Destinyclan ‣ discussion

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Re: Destinyclan ‣ discussion

Postby SilentMelody » Sun May 30, 2021 6:20 am

    @nate I'm really sorry to hear that, but it was fun roleplaying with you! I'll remove your cats from the allegiances, but you're always welcome to return if you ever want :)
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Re: Destinyclan ‣ LIGHTWHISKER

Postby -cosmixtea » Mon May 31, 2021 1:32 am

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    Gender; male
    Age; 18 moons
    Rank; Warrior
    Sexuality; hetero

    Crush; Silentpaw
    Parents; Doeleap (mother) Creme(kittypet) (father)
    Siblings; Lily and Dawnpaw
    Friends; Freshbreath, Brightcloud and Mothmouth
    Enemies; Creme(even tho he’s dead he still hates his father)

    Appearance; a lean, slim, and small cream mackerel tabby tom with white tips and thin pale green eyes with a slightly bushy tail and long whiskers

    Prophecy; prophecy of lies - "the true heart of a warrior is revealed throughout the light of day". Lightwhisker has the ability to tell if cats who are very close to him are lying or not.

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    Personality; Lightwhisker is an eager, energetic young warrior who loves to try new things. He was always getting himself in trouble as a kit, and he loved to explore. He is very adventurous and always somehow has an optimistic attitude, making sure that he creates a soft, happy environment. He uses his power for not-very-serious things, although he knows he should learn to use it properly.

    History; He was born as Wild to Doeleap and Creme, along with his sisters Lily and Dawn. He was always the most adventurous, and was often finding himself in some sort of trouble. When his mother died, Creme took them to Destinyclan, trying to make a new life for his abandoned kits. Only Wild and Dawn decided to go, but Lily said she would rather be a rouge than join a clan. So they joined Destinyclan, and when they were apprenticed, everyone had a uneasy feeling about them. They gained their trust, and continued working their hardest in their training. He then received a vision, and found out that he had a prophecy! Shortly before their warrior’s assessment, Dawnpaw was scooped up by an owl trying to hunt it’s chick, and she was never seen again. Although Lightpaw was devastated, he made sure that he will always be cheerful, not to be down in spirits, because he knew that this would just keep him in his own walls of depression. He climbed these walls and found a way to pass his warrior’s assessment. He didn’t think much of his prophecy, since he didn’t know what it meant, until he went to visit his father in Twolegplace. He read his heart clearly, and saw his true intentions of getting rid of his annoying kits, and found out that Doeleap and died, not from disease, but from her own mate! He became furious and pounced on his father. He slashed open Creme’s neck, which killed him because of blood loss. He now knows that his power is very useful and truth-bearing, and he will use it for everything he can.

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Re: Destinyclan ‣ discussion

Postby Queen of flames » Mon May 31, 2021 3:14 am

@Dani
Uh sorry, but I don't think having a crush on someone's character needs their permission at all? Being mates or family with someone needs the player's permission thought, but not crush...
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Re: Destinyclan ‣ discussion

Postby Queen of flames » Mon May 31, 2021 4:28 am

DaniCalifornia wrote:
    @Queen of flames well, you might not mind it, but i know quite a few people that could get bothered and even uncomfortable with it. it doesn't hurt to be considerate, does it? :)


Asking, can you have your cat being crush on someone is fine, but that's sure is the first time to me that just having a crush on someone else character is that big matter...especially when it's so easy to ignore...or stay as one-sided...
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Re: Destinyclan ‣ discussion

Postby Animals65 » Mon May 31, 2021 5:39 am

@Dani Actually Queen is right. You don't need permission for crushes/romance. Mates and family are what you really need permission for. That's just how things work and it has been working this way for as long as I can remember. Throughout all the 9 years I've been rping on CS, I have never seen anyone make a rule saying that you need permission for crushes. I can confirm that there isn't a rule for this rp that says you'd need permission for crushes. It doesn't hurt to be considerate yes, but it's okay to not have to worry about it all the time. :)

However Dani is correct that Lightwhisker is more or less overpowered. He doesn't have any flaws and to just know the truth then and there is pretty much counterproductive to the plot. But maybe SilentMelody will allow it with a few suggestions to make it balanced, but until then let's just wait and see what she decides! <3
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Re: Destinyclan ‣ discussion

Postby SilentMelody » Mon May 31, 2021 6:18 am

    @9livesliz Unfortunately, like the others pointed out I'll have to be a little picky with your form! Do you mind adding some drawbacks or weaknesses to the prophecy? It's a bit overpowered to be able to see the truth from everyone all the time. As for the history, you've almost got it correct! The cats actually receive their prophecy when they first become apprentices, not when they become warriors, so they have the chance to train and control their prophecy. I haven't figured out where a Twolegplace would fit into the territory, but I believe there are some other cats that had kittypet parents or used to be kittypets?

    I think the one-sided crush on Silentpaw is okay and adds a bit of drama. Plus, it's already pretty much up to the other roleplayers as to how they want their romance to go considering it kinda involves Cedarsight, Mothmouth, and Silentpaw at the moment c: But of course, we can see what they have to say about it!
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Re: Destinyclan ‣ discussion

Postby kopfkino » Mon May 31, 2021 7:12 am

the cedar x moth x silent group is just that irresistible LOL

sorry for the lack of reply. I wrote something up recently but I think the post got eaten or didn't save or something because I can't find a post for a while back. Last few weeks have been super hectic, helping bf move across the country for a job, so I'm super behind on replies everywhere. Someone @ me aggressively to post tonight or tomorrow :')
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Re: Destinyclan ‣ discussion

Postby -cosmixtea » Tue Jun 01, 2021 3:05 am

SilentMelody wrote:
    @9livesliz Unfortunately, like the others pointed out I'll have to be a little picky with your form! Do you mind adding some drawbacks or weaknesses to the prophecy? It's a bit overpowered to be able to see the truth from everyone all the time. As for the history, you've almost got it correct! The cats actually receive their prophecy when they first become apprentices, not when they become warriors, so they have the chance to train and control their prophecy. I haven't figured out where a Twolegplace would fit into the territory, but I believe there are some other cats that had kittypet parents or used to be kittypets?

    I think the one-sided crush on Silentpaw is okay and adds a bit of drama. Plus, it's already pretty much up to the other roleplayers as to how they want their romance to go considering it kinda involves Cedarsight, Mothmouth, and Silentpaw at the moment c: But of course, we can see what they have to say about it!


Alright, he can only see if a cat is lying to him when he particularly asks, and only with people he is very close with, like his best friends. Sorry for the inconvenience :? And I am so exited for this role play! It seems really cool!
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Re: Destinyclan ‣ discussion

Postby SilentMelody » Tue Jun 01, 2021 6:26 am

    @9livesliz That works for me! Lightwhisker will be accepted once his form has been edited to include that, just so there's always a reference for what his prophecy specifically is c:
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Re: Destinyclan ‣ discussion

Postby -cosmixtea » Tue Jun 01, 2021 6:33 am

SilentMelody wrote:
    @9livesliz That works for me! Lightwhisker will be accepted once his form has been edited to include that, just so there's always a reference for what his prophecy specifically is c:

I have done that, and I can’t wait to rp! <33
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