Hello, and welcome to my little thread! I've noticed a lot of bad pony OCs. I did consider just doing a full character reviewer, but for now I think I'll just stick with telling you if your character is a Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu or not.
This thread is in no way meant to insult peoples' pony OCs. Please take what I say with the tiniest grain of salt. Everything that I say could just be seen as my opinion, so please try to respect that and I will respect your OC.
Thank you ^^
Please only submit characters that belong to your or belong to people who have asked you to submit the character for them.
Here is the form that you fill out for your character (You must fill out everything, which includes having a reference or picture of some kind.):
Here is how I will determine if they are a Mary Sue or not. The More points you get the more Mary Sue your character is. Of course, my system might be a bit flawed it is pretty new, so please bear with me for a while ^^:
Name: 0-10
Race: No points. I've seen at least one good OC of every pony race
Reference/Appearance: 0-5
Special Talent: 0-5
Personality: 0-10
Backstory: 0-10
Strengths: 0-10
Weaknesses: 0-10
Family/Related to: 0-10
0-15 points = Not a Mary Sue at all! You don't have to worry at all. Your character is perfectly fine and is not a Mary Sure/Gary Stu at all.
16-23 = Almost almost(?) a Mary Sue. You're pretty much safe. Your character isn't a Mary Sure, but isn't almost a Mary Sue and isn't not at all a Mary Sue... that makes sense, right?
24-35 = Almost a Mary Sue. You're character isn't quite a Mary Sue, but they are close. Be careful with this character.
36-55 = Pretty Mary Sue. This character most likely needs at least a bit of work. I would suggest checking over your character or maybe reading some guides on how to make good MLP OCs. Just a suggestion, though. ^^
56-70 = Really Mary Sue. Talk to me and I might have some suggestions. For your character.
If you want to see how I determine the number of points each character gets than PM me after you have submitted a character and I've reviewed it. I don't want to post it here in case it influences what you wright about your character.
So yeah. ^^ If you have any questions or comments or whatever than feel free to post it here or PM me. Either is fine. :3
Mods: If this is in the wrong board than could you please move it? I wasn't entirely sure where to put it. Thank you! ^^
This thread is in no way meant to insult peoples' pony OCs. Please take what I say with the tiniest grain of salt. Everything that I say could just be seen as my opinion, so please try to respect that and I will respect your OC.
Thank you ^^
Please only submit characters that belong to your or belong to people who have asked you to submit the character for them.
Here is the form that you fill out for your character (You must fill out everything, which includes having a reference or picture of some kind.):
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[b]Username:[/b]
[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Race:[/b]
[b]Reference:[/b]
[b]Special Talent:[/b]
[b]Personality:[/b]
[b]Backstory:[/b]
[b]Strengths:[/b]
[b]Weaknesses:[/b]
[b]Family/Related To:[/b]
[b]Other:[/b]
Here is how I will determine if they are a Mary Sue or not. The More points you get the more Mary Sue your character is. Of course, my system might be a bit flawed it is pretty new, so please bear with me for a while ^^:
Name: 0-10
Race: No points. I've seen at least one good OC of every pony race
Reference/Appearance: 0-5
Special Talent: 0-5
Personality: 0-10
Backstory: 0-10
Strengths: 0-10
Weaknesses: 0-10
Family/Related to: 0-10
0-15 points = Not a Mary Sue at all! You don't have to worry at all. Your character is perfectly fine and is not a Mary Sure/Gary Stu at all.
16-23 = Almost almost(?) a Mary Sue. You're pretty much safe. Your character isn't a Mary Sure, but isn't almost a Mary Sue and isn't not at all a Mary Sue... that makes sense, right?
24-35 = Almost a Mary Sue. You're character isn't quite a Mary Sue, but they are close. Be careful with this character.
36-55 = Pretty Mary Sue. This character most likely needs at least a bit of work. I would suggest checking over your character or maybe reading some guides on how to make good MLP OCs. Just a suggestion, though. ^^
56-70 = Really Mary Sue. Talk to me and I might have some suggestions. For your character.
If you want to see how I determine the number of points each character gets than PM me after you have submitted a character and I've reviewed it. I don't want to post it here in case it influences what you wright about your character.
So yeah. ^^ If you have any questions or comments or whatever than feel free to post it here or PM me. Either is fine. :3
Mods: If this is in the wrong board than could you please move it? I wasn't entirely sure where to put it. Thank you! ^^
