𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚙𝚕𝚊𝚒𝚗𝚜 - 𝚊 𝚠𝚒𝚕𝚍 𝚑𝚘𝚛𝚜𝚎 𝚛𝚙 - 𝚍&𝚏

[Λlpha]

@Evixtus,
valence is a purebred lusitano, correct? if that is the case, then he would probably much smaller than 17.2 hands, because the average height for a lusitano is around 15 hands and only a few go over 16, which would mean that he'd be unnaturally tall. I do not mind if you want to keep him at 17.2 hands, but if you do, I'd suggest not making him a purebred, that way it could imply that a larger breed could have been mixed in earlier on.
also, with chevalier, you mean bfd as bone fragility disorder, right? if so, do you mind finding somewhere else in your form to put it? because, the way it's written, it seems as though bfd is a breed. maybe you could put it in brackets next to clydesdale?
other than those two things, the basic info looks pretty good to me.

Edit;; by the way, seeing your gorgeously coded forms makes me really want to make mine look fancy XD. I think I'll go find some cool free form coding now...or think up my own.

[evixtus]

@silent wish; i’ll change him to an Irish Draught, if that’s ok with you? And the BFD in Chevy’s form stands for Black Forest Draft. I just didn’t want to type it all out and have it mess up my coding c:

[LilHoneyBee]

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sadly had to change all of my photos thanks to copyright issues. new photos have been added.

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[evixtus]

same thing happened to me and completely ruined my coding, so I'm just going to recode them with new images

[Λlpha]

@Long live the king, @Evixtus,
aw, you poor things. it's so frustrating when stuff like that happens. images don't really affect what I write up for characters, so that's all fine with me.

@Everyone,
if anything like that happens in the future, please just make a quick notice so that everyone knows, that way someone doesn't go calling your horse a chestnut when it's a dapple grey XD

[evixtus]

so, just ignore the 'blah of blah' on their forums, just kinda makes things look nicer, with a little peak into their personality. c:

[Λlpha]

@Evixtus,
Ok sure.

@Noodle,
Dexter looks pretty good. remember to put in coat colour, likes, dislikes, fears, personality and a brief history.

[Λlpha]

@Noodle,
sorry I've been inactive. I had some real life stuff to deal with. as fair as I can tell, all dexter needs is a brief history, but I'll have to double check stuff in the morning. I'm extremely tired and my brain doesn't function well when I'm sleepy, so it's best for me not to try and accept forms when I'm exhausted.

[suzycu]

♡ King of Hearts ♡

Ｂａｓｉｃｓ
➳ Common Name:
Heart
➳ Age:
8 Years
➳ Time of Birth:
Spring | Early April
➳ Sex:
Intact Stallion

Ａｐｐｅａｒａｎｃｅ
➳ Phenotype:
Dun on Grulla Tobiano
➳ Genotype:
Ee/aa/DD/TT
➳ Markings & Patterns:
Tobiano Pattern
Dun Stripes
2 Stockings

➳ Height:
16.2 Hands
➳ Estimated Weight & Weight Class:
1200 Pounds
Mid-weight
➳ Eye Color:
Both are light blue
➳ Influential Breeds:
Paint Horse

Ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌ Ｉｎｆｏｒｍａｔｉｏｎ
➳ Traits:
Compassionate | Awkward | Inexperienced | Intelligent | Charismatic | Timid | Cautious
➳ Personality Paragraph:
If you're ever in need of someone to douse you in unlimited affection, Heart would be your guy. He was taught from a young age to respect everyone and anyone, which grew into total admiration of most mares. His caring side is strong. When it comes to foals, Heart is very lax. His father had amassed a large herd compared to the common standard, leading to Heart growing up with foals from all walks of life. He doesn't mind if they are his, another stallion's, or even entirely unrelated to his herd members. The actual foals do not mean as much to him as his harem of mares does, because he is not a very fatherly stallion. Despite this, he understands that it is his job to teach his foals as they grow. Heart is a charming fellow, full of humor, kindness, and sweet words. Born intelligent, Heart has what is takes to grow into a wise and wonderful herd stallion one day. For now, his inexperience and timid nature shines through often.
He is constantly unsure of his decisions, and will often look to the members of his herd for their thoughts. Cautiousness runs rampant in Heart, leading him to be extremely nervous when confronted with new situations. The unknown frightens him, but he is quickly learning to be more adaptable and growing in his ability to take the simple things in stride. He is very non-confrontational,
and will rarely to never set himself up in situations that lead into a fight or argument. Even in instances in which the fight does not involve him, such as a battle for lead mare, Heart will turn away. He's not a good negotiator, despite wishing to be a peacekeeper.
➳ Quirks:
∷ Tosses his mane when he's nervous
∷ Loves fruits, especially wild strawberries
∷ Hates standing water (Ponds, lakes, etc)
∷ Expects all foals of his herd to have 'full names', due to a long standing family tradition

➳ Theme Song: She Will be Loved - Maroon 5

Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ＆ Ｆｒｉｅｎｄｓ
➳ Mares:
Cinderella
➳ Parents & Siblings:
Dam: Honeysuckle Heart
∵ A quiet herd mare, with a pale palomino coat and an energetic disposition. Taught Heart how to be humorous and optimistic.
Sire: Life of a King
∵ King was a well known and powerful stallion. His fatherly and wise disposition brought mares from all over to him, and he allowed anyone to join him. Although King was not very close to Honey, he was extremely fond of Heart. From the moment Heart was weaned, and just joined in with the other foals of his herd, King showered him with attention. He taught him everything he knows about how a stallion should act.
➳ Foals:
∷ Kingdom of the Birds

➳ Friends:
∷ Cinderlla
∷ Kingdom of the Birds
➳ Enemies:
∷ None

Ｈｉｓｔｏｒｙ
➳ One - Three:
Up until the day he was weaned, Heart only spent time with his mother her friends. She was a young mare at the time,
only four, and didn't have many. He himself only found one horse to be his friend, a playful filly named Sunshine's Storm. Storm and him spent nearly every waking moment exploring their surroundings. They hid among the trees, chased one another on the grassy plains, swam in the shallow rivers, and caused havoc in the destroyed buildings. The pairs favorite spot to hang out was a large building, called a 'store' by his mother, that ran into the river. It wasn't much more than a stone-like floor, framework of what was once walls, and a scattering of fragile remains. It has once been large, until time had lowered it halfway into the water. It was in this building that Storm died. During a game of hide-and-chase, the grey filly had decided to swim out into the still waters to stand behind a post. Although the place she sought was shallow, no more than four feet, and had a bottom, it was also littered with debris. The unfortunate filly became trapped when her tiny hoof wedged itself between two pieces of metal, and drowned before being able to escape. This death prompted their father, King, to enforce some tighter rules. After his one friend died, Heart spent the next two months with his mother and her mare friends. He began to learn from them, as he constantly listened to their grievances and daily lives. This sparked his compassion from mares. Once he reached ten months, as his mother was due to foal soon, he was weaned. In his herd, weanlings left their mother's side and instead joined in with others of similar ages. These foals,
both fillies and colts, assisted their father and the other higher-ups of the herd in keeping it safe. They scouted out places to eat and drink, and kept a look out on the status of horses near them. The older colts, at least two years, spent most of their time sparing and making acquaintances with their siblings. The ones who showed more talent occasionally helped their herd stallion to fight off challengers. Many of these horses would leave of their own accord before they were three, knowing that they stood no chance at inheriting or winning King's herd. During this time, in which Heart spent little time with his mother, King began to notice Heart. He was one of the largest mid-weights, and constantly showed a certain compassion and ability to be taught. For two years, Heart was his father's right hand. He and an older brother were taught everything their father knew, from how to fight to how to find good land. As an advantage to being what his father considered a potential replacement, Heart even began to search the herd for mares of his own. He had just turned three, and thus was nearly the oldest colt left, when he decided that he didn't want to have his father's herd. It had grown to include at least four mares at all times, but these horses were constantly swapping on one herd to the next in battles. Although his father kept a select number of mares close at hand, his favorite and lead, the others found that they could do nearly anything. Some vied for chances to be around their stallion, as it was very hard to catch his attention long enough to be covered. The daughters of King left quickly, and many fillies with different sires would leave as well. His departure was painful, as King had all but chosen him to take over once he died. He left alone, with goodbyes said only to his mother and the few friends he had made. One thing that did stick, other than the traits he developed, is the standing rule of his father's that all foals be given full names. A left over from a time when humans still existed, it had always set them apart in the area as progeny of King. His mother has invented her name when she joined in, and had given him his a combination of his parent's names.
➳ Adult Life:
For Heart, years three to six became a learning period. While he had been adored and cherished in his home herd, he was just another bachelor colt once he left. His parentage and pretty face drew some younger mares in, but many of these were vain creatures. Of the ones who stuck around for more than a few weeks, the majority abandoned Heart the moment a stronger or older stallion came near. Heart was unable to keep any companions long enough to cover them himself for nearly two years. He avoided fighting, and became involved in only a smattering of small tussles as he grew. By the time he reached five, Heart had grown. He was nearly to his full height, and had become strong.
He had also grown tired of attempting to live close to his father, as many of his siblings and previous herd mates did the same. Older males had chased him away, wiser females had laughed at his advances. With one last visit to his family, he prepared to leave. His mother was already ten, and had given birth to other foals. He had full siblings, half siblings, everything! Due to his decision to leave, his father borderline resented him. He began to travel then, and eventually met up with his dedicated companion, Cinderella. She foaled his son right before Heart turned six. As other mares joined, left, or were snaked away, she stayed. Her wisdom taught him, but he remained unknowledgeable on how to lead a herd. They lost a second foal while traveling to this new home. Now, having reached a perfect place to live that is far away from his father, Heart hopes to build a herd that would make his father proud.
➳ Important Memories & Mentions:
None have been mention, yet.

Kingdom of the Birds

Ｂａｓｉｃｓ
➳ Common Name:
Bird, Birdie
➳ Age:
2 Years (He will be three this summer)
➳ Time of Birth:
Summer | July
➳ Sex:
Intact Stallion

Ａｐｐｅａｒａｎｃｅ
➳ Phenotype:
Dominant white on True Black (Carries Dun) (Presents as Overo)
➳ Genotype:
EE/aa/ww/nD
➳ Markings & Patterns:
His dominant white has presented itself as overo and an almost greying affect
Large blaze
➳ Other Images:
Video to see what his other side looks like

➳ Height:
[size=85]16 hh
➳ Estimated Weight & Weight Class:
1150 Pounds
Mid-weight Class
➳ Eye Color:
Both brown
➳ Influential Breeds:
American Paint
Throughbred

Ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌ Ｉｎｆｏｒｍａｔｉｏｎ
➳Traits:
Childish | Loving | Playful | Stubborn | Family-Oriented | Imaginative
➳ Personality Paragraph:
At his base, Bird is a very loving and caring horse. He has always received plenty of affection from his parents, and has been taught how to give it to others. He is still very playful and immature, often preferring to spar over flirt. Bird's family means more to him than he could ever express. Not only his mother and father, but also the horses he has met and bonded with. While still young and unsure, Birdie is known to constantly imagine what life would be like a herd stallion. He is still very young, and change as he heads out away from his family.
➳ Quirks:
∷ Snorts when he laughs

➳ Theme Song:
Skinny Love - Birdy

Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ＆ Ｆｒｉｅｎｄｓ
➳ Herd:
King of Hearts'
➳ Mares:
None
➳ Parents & Siblings:
Dam: Cinderella
Sire: King of Hearts
➳ Foals:
None

➳ Friends:
∷ Cinderella
∷ King of Hearts
➳ Enemies:
None

Ｈｉｓｔｏｒｙ
➳ One - Three:
From the moment Bird was in this world, he was cherished. This has caused him to mature slowly. He wasn't allowed much room to roam as a foal, and only a bit more as a weanling. When his parents lost his sibling, they tightened their grip on him even more. Because of this, Bird tends to crave freedom. Although he adores his family, he will often imagine what it would be like to just say good bye and run away.
➳ Adult Life:
He will begin it soon enough.
➳ Important Memories & Mentions:
None mentioned, yet.

[suzycu]

Cinderella

Ｂａｓｉｃｓ
➳ Common Name:
Ella, El (Preferred)
➳ Age:
11 Years
➳ Time of Birth:
Early Summer | May
➳ Sex:
Intact Mare

Ａｐｐｅａｒａｎｃｅ
➳ Phenotype:
Dun on Smokey Black
➳ Genotype:
EE/aa/nD
➳ Markings & Patterns:
Tiny star

➳ Height:
15.3 hh
➳ Estimated Weight & Weight Class:
1,000 Pounds
Mid-weight Class
➳ Eye Color:
Both are brown
➳ Influential Breeds:
Thoroughbred (? help)

Ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌ Ｉｎｆｏｒｍａｔｉｏｎ
➳Traits:
Wise | Submissive | Quiet | Distant | Adaptable | Calm | Humorous | Motherly | Observant
➳ Personality Paragraph:
El is a happy mare. She settles easily into anything, able to laugh off even the toughest of situations. Known to be quiet,
El makes up for what she doesn't say by noticing the little things that go on around her. In her life, El has learned a lot. Her life has gone from being the best possible, to being hungry, back to excelling, and then to losing a foal. Each experience has taught her something, and Ella reflects on them often for guidance. Leading a herd would never be something good for El. She would let the other horses off too easy, as she hates to feel bossy. Despite that, she is very observant and can provide valuable information to everyone around her. A small smile always seems to hang on her mouth, and El is always happy to attempt to make small talk with horses who approach her. She will rarely be seen attempting to find her way into a conversation, though. Motherhood has always been something that El adores. He foals bring her great happiness, as does seeing them grow into adults. She loves to teach them about life
➳ Quirks:
∷ Paws at grass before she eats it. Why? Heck if she knows.
∷ Hates to roll in the dirt, but knows that it has to be done. Ugh.
∷ Tries to eat leaves

➳ Theme Song:
A Drop in the Ocean - Ron Pope

Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ＆ Ｆｒｉｅｎｄｓ
➳ Herd:
King of Hearts
➳ Parents & Siblings:
Dam: Polly
Sire: Unknown
➳ Foals:
∷ Lix | First foal; filly. Born into another herd, abandoned at one. Would now around five.
∷ Birdie | Second foal; colt.

➳ Friends:
∷ Heart
∷ Birdie
➳ Enemies:
None

Ｈｉｓｔｏｒｙ
➳ One - Three:
El was foaled in a very small herd. Her mother, a simple mare by the name of Polly, was older and barely fertile. She had joined a very young stallion despite having already been bred by her previous herd stallion, who had forced her to leave with the claim that she slowed the herd. Cinderella stayed until she two. During this time, she was only around her mother and adoptive father. Her dam died at twenty while attempting to foal again, and El abandoned the young herd stallion as soon as she happened upon her mother. She spent the next year being swapped between one bachelor and another, barely avoiding being covered.
➳ Adult Life:
Having grown up in such a quiet and tiny group of horses, El is not very good at socializing. She doesn't much care to talk about her past, other than to mention previous moments and ponder the state of horses she had met along the way. Ella was swapped between bachelors and small herd stallions for three years, until she was six. During this time, she had avoided foaling. Just as she has turned six, she was swept up into a larger herd. The stallion was older, and kind. Here, she began to make some friends. El discovered that she does enjoy the presence of other horses, and speaking with them. After watching the other mares raise their foals, Ella decided that this stallion was good enough to give a foal to. She foaled around seven, and raised the filly happily. El was snaked from the herd when she was eight, and forced to leave her yearling filly. Again, she was forced to spend a year being tossed back and forth between one idiotic and childish bachelor to the next. Despite attempting to find her way back to her filly and previous herd, Cinderella was eventually forced to give up. During a brief break after running from a particularly brutish stud,
El met Heart. She was nine at the time, and pretty disappointed at having only had a single foal to carry on her genes. After discovering that Heart was kind and ready to learn how to lead, El decided that she liked him. She birthed her colt Birdie right before turning ten. El has been happy and faithful while with Heart. They mated again not long after having Birdie, but she lost the foal during the pregnancy. This was a devastating event, and it taught her to appreciate her foals even more. She is excited to finally settle, with the hope to produce many more foals before she is too old to have them.
➳ Important Memories & Mentions:
The loss of her third foal.

Esmerelda

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➳ Common Name:
She will respond to Mer, but much prefers the use of her entire name.
➳ Age:
4 Years
➳ Time of Birth:
Early Fall | August
➳ Sex:
Intact Mare

Ａｐｐｅａｒａｎｃｅ
➳ Phenotype:
Grey on Bay (?) Tobiano
➳ Genotype:
Aa/Ee/GG/nT
➳ Markings & Patterns:
Thick Blaze
Tobiano leading to four stockings
Mild greying, will go extensive with age


➳ Height:
15.3 Hands
➳ Estimated Weight & Weight Class:
1,300 Pounds
Heavy Weight
➳ Eye Color:
Both brown
➳ Influential Breeds:
Shire Horse
American Paint Horse
Unknown Others

Ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌ Ｉｎｆｏｒｍａｔｉｏｎ
➳Traits:
Conniving | Narcissistic | Immature | Sarcastic | Alert | Energetic | Impatient | Afraid |
➳ Personality Paragraph:
Esmeralda might believe that she is the hottest thing to trot on four hooves, but she is far from it. Known to lie constantly and for what seems to be no reason at all, as well as trick every horse around her as best she can, Esmerelda is not the kindest of horses.
Not only does she have love only for herself, but she is constantly desperate for attention. Friends are not something she seeks.
The attention of 'doting stallions' seems to often be the only thing that she wants. Manipulative to her core, and proud to be so,
Esmeralda will use anything in her power to get what she wants. She borderline despises all foals, and often regards them as mere proof of the parents vitality, trophies of sorts. The stronger the foal, the better the parents. And strength is everything.

➳ Theme Song:
Suggestions?

Ｆａｍｉｌｙ ＆ Ｆｒｉｅｎｄｓ
➳ Herd:
None
➳ Parents & Siblings:
None she cares about
➳ Foals:
∷ Dollhouse

➳ Friends:
None
➳ Enemies:
None

Ｈｉｓｔｏｒｙ
➳ One - Three:
Esmeralda was born on the move. Her mother, a horse that will only be remembered as 'large' and 'sluggish', was a dingy draft mix currently living in between stallions. Obvious from the fact that Esmeralda came out short and pinto, her father was some paint horse that had claimed her mother for a short moment. She followed her mother absentmindedly for months, often pondering why they were always moving. She was barely five months old when the pair found themselves joining a brutish, giant draft stallion.
It wasn't long before Mer began to take notice of the way he handled things. From the roughness and anger that seemed to always be running amuck in his head, to the way certain mares handled it. Esmerelda's mother was extremely submissive by nature, and thus was able to avoid anything bad coming to her. Other mares attempted to fight the horse, and often found themselves dumped in some nasty territory, injured and left for the bachelors. This horse's lead mare, another giantess with the longest mane and tail Esmeralda had ever seen, was the filly's most interesting study. She could bait up fights with simple back handed words, and used this more than you believe to keep a roll as lead. When the stallion turned to anger, as he did often, this mare always seemed to be above him. She was a trickster who outwitted them all. Esmeralda watched the mare in awe for four months, until the herd stallion kicked her from the herd the moment she was weaned. Only a nine month old filly, she suffered. The stud had removed her because of her small stature and nonrelation, and these points became seeds of hate in the foal's stomach. She managed alright for months,
climbing her though life alone. After turning two, Esmeralda came to winter with a herd of zebras. That winter was particularly horrid, cold and dead, and it had forced her to join with the closest available herd. She enjoyed spending the months having 'toys' to play with and annoy. Each zebra was smaller and weaker than she was. Spring came, and Esmeralda was quick to remind the scattering of stallions that she was easily the biggest and toughest mare in the herd. This led to a foal. She birthed midway between three and four. During the summer after having Dollhouse, named by one of the nanny zebra mares in the herd, Esmeralda was thrown off of her throne by a large group of mares.
➳ Adult Life:
Although Esmeralda has only been a mare for a year, she has achieved much during this time. In her mind, she has already lead her own herd, bowing the other horses to her will. She has given birth the foal of the strongest stallion that had been in the herd, and more or less escaped raising the filly for many months. Now, she finds herself stuck with a weak weanling filly that bares stripes that prove that Esmeralda was lying to herself for months. The zebra stallions were not strong, and they were tiny. She had already hated herself for being of such short stature, and her first foal is even smaller. Esmeralda can barely wait to abandon her filly and be a free mare.
➳ Important Memories & Mentions:
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