burn [discussion]

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burn [discussion]

Postby soda » Fri Jan 17, 2014 1:56 pm

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    Welcome to the discussion thread for burn! I figured the pming system wasn't working, so might as well just get up a discussion thread where we could talk about the plot without some messages getting lost and some people going unheard and what not. Just like with most every discussion thread, here you can:
    . ↷ discuss plot ideas
    . ↷ ask questions
    . ↷ request for twists
    . ↷ give suggestions/critiques on how we could improve
    . ↷ get to know each other, or just chat about things
    I'm thinking this will also be the place to ask for/where I'll post weekly recaps, and in which I will explain major events and what not. Please be kind and respectful to each member, blah blah basic rules I'm sure you're all well familiar with and I don't need to patronize any of you by repeating. Basically just remember to have fun! I'm looking forward to not only the plot, but roleplaying with all of you as well!

This is a private roleplay, so only the following members may post:
Rose ; Autumn Frost. Folly + Zmija Keriae
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Re: burn [discussion]

Postby soda » Fri Jan 17, 2014 2:10 pm

    As I said, the pming system didn't turn out so desirable, especially since this plot ended up getting more interest than I had originally thought it would, so I decided to just go ahead and make a discussion thread to talk on. The roleplay is up and a wip until we can work out- or at least decide on- the plot we'd like to use for it.

    The plot I have so far is as follows:

    It all starts off with the peaceful little Rushclan, a group of cats living out in a marshy like environment. They lived there for generations upon generations, resembling almost a mix of Shadowclan and Riverclan if you want a point of reference. They use the mud to keep themselves cool and hidden from predators/prey, love to swim, and tend to keep to the shadows yadayada what not. None of that's really important [more just saying it to give you a background on the cats, and for future reference so if they ever come across a mud puddle, you could have your cats bounce right in and no one could judge you on it], considering it may not even be a set in the duration of our story. See, not a few weeks ago, Rushclan's territory was overrun by something or other: pesky twolegs, an influx of some type of predator, a natural disaster, that can be left up to suggestion but the basic is that they were pushed out of their home because of it. Not all is lost, with the cats hearing of some land a fair bit away from a few friendly loners/scouts that went ahead/whatever, point is that's their current destination, to get to this new territory that by the sound of it, almost resembles a promise land for cats. While tragic that they have to leave, the move wasn't exactly cataclysmic since the clan managed to plan and execute their move with quite a bit of success, no cat being left behind or killed during it. Well, not right away at least. The trip is long and harrowing at times, and they end up loosing their leader along the way- an older cat at the time of the move, who was on his last life. They mourn but know they must continue. So after a few days/weeks of traveling, they come across this small city. The problems here is that they can't go around, considering it'll take much too long, so they just decide to tough it out and go through it. The city is a few days journey across, so the clan soon decides to camp out in an abandoned twoleg nest for the night, the place clearly not being inhabited by anything else for quite a while. This is about when tragedy strikes. It comes in the middle of the night, when most the cats are asleep. What causes it could be left up to interpretation but the end result is simple: the twoleg nest is set ablaze. It's chaos to say the least. Living in the marsh for all their lives, these cats have never heard of such a danger as fire, let alone seen it first hand [or, um, paw]. The building is burning, things are falling, and the clancats are running in every direction trying to seek out not only a means of escape, but each other. Most make it out, some don't, but the problem is nearly none of them manage to stick together, running off into the night in their panic. This is basically what the roleplay itself would be about, our cats somehow managing to find each other during the fire [maybe like one gets trapped, and one/two/all three go to help or what have you]. I'm thinking I'll snag the leader, then I believe Folly wanted the med cat, Autumn wanted an apprentice, and then Rose [and Keriae as well] you can choose any rank you'd prefer as well. The bulk of the roleplay would be the idea that now they have to not only navigate their way out of the Twoleg's city, they also have to find their clanmates/get to this promised land the clan had dreamed of for so long, all while trying not to let their newfound fear of fire paralyze their every step.

    So go ahead and post your thoughts/critiques/adjustments/suggestions/what have you in relation to the above plot.
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Re: burn [discussion]

Postby ossa di cervo » Fri Jan 17, 2014 2:23 pm

I didn't reply early cause I was waiting for someone else to reply first. xD

Anyways, I loooove the new plot and approve whole-heartedly. I'm already planning out my little medicine tom. <3
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Postby king boo » Sat Jan 18, 2014 3:25 am

Autumn Frost. wrote:
    nean i really like the idea however i want to ask if there could be a second clan made of thunderclan and windclan, it is weird too have only decendents of two clans when practicaly every warriors book states the importance of 4 clans x3 and i wish to use my wavourite warrior oc i own that is more windclan in build. also later on it will be amusing if rushclan cats try teaching the wind/thunderclan to swim as wind/thunderclan teach them to climb or something, idk just a crazy ol' idea

    also what are the genders of each cat??
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Postby soda » Sat Jan 18, 2014 8:19 am

    thank you very much folly ;u; I'm excited for this as well!

    Autumn: I actually kinda just meant them resembling those clans as a point of reference on how they act, not that they were actual decedents of shadowclan and riverclan xD though that would be kinda fun to experiment with.. to combine the tratis of thunderclan and windclan, the two most opposite in my opinion. hmmm. Plus that idea of teaching each other and what not is adorable ;u; alright if everyone wants to make them actual descendants, I don't mind adding it to the plot and making two different clans having to bond together. We could go with something like featherclan for the wind/thunderclan cats, their territory spanning between the fields and pine tree forest area. Or we could keep it one clan, and have the mix of the two clans be a more recent thing than the original two combinations, but not recent recent type of thing. Like, riverclan and shadowclan combined generations upon generations ago [as did thunderclan and windclan] but only a three or four generations ago did the two combine to make Rushclan as a whole. That way, there could be some obvious differences in specific cats- in both structure and personality types- but they're all still one clan. Good idea? Bad?

    As for the genders, I wasn't planning on preset ones. I was just thinking let everyone pick what they want. I might ask we keep it a tad gender even, like not five she-cats/toms- but then again that could make it somewhat interesting so eh. eue
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Re: burn [discussion]

Postby Keriae » Sun Jan 19, 2014 2:11 am

    uh I really like the plot
    sorry for not posting earlier

    I need a good warrior name for lionpaw ugh
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Re: burn [discussion]

Postby king boo » Sun Jan 19, 2014 2:59 am

    maybe they are desendants of all the clans but only some are more like different clans one rushclan cat may adore water where as another prefers being dry and some can swim some cant depending who their mentors are so when our characters join together they have to teach eachother their abilities to survive x'3
    them teaching each other would be adorable.

    also my character will either::
      1. be an apprentice warrior aged because her training was put on hold due to an injury on her 4th moon of training.
      2. be a warrior when i find a decent name x3
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Re: burn [discussion]

Postby soda » Sun Jan 19, 2014 3:28 am

    thanks keriae c: and I have some sites that could help.

    and Autumn, we could go with two different clans if you think it better, or even lower how long they've been one solid clan to like, one generation or so. that could make there be obvious differences between some of the cats [aka the kits of the cats once in rushclan, and the kits of the cats once in featherclan] as I mentioned before, and as you were talking about. we could even make them combine territories, so it's not all just marsh and stuff. or would it be simpler to just leave it as two separate clans? eue
    also I think having the first one would be rather fun. it would give more of a dynamic to the group, having an apprentice in it instead of just all warriors- even if she is actually of warriors age.
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Re: burn [discussion]

Postby Keriae » Sun Jan 19, 2014 3:57 am

    I love all these ideas
    i'm not creative so excuse my dull boringness xD


    err I think he'll be called lionstorm
    'cause I love "storm" as a suffix <3

    now I'm on the hunt for a picture whoooo!

    i'm sorry i'm really weird

    edit: what does everyone think of this picture?
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Re: burn [discussion]

Postby king boo » Sun Jan 19, 2014 8:20 am

    omg, lionstorm <3
    also i came up with a name for fernpaw
    fernsplash

    however at the beginning will be fernpaw but she will get annoyed at
    being called an apprentice when she's proved time and time again
    she is worthy of a warriors name, so yeah.. x3

    derp
    but omg use that pic, lionstorm will look so hansome
    will forever ship lionxfern
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