Itty Bitty Baby Adopts-Dissusion and Suggestions

[asteraceae]

half an hour later this is what I came up with:

any thoughts, critique?

This is adorbs, in a dragon-y way cx. I would suggest making the lines cleaner, I don't know how to describe it exactly thou . . .

[jpmouse]

half an hour later this is what I came up with:

any thoughts, critique?

Omg that's amazing!!! I love it!! Just a little critique the left hand looks a little bit awkward other than that it looks so amazing!!

[QuIT;]

This is adorbs, in a dragon-y way cx. I would suggest making the lines cleaner, I don't know how to describe it exactly thou . . .

not sure how to do that
edit: it might look better once its colored?:

Omg that's amazing!!! I love it!! Just a little critique the left hand looks a little bit awkward other than that it looks so amazing!!

does this look better?

[jpmouse]

This is adorbs, in a dragon-y way cx. I would suggest making the lines cleaner, I don't know how to describe it exactly thou . . .

not sure how to do that
edit: it might look better once its colored?:

Omg that's amazing!!! I love it!! Just a little critique the left hand looks a little bit awkward other than that it looks so amazing!!

does this look better?

Its adorable! (Sorry I realllly love dragons xD)

[asteraceae]

This is adorbs, in a dragon-y way cx. I would suggest making the lines cleaner, I don't know how to describe it exactly thou . . .

not sure how to do that
edit: it might look better once its colored?:

Omg that's amazing!!! I love it!! Just a little critique the left hand looks a little bit awkward other than that it looks so amazing!!

does this look better?

The colored version looks very good. May I edit the lineart and show you what I mean by making the lines cleaner? It will still be yours though.

Ughh. . . finally I'm starting the envelope, it's hard to do, I included the chinese monkey symbol on the corner which I literally looked up on the internet.

[QuIT;]

This is adorbs, in a dragon-y way cx. I would suggest making the lines cleaner, I don't know how to describe it exactly thou . . .

not sure how to do that
edit: it might look better once its colored?:

Omg that's amazing!!! I love it!! Just a little critique the left hand looks a little bit awkward other than that it looks so amazing!!

does this look better?

The colored version looks very good. May I edit the lineart and show you what I mean by making the lines cleaner? It will still be yours though.

Ughh. . . finally I'm starting the envelope, it's hard to do, I included the chinese monkey symbol on the corner which I literally looked up on the internet.

go ahead!

[tokyogrxce]

EVERYTHING ON MY THING IS FREE ONLY ONE RARE PER PERSON I AM RANDOMLY CHOSING PEOPLE TO GIVE VR TO IM QUITTING SO PLEASE NO DONATIONS! PLEASE SEND MESSAGE TO SO I KNOW YOUR A NICE PERSON IF I FELL YOUR NOT SAYING NICE THAINGS IN THE CHAT THEN I MAY DCLINE SO PLEASE SEND NICE MESSAGE I ALSO WANT GOOD CARE OF THESE PETS PLEASE THANKS U FOR READING! IF THEY SAY INDIRAS PET PLEASE DO NOT TAKE THEM!

[jpmouse]

Does this make sense for the Chinese new year event?
I'll probably reword some stuff to make it sound better and stuff though xD

Chinese New Year Event!
Ends 3/1/16
This event is pretty simple, you'll get 1 red envelope for free, them you'll have to use Lb for the rest!
So the red envelopes cost 10 Lb each, and you will "put" the money in the envelope them give it to a person!
I want to give someone a red envelope
Your Username:
The Person your giving it to:
A friendly Note: (optional)

The point of giving out the envelopes is that you have a 50% chance of gaining a pet if you send one to a user.
The person who sent the most red envelopes gets a prize!
The point of receiving one if that you get 5 Lb!
You can also buy limited edition items with the envelopes you've received from Other people.

[QuIT;]

Does this make sense for the Chinese new year event?
I'll probably reword some stuff to make it sound better and stuff though xD

Chinese New Year Event!
Ends 3/1/16
This event is pretty simple, you'll get 1 red envolpe for free, them you'll have to use Lb for the rest!
So the red enveolpes cost 10 Lb each, and you will "put" the money in the envolpe them give it to a person!
I want to give someone a red envolpe
Your Username:
The Person your giving it to:
A freindly Note: (optional)

The point of giving out the envopes is that you have a 50% chance of gaining a pet if you send one to a user.
The person who sent the most red envopes gets a prize!
The point of receving one if that you get 5 Lb!
You can also buy limited edition items with the envolpes you've recived from Other people.

this would be super cool!

[jpmouse]

Does this make sense for the Chinese new year event?
I'll probably reword some stuff to make it sound better and stuff though xD

Chinese New Year Event!
Ends 3/1/16
This event is pretty simple, you'll get 1 red envelope for free, them you'll have to use Lb for the rest!
So the red envelopes cost 10 Lb each, and you will "put" the money in the envelope them give it to a person!
I want to give someone a red envelope
Your Username:
The Person your giving it to:
A friendly Note: (optional)

The point of giving out the envelopes is that you have a 50% chance of gaining a pet if you send one to a user.
The person who sent the most red envelopes gets a prize!
The point of receiving one if that you get 5 Lb!
You can also buy limited edition items with the envelopes you've received from Other people.

this would be super cool!

Okay! fixing the typos atm xD