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[Affliction]

Thank you cacti. c: Your form was beautiful as well, one thing that I really liked was the use of the rectangle symbol.
Another part that stood out was the use of the quote boxes, as each section could share a different thing about the character.

Thanks as well smoke.
I'll be sure to do what you suggested. Do you think you could possibly post here or pm me with some tips on how to even out the rows?

[kingly]

thank you Atlantic and smoke. ^^
and I have fixed the coloring to make it less vibrant so it can contrast to the other colors :D, and either one of the quote boxes can be used as a description for the character.

[kingly]

(mieh spam sosorry) I would also like to know how to arrange the rows as well (:

[selenite.]

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Atlantic. -- alright, so the main thing is that you don't want to enter absolutely everything, i could easily simply fix it by deleting the fact you entered the /left and the left between the words in row one and the second pink bar. i also deleted the /left that ends the first pink bar and the left that starts bennie's row. encase you're confused here's the code c:

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[Affliction]

Ah, now I can go back and fix a bunch of slanted things. This is very helpful and I appreciate your help. Thanks again Smoke!

[selenite.]

no problem, so glad I helped c:

[kopus]

sorry, i was gone. where do i get back in on this? ^^

[mint.]

atlantic. --- the "-" are too long for my monitor, and so it doesn't fit in parallel to the gif. personally, i find it tasteless, with lack of color. i would suggest putting personality into your signature c: some color, etc etc
other than that, love the signature!

cacti. --- i dislike the quote boxes, and find it completely distracting from the form and color scheme (which may not suit a male character - sorry, me being too biased), and the pink is way to light for text (in my opinion). if you want the quote boxes to "frame" the picture, we can come up with a way to do so c:

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so we all chose one person's palette and picture, and created a blob of code (signature or character form). now, i want to you to critique the blob of code that was made with your picture and code. please include at least one good thing, and one thing that could be changed. also, i would love to know if it was what you expected/or not.

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for me: i actually didn't expect you to make a signature, smoke c: i really think it nice and appealing to the eye, giving it a major break from that fontmeme. i think what you did really good was that you achieved the look you wanted (a "peaceful" signature), that still allows more customization (the text box).
what i think you chould change next time would be the colors. despite the lovely look the signature has, i feel that there is no emphasis on the headline (what a peaceful place). perhaps bolder or larger?

[kingly]

-- for Atlantic's post, the only thing that I didn't like was in between the grey lines were a different type of text on either side, and I was going to mention the evening out of the rows, but I'm sure that was accidental c: however I find her form for Bennie very well done; it's nicely short and brief but all the while very neat and pretty. And no, it was not what I expected.

[Affliction]

Thank you cacti c:
I really like how you had the text in multiple locations. I thought this was a really interesting way to organize text and its something I might try it later on. One thing I think you could work on though is trying to neaten up the form. Possibly move some things a bit closer and remove some quote boxes.
And on another note, it wasn't exactly what I had expected either.