Into The Wild (Warrior Cats Rewrite RP/Discussion Thread)

[.kestral]

Teehee. Sorry. My Gecko is being really cute.

[koolkatkoolkat123]

Hmm ok, ok we won't ask for players for Deadfoot and Leopardfur, since they are deputies, they can be played by anyone

but for Leaders and Mistyfoot and Stonefur we will

[Keriae]

stonefur
stonefur
stone fur
STONEFUR

someone control me pls

[koolkatkoolkat123]

hehehe oh and we got our Frostfur just now
We can start

[detective who.]

Hold on, I thought we were starting with the battle with RiverClan?

[koolkatkoolkat123]

Well we were but I didn't realise people weren't roleplaying that until it was too late. Lets start over WITH the battle with Riverclan

[detective who.]

I decided to just go through the allegiances of Into the Wild and list everyone, and give traditional names to those who needed them. Hopefully this list also includes any cat who isn't in the allegiances, outside of nameless cats. I touched on the pelt problems that some of the cats have, but I'm sure there are more. I'm also going to assume that suffixes were given appropriately, so those will only be changed when necessary (I'm looking at you, Runningwind.) Altered names are bold.
*clears throat* Here we go.

THUNDERCLAN:
Leader: Bluestar.
Deputy: Redtail. He really shouldn't be tortoiseshell - it is extremely rare for a male cat to be tortoiseshell, and if one is, he's sterile. He ought to be either tabby, or not have kits. His name would still be fine, though, as long as he has the skills for it.
Medicine Cat: Spottedleaf.
Warriors: Lionheart.
Tigerclaw.
Whitestorm.
Darkstripe.
Birchtail. Described as a white tabby with dark black stripes; never described as having a particularly long tail. Former name: Longtail.
Sparrowfoot. The allegiances don't even say what colour tabby he is. I had to look it up. Former name: Runningwind.
Willowpelt.
Mousefur. I know some people might take issue with not renaming her, but Mouse- is just for a brown cat. Mousefur is really dark brown, but she's still brown. Cedarfur, if you really want something new.
Apprentices: Dustpaw. I kind of wanted to change this, because Dust- implies a lighter colour to me, but it's fine. It's weird that his description includes 'lithe' and 'broad-shouldered' though - what?
Greypaw.
Sandpaw.
Firepaw. This could be changed. He seems really daft for not realising the prophecy was about him, when fire is in his name. Come on.
Queens: Frostfur.
Brindleface. Hopefully she actually is a brindle tabby.
Goldenflower.
Shelltail. This cat is a tabby. Ragghhh. I almost named her Snailtail, ehehe, but some people don't care for rhyming. Former name: Speckletail.
Kits: Teaselkit. Golden-brown tabby. Former name: Brackenkit.
Brightkit.
Cinderkit.
Reedkit. Golden-brown tabby. Former name: Thornkit.
Elders: Halftail. I don't have a problem with renames.
Fogheart. He seems to be unafraid to speak his mind. Former name: Smallear. Why, Erin.
Patchpelt.
One-eye.
Dappletail.
Rosetail. She isn't listed in the allegiances.


SHADOWCLAN:
Leader: Owlstar. No obviously evil name for you. Former name: Brokenstar. This wasn't a name change.
Deputy: Mallowfoot. Kept his suffix, even though it may have been just to correlate. Former name: Blackfoot.
Medicine Cat: Mottlenose. Kept the correlating suffix again. Stop it, ShadowClan. Former name: Runningnose.
Warriors: Dusktail. Four correlating names in a row. Former name: Stumpytail. Not a name change.
Smokeclaw. He looks like a strong fighter, from his wiki page. Former name: Boulder.
Rabbitface. Scrawny and heavily built. Huh. Former name: Clawface. His apprentice name really was Clawpaw.
Nightpelt. Ah, finally. A name that works.
Russetfur.
Apprentices: Brownpaw. I'm going to assume that he's actually brown.
Falconpaw. Grey tabby with a white belly. Former name: Wetpaw. Eurgh.
Littlepaw.
Queens: Dawncloud.
Brightflower.
Elders: Ashfur.

WINDCLAN:
Leader: Swiftstar. Former name: Tallstar.

RIVERCLAN:
Leader: Crookedstar.
Deputy: Oakheart.

Well, that was fun. If anything finds that I missed any cats that appear in Into the Wild, tell me and I'll fix this. It looks like WindClan and RiverClan didn't really show up until the next book, though.
By the way, I noted above that Firepaw's prefix could be changed. It's really obvious that he's part of the prophecy, a rather silly that he doesn't pick up on that. What do you all think - especially MockSun, since you're playing him?

[Keriae]

Brindlface is described as just a grey tabby, but for Sandstorm to work she'd need to show red, as it's dominant to black/not red, so I made her a mostly grey dilute tortie tabby.
Redtail, on the other hand..... he either needs to be a red tabby (all red cats are tabby) or there is the chance that he's a chimera. That would make him fertile and Sandstorm would be possible, just as long as his manly bits are red.

[detective who.]

Thanks for your input, Keriae. I'm making the assumption that Brindleface is brindled, even though it isn't stated explicitly. I would be extremely disappointed if she wasn't.
Sand- is for a pale ginger cat, which is what Sandstorm is. This may not be what you meant, though; I'm a bit confused by your statement.
Yeah, Redtail is a bit of a mess. I think he should just be changed to a red tabby, rather than a tortoiseshell.

[Keriae]

Sandstorm is cream or 'pale ginger". For a female cat to be red or cream, she needs to inherit the red gene from both of her parents. Making Brindleface a dilute torbie guaranteed this. Sandstorm also got her dilute from Brindleface.