I REALLY like the design <3
the colors don't seriously clash, and the colors are beautiful!!
My only concern is that there is a lot going on with the face. Like what I sorta mean is the eyes, teeth, tongue etc. just a tad overwhleming!
BUT overall the design is lovely! (BTW I read the notes!! Fantastic character notes!)
9.5/10!

Mordecai?Made by Graham C:
Mordecai is half immoral, he can get killed through wounds and such, BUT he can live without food,sleep,or oxygen.
Some notes for anyone to read if you want a little explanation on how goofy he looks xD
Born and escapee from Hell, Satan was his creator. He was supposed to rule and terrorize Earth, but something about him, nobody knows why, but he had kindness....
After escaping from the mere luck he had, he settled down on Earth. Where was he after he escaped you asked? Well He was in ancient Rome. Still as a pup, he traveled all over. BUT right when he went looking around in Athens, he got kidnaped from the Romans. He woke up in the coliseum. He had to face and kill a lion, for the Roman's pleasure.Although the lion put up a good battle, by ripping his tail off, Mordecai was reluctant to kill the beast.He did, After that, he was known famously as being a Roman gladiator with no mercy. His new persona made him very well known, and got him a one way ticket to being a royal guard for the King himself. After several kings passing, a war started in Rome. He faced battle, and made it out barely alive. The current king passed away.... Mordecai, being very good in battle was promoted to king. He had everything... but he really felt he didn't. He wanted someone to love.. A few days passing, the guards reported an intruder coming into the palace. Mordecai was alerted to this, and told them to throw whoever it was in the dungeon. Later that night, in curiosity- he snuck down to see who it was. It was a beautiful giant dog. It was
Hyakutake. She wasn't interested in him at first, but they kinda grew onto each other after he gave her food, and a pillow to lay on. She felt this was a sign of peace, and became a little bit more interested. They fell in love, and decided to ditch Rome. It had nothing in store for them, and they wanted to see the world. Hyakutake and Mordecai crafted a small boat to sail to wherever. They landed on the coast of modern day California. Staying there for a very long time until settlers came and built upon the land. They stayed in the city and built a small house in the suburbs. They had a son together, which is
Faye.
OH the tail part- let me explain. When they were in the dungeon, mordecai mentioned why he had no tail. Hyakutake saw this, and wished upon some star. Somehow the wish she asked for came true, and in whatever way a mushroom grew on his tail, it's pretty odd, but Mordecai and Hyakutake laugh about it now.