𝕴𝖙 𝕯𝖔𝖊𝖘𝖓'𝖙 𝕰𝖓𝖉 𝕳𝖊𝖗𝖊 [ Discussion ]

[`silver]

@hxenir No worries, you don’t have to worry too much about posting if you’re not feeling well. D: Get better soon! I’m okay with waiting or continuing. Whatever everyone else wants to do.

[kalo.]

@hxenir no worries! hope you feel better and take your time!
I’m okay with waiting as I’ll be a little busy tomorrow

[FluffyBirdie]

Hey that's fine! You can't help getting sick sometimes, so don't feel bad about it and focus on getting better c:

[☪ℓυηαя∂яσρ☪]

Synopsis of the story:
The Hunt is a literary fiction thriller depicting a fugitive running for their life. And also the story of the tracker that is hunting them down. The story is told with alternating perspectives for each chapter, and the main characters are referred to with genderless pronouns.

[hxenir]

Thank you guys for all the well wishes! I'm working on my post now, it should be up in the next hour-ish.

[FluffyBirdie]

@lunar oh that sounds cool, I've read similar stories about fugitives and those were always fun. Though I've never seen a book that referred to both characters genderlessly!
Are you looking for feedback on the grammar/storyline/etc?

And also Greyson is so sweet, I love his interaction with Jackson haha. He'd make for quite a good leader!

[hxenir]

@fluffybirdie Tysm! That means a lot, I can't wait for Kiren and Gray to meet! I'm excited for the group to get together!

[☪ℓυηαя∂яσρ☪]

Any feedback at all at this point, though I'd prefer critique on flow, pacing, what works, what didn't work, that sort of thing. Plot and characters, improvements and things to remove. If you are interested in reading it in its entirety, please PM me.
Also, Riki is in doggie heaven. Everyone's gonna come back to see Riki just rubbing jackal's belly and nuzzling up to the wolf. Not gonna do wonders for their intimidation facade.

[kalo.]

I'll be working on a post asap! I was roped into family game night haha.

bold of you to assume that dog [the final name for his jackal] would
allow belly rubs by anyone other than Jackson. a tough mutt smh

[☪ℓυηαя∂яσρ☪]

I just put jackal there instead of wolf because i didnt feel like looking up the wolfs name hehe