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There's Violence Out Tonight by p-ond

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Time spent 5 hours, 7 minutes
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There's Violence Out Tonight

Postby p-ond » Sat Sep 14, 2013 9:44 am

'But as his fingers strike her blouse
All the words that he espoused
Lie deftly scattered on the ground amidst
the buttons he's torn open.'


This is Pangie, my first WME, who I haven't drawn in literally months omf it feels like years.
So, this piece was originally meant to feature Gwyn, my newest equid, and for the most part the inspiration for the piece was Little Comet's 'Violence Out Tonight'. But Gwyn's colours just weren't working with the background, and it looked horrid. So the title and verse extract don't really fit with the image anymore. Oh well; I'm still quite proud of the result c:

It's not often that I make backgrounds, really, but this wan was very relaxing to make- plus, I've had a scene like this in my head for a while, so it was good to finally get it out. I'd love some feeback on the background! I know that I didn't use much contrast in this, but I'd love to know what else there is to say about it, and please do feel free to criticise it with some constructive comments :D

Perspective is off too, ugh :<.

I hope you guys enjoy it!
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Re: There's Violence Out Tonight

Postby rottenmutt » Sat Sep 14, 2013 9:48 am

I adore this.;u;<3333
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Re: There's Violence Out Tonight

Postby -wild- » Sat Sep 14, 2013 9:57 am

Cookie this is wonderful <3<3
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Re: There's Violence Out Tonight

Postby fantasy girl » Sat Sep 14, 2013 10:54 am

This is really impressive Cookie, and I can see you're trying out a new style aswell 8D
And it's really good looking <3 { Only crit I can give, is that Pangie can give the impression of being rather thin with the 'bumps' in the lineart you have near/around her bum. Other than that, nothing really... }

And good work on the background aswell! It really does Pangie blend in, but not dissapear. So both bg and the object compliments eachothers really well ^-^
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Re: There's Violence Out Tonight

Postby p-ond » Sun Sep 15, 2013 6:10 am

S y k e s wrote:I adore this.;u;<3333

Thank you!
wildhorse027 wrote:Cookie this is wonderful <3<3

Thank you so much <3
fantasy girl wrote:
This is really impressive Cookie, and I can see you're trying out a new style aswell 8D
And it's really good looking <3 { Only crit I can give, is that Pangie can give the impression of being rather thin with the 'bumps' in the lineart you have near/around her bum. Other than that, nothing really... }

And good work on the background aswell! It really does Pangie blend in, but not dissapear. So both bg and the object compliments eachothers really well ^-^

Thank you so much! Mmm, yeah, I'm loving this style :D
Funnily enough, I was trying to make her skinnier (because I was thinking of Gwyn the entire time-- hence all the ribs) But that bum bit wasn't actually intentional xD
Thanks for that pointer! I'll be sure to check a ref properly next time c:
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Re: There's Violence Out Tonight

Postby Penultima » Sun Sep 15, 2013 6:25 am

I love this! Especially the background and pose of the equid!

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