nah, you're fine lol. I like to ramble sometimes too, that's mainly most of my posts sometimes when no one is interacting with me.
@.PVRIS.: I see you've added some things to Caleb's form, one thing though. There is only one forest outside of the city and it's owned by Lucas, therefore he has to be in the city, its part of the plot really xD. Everything else is fine. Not trying to be picky, it's just it basically defeats the purpose of the struggle that the characters go through to find said freedom to transform from their short bios I did ^^











