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Dancing $1 bill by emersonx

Artist emersonx [gallery]
Time spent 21 minutes
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Dancing $1 bill

Postby emersonx » Thu Dec 05, 2013 11:39 am

*sigh*I always imagine things in my head, but they never turn out what I want them to be.... Please give me tips in the reply section :) And thanks to the lovely suggestions by: inoritena and :Froggi You both are now able to color in this drawing!!!
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Re: Dancing $1 bill

Postby birdy-boots » Thu Dec 05, 2013 2:20 pm

It's cute ^w^
Here's a few pointers since you asked~
  • Make the focus of the image a little bigger. I think it would be more interesting if the dollar was bigger and filled more space.
  • Maybe make the background a different color? Something that would contrast with the green. A warm color like orange or pink would work.
  • Add action lines where the dollar curves outward. Having all of those motion lines makes it a bit confusing to look at when you just see the thumbnail image. Also if you change the background color you could make the motion lines black instead so you can see them more easily.
I hope that helped c:
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Re: Dancing $1 bill

Postby ethernautics » Thu Dec 05, 2013 6:30 pm

It's very cool c:
I agree with what inoritena said, make it a bit bigger! ^-^
also, it would have more association with viewers if it were a bit more personalized.
accessories like sunglasses, scarves, and other things would work well.
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