Into The Wild (Warrior Cats Rewrite RP/Discussion Thread)

[MockSun]

If I could suggest a replacement prophecy for 'Fire alone will save the clan', perhaps something that foreshadows BloodClan? It would be kinda nice if they didn't just pop into existence at book 6.

[detective who.]

If anyone has an idea how to tweak the prophecy let me know because the original prophecy is way too obvious and simple and its kinda hard to change to suit the roleplay

I think you're good, MockSun~

Just curious, is it going to drive anyone up the wall if I write Greypaw instead of Graypaw? I prefer the former.

[.:Whimsical.Ghosts:.]

I don't mind X3

[elfish]

Just curious, is it going to drive anyone up the wall if I write Greypaw instead of Graypaw? I prefer the former.

I personally don't mind, but I like the way Greypaw looks as opposed to Graypaw cx

[MockSun]

I don't mind either. We write it grey where I live, anyways. ^^

[koolkatkoolkat123]

If I could suggest a replacement prophecy for 'Fire alone will save the clan', perhaps something that foreshadows BloodClan? It would be kinda nice if they didn't just pop into existence at book 6.

Yeah that would be quite nice since Fire is still saving the clan after Bluestars death. I'm not great at writing prophecies so if you think you can rewrite it then go ahead

[.:Whimsical.Ghosts:.]

I was thinking of 'When you think you are most safe, blood will stain the forest floor as four clans become two and battle,'

[koolkatkoolkat123]

Sounds good i'd miss out the battle part though

[.:Whimsical.Ghosts:.]

Ok, and gtg

[MockSun]

Nine lives torn away in a single blow, the forest simultaneously saved and doomed. The fiercest threats are often the least expected ones. Do not be caught be surprise, or all four clans are forfeit, and the stench of blood will be forever unfading.

Hmm, would that be vague enough? I have to admit I'm not very good at writing prophecies either. We don't have to go with this one, I just threw it together off the top of my head. xD