~Rosewind~ wrote:Image/Description: A golden tabby
Name: Loveblaze
Gender: she-cat
Clan: Loveclan
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: She jumps high, she has sharp claws, and she's sweet, funny, brave and cute
Important Notes: If any cat attacks her clan she will kill them in five scratches because she has really sharp claws
Name Rating: 3/10
Name Type: Lyrical
Name Reasoning: Unfortunately, cats are incapable of looking like love. If she was named because she's a loving cat, she would not demonstrate this at birth and it's not enough to warrant a name-change (Besides, she's in a Clan named LoveClan - it's a bit awkward to name your kitten after the Clan).
-blaze is a very odd suffix, and I never recommend it because you can't be sure what it's supposed to mean. Does she blaze new trails? Does she have a fiery personality (which -storm covers)? Does she have a fierce sense of love and justice (-heart)? You can never tell, and it often wildly varies.
Alternative Name: Dandelionclaw/Appleclaw. Both prefixes are for a golden cat,and the reason I suggest -claw is below.
Character Rating: 7/10
Character Reasoning: There's only one thing I want to target here - the "sharp claws" thing. Of course she has sharp claws, every cat does. Cats regularly sharpen their claws, and she wouldn't have claws any sharper than her Clanmates. Besides, it doesn't really matter if her claws are sharp if she has no skills; you can have a shotgun and still have it be completely useless if you can't manage to aim the ruttin' thing. Any cat could easily overpower her no matter how sharp her claws are.
So here's my suggestion:
Don't focus on how sharp her claws are, focus on how great a fighter she is to so quickly kill a cat (which, by the way, is against the warrior code unless it's in self-defense). Any cat can have thorn-sharp claws. What matters is how you use them. Make her a little bulky, and have her be a terrifying foe for the way she can get you on your back and at her mercy in seconds. I can see her being a queen as she gets older; any cat who's a great fighter would easily be able to defend her little ones' lives.





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