Into the Wild {Warriors Re-write - Discussion/Forms}

[detective who.]

The RP thread itself: Into the Wild

If you have anything you'd like to add to the role play, a potential improvement, or a major plot point you'd like to add or alter, this is the place for that discussion.

This is also the place for all forms and OOC discussion.

Current Items of Business:

• Names that need changing. Allegiances are in progress, but cats with names that need changing are in bold.
• StarClan and nine lives.
• Appearances that need changing; I'm no geneticist, so I'll need a lot of help here. Cats that I know need fixes to appearance are italicised in the alliances, but I'm sure there are others.
• Family trees, perhaps. It depends on how willing we all are to straighten things out and how tangled it turns out everything is.
• Brindleface's remaining unnamed tom kit.
• Warrior code and mates outside of the Clan.
• Anything anyone wants to consider will be added up here.
  
  
  The form is on the main thread, but I'll put it here, too.
  

  Code: Select all

  Name:
Gender:
Appearance:
Rank: [If leader, state how many lives remaining]
Personality:
History: [Optional unless you're changing things for a character]
Apprentice: [If applicable]
Mentor: [If applicable]
Kits: [If applicable]
Other:

[detective who.]

THUNDERCLAN:
Leader: Bluestar -- blue-gray molly, tinged with silver around her muzzle.
Deputy: Redtail -- small tortoiseshell tom with a distinctive ginger tail.
Medicine Cat: Spottedleaf -- dark tortoiseshell molly with a distinctive dappled coat.
Warriors: Lionheart -- golden tabby tom with thick fur like a lion's mane.
Tigerclaw -- big dark brown tabby tom with unusually long front claws.
Whitestorm -- big white tom.
Darkstripe -- sleek black-and-grey tabby tom.
Birchtail (Detective Who) -- pale silver tabby tom with dark stripes and an elegantly long tail. Formerly Longtail.
Runningwind -- swift brown tabby tom.
Willowpelt -- very pale gray molly with unusual blue eyes.
Mousefur -- small dusky brown molly.
Apprentices: Dustpaw -- dark brown tabby tom.
Greypaw (Detective Who) -- long-haired solid grey tom.
Ravenpaw (MockSun) -- small, skinny black tom with a tiny white dash on his chest, and white-tipped tail.
Sandpaw (koolkatkoolkat123) -- pale ginger molly.
Firepaw -- ginger tom.
Queens: Frostfur -- beautiful white molly with blue eyes. Kits: Brackenkit, Brightkit, Cinderkit, Thornkit.
Brindleface -- pretty grey brindled tabby molly. Kits: Ashkit, three unnamed kits.
Goldenflower -- pale ginger molly. Kits: Swiftkit, Rookkit.
Tawnytail (hqmary) -- pale brown tabby, and the oldest nursery queen. Kits: Mistlekit. Formerly Speckletail.
Kits: Brackenkit -- golden-brown tabby tom.
Brightkit (Detective Who) -- white molly with ginger patches.
Cinderkit (Aquamarine Abyss.) -- dark grey molly.
Thornkit -- golden-brown tabby tom.
Ashkit -- spotted pale grey tom.
Dovekit (SnowStorm44)-- spotted pale grey molly. Formerly Fernkit.
Unnamed kit -- spotted pale grey tom.
Pebblekit (hqmary) -- dark grey tom.
Swiftkit (MockSun)-- black and white tom.
Rookkit (kestrel.) -- black molly with a white patch on her chest. Formerly unnamed kit.
Mistlekit -- grey tabby molly with white paws.
Elders: Halftail -- big dark brown tabby tom with part of his tail missing.
Smallear -- gray tom with very small ears. The oldest tom in ThunderClan.
Patchpelt -- small black-and-white tom.
One-eye -- pale grey molly, the oldest cat in ThunderClan. Virtually blind and deaf.
Dappletail -- once-pretty tortoiseshell molly with a lovely dappled coat.
Rosetail -- ginger tabby molly.


SHADOWCLAN:
Leader: Brokenstar -- long-haired dark brown tabby tom.
Deputy: Blackfoot -- large white tom with huge jet-black paws.
Medicine Cat: Runningnose -- small gray-and-white tom.
Warriors: Stumpytail -- brown tabby tom.
Boulder -- silver tabby tom.
Clawface -- battle-scarred brown tom.
Nightpelt -- black tom.
Russetfur -- dark ginger molly.
Apprentices: Brownpaw -- (presumably) brown tom.
Wetpaw -- grey tabby tom.
Littlepaw -- brown tabby tom.
Queens: Dawncloud -- small, pale ginger molly.
Brightflower -- black and white or ginger tabby molly.
Elders: Ashfur -- thin grey tom.

WINDCLAN:
Leader: Tallstar -- a black-and-white tom with a very long tail.

RIVERCLAN:
Leader: Crookedstar -- a huge light brown tabby tom with a twisted jaw.
Deputy: Oakheart -- a reddish-brown tom.

[skywalker,]

Name: DoveKit
Gender: Female
Appearance: Light Grey She-Cat, Darker Flecks
Rank: Kit
Personality: Energetic, Kind, Curious, Patient
History: No Not really
Apprentice:Not yet
Mentor: Not Yet
Kits: Will have lots of kits in the future
Other: Hi! Was formerly FernKit, and will be DoveCloud

[detective who.]

Accepted! I'll go fix her information on the Allegiances. The way things are listed on the wiki is messy in some places.

Edit; I hope you haven't looked at this yet, ehehe. I'd like to change Fernkit's name so that her prefix works better; she is named for her eye colour, for whatever reason. Ugh.

[skywalker,]

I like FernCloud. What will you change it to? I still like FernCloud lol)

[koolkatkoolkat123]

Hmm i'm trying to figure out which cat I want to be, it is not that easy

Name: Sandpaw
Gender: She cat
Appearance: Pale ginger fur with light green eyes
Rank: Apprentice
Personality: She has a sharp tongue and is not afraid to use it. She appears hostile to cats she doesn't know but only when she has Dustpaw to back her up. She is very proud and very sure of her abilities and hates being criticised. However, to cats she knows and trusts she can be very pleasant. She has a gentle side and it shows when she deals with younger cats.
History: Born and raised in the clan, nothing special, yet
Apprentice:
Mentor: Whitestorm
Kits:
Other: None

[MockSun]

Name: Swiftkit
Gender: Male
Appearance: A small black and white tom with amber eyes.
Rank: Kit
Personality: Daring, ambitious and energetic. He dreams of being leader someday, with his sibling, Rookkit, as his deputy. He can act rashly or stubbornly, being very firm in his beliefs and decisions. Despite his more hotheaded side, he truly does want what he thinks is best for ThunderClan.
History: Unchanged.
Apprentice: N/A
Mentor: Will be Longtail (or whatever his changed name will be), if we're going by the books.
Kits: N/A
Other: None. He will still die his cannon death.

Name: Ravenpaw
Gender: Male
Appearance: A small, skinny jet-black tom with a tiny dash of white on his chest and a white-tipped tail. He has amber eyes.
Rank: Apprentice
Personality: Skittish and quiet. Though not a great fighter, the young tom is a good hunter and tracker due to his sharp observation skills. He's very patient around his clanmates, and it takes a lot for him to get annoyed. One of his greatest flaws is that he lacks bravery, although he would still fight for ThunderClan should he need to.
History: Unchanged.
Apprentice: N/A
Mentor: Tigerclaw if we're going by the books, but we might want to change that. It's obviously a pretty bad mentor choice on Bluestar's part.
Other: I had an idea for something to change about him, should he come back to ThunderClan after Tigerclaw is exiled?

[detective who.]

I like FernCloud. What will you change it to? I still like FernCloud lol)

I don't know. PM me about it and we'll talk.

Koolkat, you're accepted.

MockSun, you are too. About Ravenpaw, I think he ought to come back. It was odd that he didn't. It's your choice though.

[koolkatkoolkat123]

I believe Ravenpaw should come back at some point but it makes sense to keep Tigerclaw as his mentor. Bluestar is not a perfect leader and should make these kind of mistakes even if she says she had a good reason for doing it.

[MockSun]

Yeah, I think I'll eventually bring him back. We can see what part he plays from there.

About keeping Tigerclaw as his mentor, I could understand her making the initial mistake, but maybe Bluestar should change it to someone else after it becomes clear Ravenpaw and Tigerclaw aren't a good match?