Acornflight - 2|10. Acorn is not a right name of a light golden brown cat. An acorn is a dark and light brown mix. And how did he earn "flight"? Can he go swiftly, jump widely and high? I suggest "foot" instead of "flight", you explained he is quick on his paws.
Bluecloud - 9|10. The only error here is clouds only get dark gray when a storm is coming, but that isn't common usually. Bluepelt would be more suggestive.
My Cats;;
Crowfoot - Jet black tom with dark green eyes. He's swift when running, and likes to hunt.
Spottedfur - A tan she-cat with black spots all over her body. She has icy blue eyes, and is quick at killing and rabbits.