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[Transkitty]

Pegasus: Rosepetal was a tortie and Runningwind was a solid black tom!

[she's-sato]

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kit name; doekit｜ age; 36 moons
apprentice name; doepaw ｜ gender; female
warrior name; doeflight ｜ sexuality; homosexual
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mate; none｜ parents; deceased
crush; tba ｜ siblings; alive, not present
apprentice; tba ｜ kits; none
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strength; ■■■□□ intelligence; ■■□□□ agility; ■■■■□
endurance; ■■■■□ stealth; ■■■□□ speed ■■■■□
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Doeflight is a beautiful, lean she-cat with amber colored fur and beautiful emerald green eyes. She has large round ears and a long black-tipped tail. She has faint white flecks on her chest.
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Doeflight is a lively, comedic, and cheerful female. Often bringing light to the lives of the felines around her. The optimistic female is often flirting with the she-cats around camp when she isn't working. She tries her best to benefit her clan and will die for her clanmates. However, she can be a bit of a show-off and tends to jeopardize hunts and missions for the sake of proving her self worth. She doesn't mean to cause any harm as she wants nothing more than to benefit her clan, but her desire to impress her clan often backfires on her. She can be stubborn and immature as well. When she gets an idea, it's difficult to shake tha thought out of her head. She will do whatever she feels is right, even if there are consequences for her actions.

[she's-sato]

--{res just in case. i copy and past these forms, so let me know if there's an issue!

[pegasusfeathers]

Got my form up for Emberpaw, it's not pretty, but I'm doing everything from mobile cause my laptop died. C': I have her sister available for someone else to play, you can pick whatever name and personality you like. Her appearance has to fit along with her parents' genetics; I have decent knowledge on cat color genetics so if you have an idea but you aren't sure I can help c: their father was brown tabby and white (can carry the tabby gene, solid black, and white spotting gene which can go with any color), and their mother was a tortoiseshell (carries ginger and black). My recommendation would be a tortie, solid black, solid ginger or torbie, with or without white patches.

Transkitty since their mother carries ginger (which is dominant to any other color and likely unless he got recessive genes of the same color from both parents) I'm gonna use a ginger tabby for Shatterclaw's bro but I'm really uncertain on what suffix to use. I'm thinking Thornheart (I plan on him having very strong opinions, so 'heart' can fit), Thornfoot, Thornstep, Thornfeather, Thornflight (all to do with being fast/light on his feet, because I imagine he'll be an excellent hunter given the fact that his coat blends in very well with the golden grasses, and he probably capitalized on that advantage) what do you guys think? Any other suggestions?

I'd like to have one or two former apprentices for Thorn, and possibly someone to have been the queen that nursed Emberpaw and her sister. Also both my characters will be open to have established friendships and whatnot, and anyone is free to use the cats I made up in Emberpaw's history for pretty much any reason (Seedwillow, Thicketwing, Floodwhisker, and the unnamed cats in the patrol that got attacked. Can be mentors, relatives, past mates, etc. It would be cool for other cats to have things in common with Emberpaw by being close to the same cats. Two characters could even claim to be in that patrol.)

One last thing, what's the current season? Mostly so I can do the math and figure out when my characters were born lol.

[AtlasHyperion]

'Tis fine, pegasus. Huskee, I love the form! I'm so sorry I've disappeared off the face of the earth, but I'm on vacation right now so I've been busy (irony, yes) and I don't have a lot of free time. I am looking at forms, albeit slowly. Sorry for the wait.

[pegasusfeathers]

Finished up my forms and my laptop is fixed huzzah

Kitties are open for relations

[AtlasHyperion]

Okay, kiddos. I have quested and adventured and I'm finally back. I'm so sorry for the long wait, but I'm looking over forms as I type this. I promise I WILL sort everything out by the end of tonight, so tomorrow feel free to drop by and see me having organized things.

Edit! See it organized! I did it, finally. That was easier than anticipated. Again, sorry for the wait. Also, no one wants to be medicine cat? Not a one? That's new.

[spotthecow]

ʸᵒᵘ ᶜᵃᶰ'ᵗ ᶳᵉˡˡ ᵈʳᵉᵃᵐᶳ ᵗᵒ ᶳᵒᵐᵉᵒᶰᵉ ʷʰᵒ ʰᵃᶳ ʷᵃˡᵏᵉᵈ ᵗʰʳᵒᵘᵍʰ ᶰᶤᵍʰᵗᵐᵃʳᵉᶳ

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Meet Darkpaw, a nine moons old tom and he has been ranked the medicine cat
apprentice of Valleyclan. His his prefix, 'Dark-' stands for his dusky brown pelt
with faint, black stripes. Darkpaw's whiskers are very long and curl as the ends,
while his legs make him slightly taller than an average apprentice. He also has
a cream colored muzzle and a rusty, cherry nose. When Darkpaw becomes the
medicine cat, he will be named Darkleaf for his, particularly great, healing skills.
Darkpaw was born to Larkfeather, a lovely tabby queen, and Blackstorm, once a
warrior of Valleyclan. They were happy family along with Larkfeather's brother.
However, Darkpaw's uncle never trusted Blackstorm from the beginning and had
always had kept a sharp eye on the tom. When Blackstorm had become mates
with Larkfeather, he learned to despise the tom even more. Soon, little Dark-kit
was born and, as an only kit, was showered with attention from his mother.
Blackstorm, unfortunately decided that he didn't love Larkfeather and his son
anymore, so he simply left them in the care of their uncle and never came back.
Larkfeather had begged the black tom to stay, but Blackstorm let her be in tears.
Dark-kit grew up without a father figure, but his uncle was always checking up
on him and told his clanmates that 'Dark-kit will be the best warrior that a cat
could be.' That was until Larkfeather had gotten very ill around the same time
as Dark-kit's apprentice ceremony was to be. To find his mother unable to do the
things she once loved, that had crushed Dark-kit into pieces. He no longer even
thought about being a warrior, but instead wanted to take care of his mother
before she passed away. So, he was able to be made a medicine cat apprentice
and therefore had taken care of Larkfeather until her last breath. Darkpaw's
uncle soon grown cold to Darkpaw, wondering why his nephew didn't want to be
a fantastic warrior, but instead be a lonely medicine cat. His uncle also found it
to be weak. Now, Darkpaw and his uncle rarely speak to each other, for all they
do is get into arguments. Perhaps, one day, this will all change.
Darkpaw never wanted to be a medicine cat and he is able-bodied to train as a
warrior, but once his mother was injured, it was all that the tom could think about.
Darkpaw can be rather cold and snappish, much like his uncle, and has a clear
disliking to all barn cats, loners, and rouges. Darkpaw, however, does keep a sweet
spot for kits and finds them much easier to speak to than those of his own age.
Darkpaw is rather observant and although he is young, Darkpaw can become rather
too focused when learning from his mentor. On a good day, Darkpaw can be a little
bit nice, at least to she-cats and kits. Darkpaw also rarely sleeps, often wondering
what his life would be like if he had chosen the warrior path. To say the least,
Darkpaw is conflicted with himself.
Darkpaw has a huge opinion and believes that every cat should have a name and that
is just the way that it should be. He doesn't believe that barn cats, loners, and rouges
should even be allowed in the clan. Although if they were to join, then those cats
should follow every single one of the clan's traditions, including changing their names.
Darkpaw has no crush at the moment (open :3)
(if anyone is willing to make Darkpaw's uncle just let me know!)
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[spotthecow]

Res. Just in case c: ))

[AtlasHyperion]

@spotthecow

I like Darkpaw's form so far, but can you go through it for grammatical and spelling mistakes again? Additionally, I find it really hard to read when words cut off between paragraphs, i.e.

he went to the store and
bought cheese, waterme
lon, tomatoes, and bruss
els sprouts

Can you go through and just let the lines end where they end? Sorry, I know I'm nitpicking a bit, but it just doesn't flow as well and it's a little hard to read.