Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer V.2 [New owner!]

[I r o n.]

She was punished for, one, leaving the camp and other stuff outside in the territory, and two, getting injured she had to stay in the med.cats den for a moon.

And like I mentioned she was lazy etc, being new to the Clan, and hearing the stories of hunting and the outside-of-the-nursery kind of thing, she was daring enough to venture out of the camp.

Otherwise, thanks for pointing out the problems with my character.^^ (I'll see what I can do to 'adjust' her a bit, but make her still layed back and lazy-ish)

[Luscinia]

Hey, I need opinions x3 Hit me with your full honesty!

Image/Description


Name:
Smallstone

Gender:
Female

Clan:
Redclan

Rank:
Queen

Personality/Skills:
Smallstone is an aloof she-cat, who typically doesn't willingly welcome many cats into her life, let alone her personal space. She is very snappy, defensive, brutally honest, and stubborn as a rock. Yet like any mother, she'd kill to protect her kits, baring a fierce protective instinct over them. Bothering them would be like poking a bear with a stick- she'd spring into action immediately. This motherly instinct often extends into apprentices of the clan and other kits, even if they aren't related. She often fusses over their safety and health [which tends to irritate plenty of cats].

Her main skills are mainly fighting head-on, balance, and climbing. Though she's small in height, her broad body gives her weight to throw around and enough force to knock the breath out of a foe. Climbing is a bit of a surprise tactic for her due to her weight, but it certainly does help when she lives in the canyons. Balance also helps out a lot there.

Important Notes:
- She had a mate named Rabbitear, a flirtatious and sarcastic tom-cat that was a former loner, who lived within the clan. They stayed together for a very long time, but when Smallstone became pregnant, he soon realized that he didn't want the responsibility of kits. They resolved this peacefully by simply splitting up, and Smallstone hasn't really been bitter about it.
- Her size/weight comes from genetics, not by overeating.

[lady chocobo]

Image/Description:
Name: Applekit | Applepaw | Applecloud
Gender: molly
Clan: undecided
Rank: Kit | Apprentice | Warrior
Personality/Skills: likes to collect snail shells. is a day-dreamer and woke up late on her first day as an apprentice because she slept in. she likes to watch the clouds, and is easy-going and mellow.
Important Notes: none~

[Simonpet]

Bump

[quitting,,]

Please do not bump this thread. I know I have a back-up of requests. I've been busy these past few days, and I'm sorry I'm neglecting it.

[I r o n.]

Im a bit confused with what I should call him. Any suggestions (would -ember work for him?)

[Keriae]

Image/Description: Click!
Name: Gorsefoot
Gender: Male this should be sex
Clan: FanClan
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: An amiable warrior, Gorsefoot is very easy to get along with, and this makes him a popular cat. He's diligent, thoughtful and tolerant of others. However, he can be defiant when he disagrees with orders, though he doesn't respond in an outrageous way, keeping his voice calm. Gorsefoot is a quarrelsome feline, and gets into arguments easily. Skeptical, he doesn't believe things until he sees them.
Gorsefoot is a fast tom, capable of rushing across the rugged terrain he calls home with sure footing. He's also a superb hunter and can - and will - spend hours out of camp hunting.
Important Notes: He's a new character, so I'm working on him c: I'm stuck between him having -foot or -whisker, as his speed is what makes him a good hunter.

[Emmancipation]

Image/Description:

Name:
Jaystar (Jayflight)
Gender:
Tom
Clan:
MoonClan
Rank:
Leader
Personality/Skills:
Personality: Quiet and intuitive yet social. Is pleasant to talk with, but he is guarded when speaking with strangers. Skills: Has poor coordination on ground, but is excellent in scaling trees. Is a good fisher but fears water.
Important Notes:
He was born in a city setting, raised in a clan, and was a kittypet for a short time, so he has vast knowledge about life and the world. His haunches and tail are covered in nicks and scars due to a birth defect in his hind legs that cause him to be slow in battle.

[Guest]

Woah. This is the most helpful thing in my entire life.
Thank you for this. ;>;

(Shh. Marking.)

[Hamlet]

Image/Description: A dark grey, with white face, chest, stomach, and paws. She has a grey stripe down her mussel and black classic tabby.
Name: Skyfall
Gender: Female
Clan: Stormclan
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Grew up close to her sister, Emberwillow. Loyal to her clan above all else, she allowed her busy schedule and dedication to absorb her life, resulting in her growing farther apart with her clanmates and family. But when clanmate Crowheart was caught with a opposing clan cat and sentenced to 6 more moons of apprenticeship and given to her, did she really open her eyes. Soon she fell for the rebelious tom, but knew his heart still belonged to the other she-cat. Their roles switched. Skyfall was constantly trying to impress him, and often he had to get her out of spots of trouble. But soon Crowheart saw the truth in Skyfall's ways, and too fell in love. Now she is hardworking like before, but knows when enough work is enough.
Important Notes: Unusual long legs and uncany leaping abilities.