Mutants in Manhattan (V.2) Discussion Thread

[herbalwolf]

I'm not writing a novel, but I am writing a plot to an Undertale AU I'm creating. XD

[Ember1989]

I've never heard of Undertale.

[.Deku.]

If you guys ever wanna chat in the mean time, feel free to hit me up with a PM. I'm lurking a lot of the time, and it's better than nothing after all.

[Ember1989]

Same here. I lurk everyday so feel free to pm me.

[__PawPrints__]

Are some of the turtles still getting captured? If so Leo can be one of them

[Ember1989]

I'm okay with Raph getting captured.

[Iselka]

Whoah, people are getting captured? This roleplay is getting more and more interesting.

[Teekl]

I have returned! I'm so sorry for my sudden absence!

I totally understand...wait....Teek is working on a novel? I've been trying to work on one just for fun but...I think I'm rushing the plot and i keep rewriting it in different plots but it always comes out dark and depressing...It's a murder mystery. And I'll always be around in the summer. Sure Monday I'll be packing a bit. I tend to wait to the last minute. Tuesday is a five hour journey for a week long trip to visit family...but we got wifi where we are going so I'll be on all day everyday.

Yep! I officially finished it a few days ago, now it's in the process of being edited.
My novel started out as a murder mystery but it's definitely not that anymore
Pacing is the hardest thing for me. It's difficult to find the right balance between taking your time and keeping it interesting. And murder mysteries can be quite dark. Maybe a good solution to both problems would be including more lighthearted conversations between your characters? That can help to slow down the plot, build character relations and make it fun all at the same time.

But ah, I'm rambling.

Turtles getting turtle-napped! If the A-Team were to get captured it'd be hilarious to watch Donnie and Mikey scrambling to rescue them

Just to clarify, are we waiting on Shadow right now? No pressure or anything, I just wanna make sure I don't have to do anything with Donnie yet. (I'll try to get a post up for Link soon)

[Iselka]

Yeah we're waiting for Shadow.

[.Deku.]

Yeah. Shadow's on Vacation visiting family right now. She might be gone for a few more days, but after she gets back we should be able to just jump right back on track. I'm really excited for this role-play to be honest.

Also hmm, we also really do need to decide which team is going to get captured here, pfff maybe we could flip a coin or something. Since that will probably be a big determining factor of who Cipher Aka my robo-bae targets after all. xD