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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby .kestral » Sun Feb 02, 2014 2:21 pm

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.kestral wrote:It's all good with me :)
You will be getting more from me. I love how honest you are with what you think!


I'm honestly relieved that my semi-bluntness hasn't injured any egos so far, haha. I'm looking forward to reviewing some more cats!


Bluntness is good, people need more bluntness. And I shall leave you in peace, until tomorrow :)
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Sun Feb 02, 2014 2:24 pm

.kestral wrote:Bluntness is good, people need more bluntness. And I shall leave you in peace, until tomorrow :)


I'll see you then!
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby corrosive_limes » Sun Feb 02, 2014 5:31 pm

This is Zenstripe. I named her Zen- because she originally was white with blue stripes. I named her Zen- because I thought it brought out her unatural colors. I named her -stripe to describe her markings.
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Pokechu12 » Mon Feb 03, 2014 1:43 am

Quick question, would Vixen- be an acceptable prefix?

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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby .kestral » Mon Feb 03, 2014 2:47 am

Image/Description:
Dappled silver she cat with faint tabby markings. She has white paws, a white chest and blue eyes. She is slowly built, with long legs.
Name:
Splashpelt
Gender:
Female
Clan:
Waterclan
Rank:
Warrior
Personality/Skills:
Cool, calm and quiet. She keeps to herself when possible, choosing the company of her adopted sister over others. She wasn't born in the clan but has adapted well to the watery terrain and there island home. She can fish as well as any if her clan mates, but is also good at seeking out food in the trees, as her city blood allows her to adapt for food shortages well. She isn't one to seek out battle, instead she often chooses to sit back and wait for someone else to make the first move.
Important Notes:
Born to a powerful city family, her family was destroyed and her guardian took her to the forest at 4moons. Her birth name was Meera.
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Mon Feb 03, 2014 2:51 am

Zenstar wrote:This is Zenstripe. I named her Zen- because she originally was white with blue stripes. I named her Zen- because I thought it brought out her unatural colors. I named her -stripe to describe her markings.


Thank you for the picture! -stripe is just fine on her, then, haha. She does have very noticeable markings, and so long as she doesn't have a tabby-implying prefix (Tiger-, for example), I think that shouldn't be a problem.

Zen- is sorta like Spirit-, in that it's an intangible state of being rather than a concrete image. You and I probably have different images of what "zen" means/looks like, so it's a really subjective name. I'd give her a grey-implying prefix, like Bream, Boulder or Ivy (even though Ivy's a little dark, but I think you could make it work).
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Mon Feb 03, 2014 2:54 am

Pokechu12 wrote:Quick question, would Vixen- be an acceptable prefix?


I'm afraid not! The reason is because we already have the name Fox-, which would cover whatever Vixen-would want to say. If it's a gender oriented thing, it still wouldn't work too well.

Gender has a huge impact on our society (unfortunately), but in the warrior world the only difference between toms and mollies is that the she-cats can give birth and earn the -flower name. The same would apply to their world around them. They don't really care enough to find out the differences in gender between foxes, or badgers, or snakes. All they really see is the enemy.

I hope that got my point across. Basically, cats don't care about gender differences between any animal, let alone a fox.
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Mon Feb 03, 2014 3:09 am

.kestral wrote:Image/Description:
Dappled silver she cat with faint tabby markings. She has white paws, a white chest and blue eyes. She is slowly built, with long legs.
Name:
Splashpelt
Gender:
Female
Clan:
Waterclan
Rank:
Warrior
Personality/Skills:
Cool, calm and quiet. She keeps to herself when possible, choosing the company of her adopted sister over others. She wasn't born in the clan but has adapted well to the watery terrain and there island home. She can fish as well as any if her clan mates, but is also good at seeking out food in the trees, as her city blood allows her to adapt for food shortages well. She isn't one to seek out battle, instead she often chooses to sit back and wait for someone else to make the first move.
Important Notes:
Born to a powerful city family, her family was destroyed and her guardian took her to the forest at 4moons. Her birth name was Meera.


Name Rating: 7/10
Name Type: Canonical
Name Reasoning: -pelt is just fine in this regard, but I think that we should change Splash-. A splash is a quick, temporary flash of action, and it can come in a variety of colors, like -pool. At some point in time I'll talk about water-based names like Splash-, but for now I'll just focus on this review.
Overall, the only thing that I would think is a problem is Splash-, and that's easily remedied.
Alternative Name: Sleetpelt/Juniperpelt. Both prefixes describe a grey tabby!

Character Rating: 9/10
Character Reasoning: I don't see anything too wrong with her! Her backstory gives her enough leeway to be able to develop into a warrior without sentiment towards her old life.
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby qiripan » Mon Feb 03, 2014 3:23 am

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Image/Description: Blizzardstep is a smallish white cat with light gray splotches on her. She has brownish yellow eyes.
Name: Blizzardstep
Gender: She-cat
Clan: JourneyClan
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Blizzardstep is a pretty fast runner, hence her name. She's not very talented in anything else. Blizzardstep ususally keeps to herself, but occaisionally talks to other cats in the Clan.
Important Notes: She wanted to be a medicine cat, but her parents forced her to be a warrior instead.
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Remini » Mon Feb 03, 2014 3:26 am

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Name: Mothflight
Gender: Female
Clan: Windclan
Rank: Medicine cat
Personality/Skills: Mothflight is a young and outgoing she-cat who excels in hunting and gathering rather then fighting. She's very gentle and passionate about her work, and can talk about it for hours and hours on end without even blinking. She's a pacifist and tends to stay out of the warriors ways, and tries to keep as an extremely close relationship with Starclan as she possibly can. She adores nature and working. She finds kits extremely tiresome and tends to stay away from them unless they need her assistance. Mothflight doesn't snap or argue easily, and is rarely mad. When she's stressed she tends to makes many mistakes, which is a huge flaw that she can't seem to correct.
Important Notes: N/A. I probably missed flight being reviewed,

Image/Description: Fluffy light brown tom with green/yellow eyes, he has a scar along his back.
Name: Bearstar (I'm unsure of a suitable name for him when he was a warrior.)
Gender: male
Clan: Streamclan
Rank: Leader
Personality/Skills: Tends to be angered easily, and is usually quite devious side. He's proud, and not the least bit respectful of his elders or any other cat for that matter. He's narcissistic and self centered, considering himself to be better then anyone else. He's a fighter, and when he became leader he did it in a way that would be unforgivable if anyone knew. He's an 'I don't care what you think' type of cat, who's personality wont change for the next female who walks nearby. He's unforgiving, ruthless, and doesn't give second chances.
Important Notes: He used to be a rogue, with a much more hidden devious side. The deputy of a clan fell in love with him, and because of that they allowed him into the clan. She soon became the leader, and named him deputy. He waited a few moons until she had settled in, and planned an attack that would happen on the patrol. He was a trusted member of the clan, and had a few followers that knew his true self. After his plan succeeded, he was deemed the leader of the clan, and allowed other rogues into it. It quickly became a clan with no code, and was a force to be reckoned with.
I get bored of goody-goody cats, so I thought I'd create a kind of ruthless cat. I can't think of a good name for him, so I'm hoping you can help me out with that once again! I'm also still working out his past and personality, so it's not all that good right now.
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