story. Every few years these creatures go out into the forest to molt (they look hideous while doing so), and with every molt they gain their markings and colors until reaching full maturity. The events of their life and the characteristics that make them unique become etched in their plumage; one learned in Nouloux culture can easily tell the sort of character they are just by looking at the colors and patterns that have formed over decades.
Their bioluminescent crown feathers are present in both male and female, to help them attract insects while in the caves (among other uses). The iridescent wings and glowing saddle feathers are only present in the males, naturally for courtship. These creatures are weary and shy towards the outside world, but within their tight-knit family groups they are intelligent, gentle, showy puff-balls. If an outsider manages to befriend a Nouloux they are stuck with a very affectionate, friendly little (well, sort of big) mythical dinosaur. <3
All by me. Please don't steal. ;u;