Jackaboy wrote:Oooooof.
I am getting so heartbroken for Lily! I read it and actually felt her anger, whoo mamas attached to her baby.
My chest hurt, and stomach. I guess because Iβve played her so much with different personalities I have a hard time not feeling her emotions lol.
Like I said I donβt identify with her erratic behaviors but I love her so much
Anyways.. maybe there should be a prophecy for whatβs about to come.. you know, with the whole band of baddies?
Ahhh I feel so bad, my chest hurt writing it. I would never βcheatβ on someone like that, but I feel like Batfang gets confused by his emotions because heβs not used to them controlling him, as this whole thing with being reunited with an old friend/flame of his is just what he needs to come out of his shell.
Poppycorn222 wrote:-snip-
I personally dont think there needs to be a prophecy for that whole thing, it would be more suspenseful without a prophecy so the clan would only hear about it through rumors from loners or strays
I agree! I feel like it would bring more to the rp if the clan didnβt know about it ahead of time c:
Animals65 wrote:I also have to call it quits for tonight! Its 10:12 PM where I live and I have to go to yoga in the morning and, depending on how I feel, I might take my new dog (who Ive had since late September of last year) out for a car ride to get a hamburger from a fast food restaurant! Ill be back afterwards! <3
Haha me too. I honestly should have gone to sleep much earlier, but I couldnβt resist replying tonight. Have fun though! That sounds awesome
mastergirl7 wrote:Hello, I'm back from the dead! <3
Oof Lilly I feel so bad for her, I really just want to make Dreampaw be really nice and maybe become friends with her because I love Lilly. ^w^
Also @poppy that art is so cute! I love this new ship but again I feel bad for Lilly. <3
Welcome back!! I do too honestly, but I think the character development on both sides could be good/interesting to watch c:
Jackaboy wrote:(You wanna year it though? I donβt want it on the front page or anything but this is the first prophecy Iβve ever written and I want yβall to critique it for future Roleplays)
When flowers blossom on flightless wings
In secret they love but with but danger they bring
A pond flower will grow with rage and despair
And will bring chaos to all that reign untrue.
Lilyβs tear brings along the wrath
And band of Rouges will follow her path
To the clan of New have once began to unfold
Now you must follow rules of gold
It sounds pretty good, but you may want to take Lilyβs name out of there, just because from what Iβve seen, prophecies are a bit more vague and require in depth thinking to figure out the meaning, rather than just having it right there c: