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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Mon Jan 20, 2014 6:48 am

~Rosewind~ wrote:Image/Description: A golden tabby
Name: Loveblaze
Gender: she-cat
Clan: Loveclan
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: She jumps high, she has sharp claws, and she's sweet, funny, brave and cute
Important Notes: If any cat attacks her clan she will kill them in five scratches because she has really sharp claws


Name Rating: 3/10
Name Type: Lyrical
Name Reasoning: Unfortunately, cats are incapable of looking like love. If she was named because she's a loving cat, she would not demonstrate this at birth and it's not enough to warrant a name-change (Besides, she's in a Clan named LoveClan - it's a bit awkward to name your kitten after the Clan).
-blaze is a very odd suffix, and I never recommend it because you can't be sure what it's supposed to mean. Does she blaze new trails? Does she have a fiery personality (which -storm covers)? Does she have a fierce sense of love and justice (-heart)? You can never tell, and it often wildly varies.
Alternative Name: Dandelionclaw/Appleclaw. Both prefixes are for a golden cat,and the reason I suggest -claw is below.

Character Rating: 7/10
Character Reasoning: There's only one thing I want to target here - the "sharp claws" thing. Of course she has sharp claws, every cat does. Cats regularly sharpen their claws, and she wouldn't have claws any sharper than her Clanmates. Besides, it doesn't really matter if her claws are sharp if she has no skills; you can have a shotgun and still have it be completely useless if you can't manage to aim the ruttin' thing. Any cat could easily overpower her no matter how sharp her claws are.
So here's my suggestion:
Don't focus on how sharp her claws are, focus on how great a fighter she is to so quickly kill a cat (which, by the way, is against the warrior code unless it's in self-defense). Any cat can have thorn-sharp claws. What matters is how you use them. Make her a little bulky, and have her be a terrifying foe for the way she can get you on your back and at her mercy in seconds. I can see her being a queen as she gets older; any cat who's a great fighter would easily be able to defend her little ones' lives.
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby border collies. » Mon Jan 20, 2014 7:53 am

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Name: Flowerstar
Gender: She-cat
Clan: SunClan
Rank: Leader
Personality/Skills: Sweet and kind, but will protect and cat she trusts.
Important Notes: Mate- Yes Kits- 4 Father and mother- Unknown
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Mon Jan 20, 2014 8:06 am

~Breezewind~ wrote:Image/Description: Image
Name: Flowerstar
Gender: She-cat
Clan: SunClan
Rank: Leader
Personality/Skills: Sweet and kind, but will protect and cat she trusts.
Important Notes: Mate- Yes Kits- 4 Father and mother- Unknown


Name Rating: 6/10
Name Type: Canonical
Name Reasoning: "Flower" is much better as a suffix than a prefix. The suffix -flower indicates a cat who is very good at taking care of kittens and being a parent. The prefix, though, is far too vague to really describe what your cat looks like.
Alternative Name: Poplarstar/Lightstar. Poplar- is for a white-and-grey cat, and she's a leader, so that explains -star just fine. (I don't think Light- needs explaining.)

Character Rating: 7/10
Character Reasoning: A Clan requirement is being protective of those you love. Being a gentle, kind leader is a bonus, and I can imagine her either being a -cloud cat (a calm personality) or a -flower cat (a maternal personality). A motherly molly watching over the Clan is a good bet for peaceful times within - their enemies, however, not so much. StarClan help any cat that angers someone who views the Clan as her little family.
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby wolfsong-mapleflame » Mon Jan 20, 2014 1:11 pm

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Name: snowbird
Gender: she-cat
Personality/Skills: she is kind
Important Notes: she is a med cat



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Name: mapleflame
Gender: she-cat
Important Notes: she is very pretty

name: wolfsong
gender: female
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Mon Jan 20, 2014 1:29 pm

wolfsong-mapleflame wrote:Image/Description:Image
Name: snowbird
Gender: she-cat
Personality/Skills: she is kind
Important Notes: she is a med cat



Image/Description:Image
Name: mapleflame
Gender: she-cat
Important Notes: she is very pretty

name: wolfsong
gender: female
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Thank you for the images, especially the first two. What adorable pictures!

Snowbird
Rate: 5/10
Type: Lyrical/Canonical
Reasoning: Snow- is good for the white on her, but she's a dilute calico with large patches of color, so she should be named something that clues in to that coloring. Meanwhile, -bird does nothing to tell me about her. Is she good at catching birds? Does she run so fast she looks like she's flying? Is she very good at climbing trees? It's impossible to say. If anything, I think she should be named for her personality (kindness is an offset of calm and relaxed cats), since she is indeed a medicine cat and would probably not spend much time climbing trees or hunting birds.
Alternative Name: Mottlecloud. Mottle- is good for a patched cat, and -cloud is for a kind, gentle personality.

Mapleflame
Rate: 8/10
Type: Canonical
Reasoning: Maple- is a very good suffix for her, since the name describes a golden-to-tortoiseshell cat, with her reddish brown color included. It's her suffix I'm iffy on.
The word "flame" doesn't really mean much or describe anything that another suffix doesn't. For example, if she was a firecracker of a cat, loud and probably easily grumpy, that's a -storm. If she's got a strong mindset and is very outspoken about what she thinks, she's a -heart. See what I mean?
Alternative Name: Mapleface. -face alludes to a very pretty/handsome cat, and it's quite a nice thing to call someone - good looks usually means good genetics, and it's likely that they will be a mother or father.

Wolfsong
Rate: 4/10
Type: Lyrical/Canonical
Reasoning: Depending on where your cat lives, they have never interacted with a wolf in their life. The reason is simple - there are no wolves in England. If she's somewhere else where wolves are seen, then by all means let her keep the name. However, at face value I'm going to say that she's in the UK with everyone else.
Then we have -song, which, like -flame, doesn't really say much about the cat. This name, I assume, alludes to a wolf's howl, which she, again, would not know about. Besides, cats don't really know what songs are, unless it's some foreign Clan that's discovered music or something (I'm betting they haven't).
Alternative Name: Cinderfur/Cinderpelt. I'm not sure of her skills or personality, so I went with the default choices.
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby wolfsong-mapleflame » Mon Jan 20, 2014 2:01 pm

that really helps, thanks!
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby tikitiki6 » Mon Jan 20, 2014 2:10 pm

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Image/Description: Short fur, white calico, with a long fur tail
Name: Tangletalon
Gender: Female
Clan: Windclan (but her dad was a thunder-shadow clan cat, and her mom was a wind-river clan cat)
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Brave, Hasty, Happy, Serious, Determined, Kind.
Important Notes: She left windclan for a bit and went to a city far away from the lake territory, and secretly had a kit there (father was a street cat) when she returned to the lake, she had the two cats that lived in the two-leg house in shadowclan territory protect her kit. The kits name was Tormen and was part of a later prophecie.


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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby wolfsong-mapleflame » Mon Jan 20, 2014 2:14 pm

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Name: pineheart
Gender: Female
Clan: shadowclan
Rank: deputy
Personality/Skills: she is brave, strong-willed and intelligent
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