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Re: sedgeclan ➢ semi-lit+ ➢ limited places ➢ med. cat open

Postby △ nepencity △ » Tue Sep 01, 2015 1:51 am

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- female - warrior - 29 moons - tags: mistcloud -

As he spoke again, she couldn't respond with anything else then a sweet giggle. Her tail raised up to the air and she smiled as she looked at him. He did have nice eyes, they were soft and kind. Almost like they were speaking to her and complementing her in the way that he looked at her, and it only made her heart beat faster.
She looked around at their surroundings and sighed satisfied still with a smile on her face. The creek was a nice place and she liked hanging around there. Feathercloud stopped for a minute and looked over at Mistcloud as he spoke again. "That was actually what I had in mind, I'd be up for that! And I think Swallowpaw could use a training partner" she said with a chuckle. She hadn't trained Swallowpaw with anyone else before, but it could be useful to try out their fighting techniques.
It seemed like the creek was as peaceful as always and their next goal was to get to the dead forest before going back. She was exited for the training and almost wanted to just go back right away, but she had to do her job properly. And as they walked again, she looked over at Mistcloud with warm cheeks and a sweet smile. "I think it'll be clearing up later tonight.. do you wanna come to the creek and watch the stars with me? I usually do it alone, but it could be nice with some company" she said, her tail twitching slowly and gently brushing against his. That was a stupid question, why would be join me to the creek? ugh.. she thought and felt like saying 'never mind' and forgetting about it.
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Re: sedgeclan ➢ semi-lit+ ➢ limited places ➢ med. cat open

Postby brunchman2000 » Tue Sep 01, 2015 3:24 am

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....brightpelt ➸ tom ➸ tags ;; mintflower
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        brightpelt grew tired of watching rookfang and bramblepaw, so he searched the camp for someone to talk to. mintflower had just arrived back at camp, so he decided to walk over to the she cat. she sat at the entrance of the camp, seemingly trying to avoid being distracted by the arguing toms. he sat beside her, smiling slightly. "they're arguing over some sort of prey issue, if you were wondering." he spoke, his voice soft and gentle. his ears twitched, and he glanced at the she cat. "anyway, how has your morning been, mintflower?"
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Re: sedgeclan ➢ semi-lit+ ➢ open

Postby spotthecow » Tue Sep 01, 2015 3:49 am

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location; sedgeclan campshe-catwarriorsingletags; Batpaw, Duckpaw

>>>> Morningblaze looked over the Apprentice to find that Bramblepaw was now walking back to the Apprentices Den, head high and tail flicking. She chose to ignore it for now. Looking back down at the two Apprentices, she let out a soft meow. "I don't think it's a bother, do you Batpaw?" Her tail gently flick as she thought. Perhaps he won't mind, it'd be good to have him converse with other Apprentices. She then smiled lightly at the two, head tipped slightly.



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location; sedgeclan camptommentor; Pebblestripesingletags; Rookfang, Pebblestripe

>>>> The tabby tom's claws were unsheathed, sinking into the ground more and more each time the deputy spoke of punishment. With each little word the black tom spoke, it made his neck bristle. Bramblepaw didn't care who was aware of the two arguing, and practically glared at most of them, except Kestrelpaw. When Rookfang leaned down to whisper in his ear, Bramblepaw's ears flattened and he turned his head aside. Before you run out of time... The thought repeated through his mind, angrily. So you want me out of the clan? Is that it? His tail lashed disrespectfully, not looking sad, but rather filled with hatred of for the large tom. You better watch your back Deputy or else... "When I become of age, I want to challenge you to a fight, and if you can't handle it by that time, then that just proves who is stronger." Bramblepaw had whispered eagerly back, tail flicking back and forth as he now muttered quietly. "Maybe I'll change from your punishment, but I know that you are not my leader, and never will be." Bramblepaw had to get the last word in, just because that was how he was, and plus, he wanted to prove to the other Apprentices just how brave he was. Being that the tom was born a loner, his independence didn't change. His head turned slowly to find his mentor in front of him, he nodded lightly towards her, and turned around and began to walk back to the Apprentice den, not saying another word. I will practice my fighting every night, he won't even notice...I'll be a warrior soon and nothing is going to stop that, not even him.
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Re: sedgeclan ➢ semi-lit+ ➢ limited places ➢ med. cat open

Postby stewie. » Tue Sep 01, 2015 4:33 am

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apprentice - six moons - waking up - calm - brightpelt
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owlpaw then managed to get up, glancing around so he could find something to do, or someone to do something with. the main option was to just train, but, honestly, he didn't want to do so. he would rather just maybe talk, or watch the medicine cat sort out herbs. his eyes narrowed towards the medicine cat's den, but then glanced back towards sorrel paw. he got back up to his pads, and he shot mini glances at each corner of the clan. there was the normal amount of apprentices, along with some warriors. he then spotted brightpelt, his mentor, and then decided to go to brightpelt. maybe they could train, because, obviously, training was mandatory in an apprentice's life. he kept a speedy pace, but along with that it carried a careful one, one that was holding a more aware look on the aspect of the camp.

once he reached towards brightpelt, he saw him having a small chat with another feline, mintflower. he bounded closer to the two, and meowed, " hi brightpelt, hi mintflower. ", he had a faint smile plated on his face, but he sounded more welcoming than obnoxious or nosy. brightpelt seemed somewhat busy, but owlpaw sensed that he didn't carry to much business with him, he was only talking with another warrior. he hoped that he wouldn't seem obnoxious towards the two, he felt as if apprentice's weren't really respected to a full point, due to their lack of experience. but he was aware of both of the feline's personalities, and none really seemed to show to hurt him.
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Re: sedgeclan ➢ semi-lit+ ➢ limited places ➢ med. cat open

Postby yeeee. » Tue Sep 01, 2015 4:43 am

Batpaw stiffened as loud, enthusiastic mews from Duckpaw pierced his eardrums. Focusing on not opening his maw and continuing to groom himself, it took the blind apprentice a few seconds to realize that Duckpaw's voice was deflated. Lowering his paw from his maw slowly, the tall tom had a feeling his 'silence' wasn't exactly working. As if proving his point, the next sentence came, and he could almost feel a stare on him. Nape prickling just the slight, a very soft sigh escaped him, and his filmy slate eyes narrowed ever so slightly. Doesn't matter what I think. Doesn't matter what I think, he repeated in his mind, but as if a mockery was being made of his efforts, Morningblaze returned. No only that, she acknowledged him and Duckpaw patrolling in such a kind way, almost as if seeing if he would snap. This is a test of my patience. The is the only thing that makes any sense is if I go to the creek and Duckpaw goes to the Deadforest where no type of prey can be alarmed by her clumsy, loud, annoying presence. But, If I tell the truth, I will be despised. No doubt that would be a wonderful way to be introduced - for two moons I have kept my maw shut. If I have an undignified outburst now then the entire clan will completely despise me. Or reject me. Starclan, you are toying with me, aren't you? Fine. I'll play your little game. Duckpaw may be abysmal at hunting, but fishing... maybe she can manage that. There is always the fact that Morningblaze may completely reject the idea, but can't win it all, especially in my case.

"No. Not at all,"Batpaw mewed, his ever soft voice coated with this... higher-pitched edge. Lying had never been one of his strong points, but he wasn't worried about it - none of the cats knew his tendencies, so they probably just thinking he was another excited apprentice ready to go on a hunt. Remembering some valuable training then, the ebony tom forced perhaps the most strange smile on his maw - even though he couldn't see himself, he knew it probably looked almost like a lopsided sneer. My lying is, without a doubt, worst than my fighting - is this coming across as sarcastic or joyous? "But, could we stop at the creek first?" I'm blind, so most think I cannot fish... well... not in the traditional sense. A more humiliating way, but it's better than not feeding the clan at all I suppose... desperate times call for desperate measures... if I had put this much more effort into keeping him off my back then maybe I wouldn't be here now, Batpaw thought bitterly, but then realized he'd fallen completely silent without an explanation. "I would like to look for some marigold and perhaps fish some." Forcing himself to keep the 'smile' on his maw, the tall apprentice sat stiffer than a twig, inwardly wondering if his small goals for the day were about to collapse just as his life was.

Tagged ;; Morningblaze, Duckpaw

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Mistcloud flickered his ears to the sound of a soft giggle - hearing another clanmate happy made him smile a bit wider. I need to hunt more often, the silver tom thought, angling his gaze to the top of the trees while listening to Feathercloud. Silent for a moment, he then replied, "It would benefit the two immensely. I just hope Duckpaw doesn't get too distracted talking," the silver tom said, then shook his head with a soft chuckle. "But she'll adapt," Mistcloud mused aloud, golden eyes flickering to the shadowline as he thought a bit more. Duckpaw might be distracted in the beginning, but she'll adapt and then things should go smoothly. Hearing Feathercloud words made him snap out of his thoughts - making eye contact again, the silver tom smiled widely. "I'd love to," he purred, flickering his ears back as another rustle greeted him. It was time. Feeling her tail against his, Mistcloud offered her one more smile, before branching off into the bushes.

Once in the bushes, the silver tom crouched, golden eyes roving the dense undergrowth. My main flaw in hunting is my tendency to rush. Slow and steady, Mistcloud... taking a few pawsteps forward, his eyes then locked on a squirrel chewing on a nut. Slowing down even more, he waited until he was about a foxleap away. Just as the petite tom was preparing to spring, the squirrel suddenly took off. Mousedung, Mistcloud thought, accelerating - he lunged forth, solidly grabbing the neck and snapping it just before the squirrel reached the tree. A bit disappointed at the sloppiness of his catch yet quite pleased he'd made up for it, Mistcloud buried it at the base of the tree before slipping back through the bush, deciding to try more open ground for a bird or two.

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Re: sedgeclan ➢ semi-lit+ ➢ limited places ➢ med. cat open

Postby brunchman2000 » Tue Sep 01, 2015 5:15 am

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...brightpelt ➸ tom ➸ tags ;; mintflower, owlpaw
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        brightpelt smiled as his apprentice padded towards him. he expected him to still be sleeping, therefore he hadn't bothered to wake him up. "good morning, owlpaw. sorry I didn't get to you sooner, I thought you'd still be in your nest." he stood up, stretching out of his position beside mintflower. "well then, seeing as there isn't much going on around here, how about we go out for a walk and begin training?" the small calico titled his head in question, and glanced up at the sun. it was late morning, a bit later than he should've started, but anything would do. he planned to teach owlpaw some basic moves, but plans could change depending on. he glanced at the she cat beside him, and let out a quite purr, as his nose twitched in delight.
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Re: sedgeclan ➢ semi-lit+ ➢ limited places ➢ med. cat open

Postby stewie. » Tue Sep 01, 2015 5:32 am

owlpaw
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apprentice - six moons - waking up - calm - brightpelt
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owlpaw smiled. " isn't everyone up? ", he said excitedly. it seemed as if most apprentices were awakened; sorrelpaw, bat paw, bramble paw, kestrel paw, and maybe some others. however, there was plenty of apprentices, and with apprentices there was also the warriors and elders that were awake. he stretched lightly, soon nod ding. " and it is okay, you didn't have to get me early. " he added. his tail made light movements with simple excitement, he enjoyed training faintly, but it was still fun towards him; he wasn't really full of energy like the other apprentices, but he held a good amount when it came towards training, hunting, and other activities meant for the warriors and warrior apprentices. he then headed towards the opening towards the camp, with simple energy flowing through his small body. a walk would be a treat for him at first, as he didn't leave the camp much, as he only became six moons about less than half a moon ago. but, training was daily, even though it felt as if he left not much. maybe he could explore more areas with brightpelt, maybe after training, and before. however, that was up to brightpelt- he was his mentor, and he made the decisions, whether it was collecting moss or hunting, owlpaw couldn't really decide. sometimes he could, but it was mostly brightpelt whom he relied on to learn about the tasks of his ranking, and his future one. it would come in use whenever, really. if he was punished, which he hoped not much, or if he ever became a medicine cat, like past warriors who got injuries.
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Re: sedgeclan ➢ semi-lit+ ➢ limited places ➢ med. cat open

Postby △ nepencity △ » Tue Sep 01, 2015 7:25 am

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As he gave her a response she wanted, Feathercloud smiled widely as they entered the bushes. She liked to hunt rather then fight and hoped Swallowpaw didn't mind her lack of fight training in the start. Saving the best for last, as her mother would say. Thinking about it, she snapped out for a moment. It had been a while since she last thought of her mother, and this was a bad time to do it. And as Mistcloud had leaped towards a squirrel, she quickly snapped back to what was happening and watched as he caught it. She smiled to herself and noticed two birds at the opposite side of the bush. They looked like crows and they were fat too.
Licking her muzzle, she crouched down and walked silently and slowly towards them. She knew her hunting and had used most of her time even after apprentice training and after getting her name, to practice her hunting skills.
Getting closer to the crows, they looked alert and she stopped. It was like every muscle in her body stood still and she held her breath. Ears perked forwards and she smirked. One.. two.. three!
With a quick bounce, she bolted forwards and grabbed the fattest crow of the two. Her teeth dug into it's neck and it didn't struggle for more then a minute before getting heavy in her grip. She dropped it onto the ground and put her paw on it. "Your favorites, right?" she spoke to herself while looking at the dead crow.
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Re: sedgeclan ➢ semi-lit+ ➢ limited places ➢ med. cat open

Postby brunchman2000 » Tue Sep 01, 2015 8:39 am

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        brightpelt nodded and gave a short reply, followed by a lazy yawn. "yep, most cats are, exept for the lazy ones." he turned his attention to mintflower, who hadn't said much. "we'll be back soon mintflower, sorry to cut our conversation short." he turned back to owlpaw, giving a quick flick of his tail. "so, I was thinking we go for a walk first, then you can help me decide what you want to work on today. depending on how long that takes, we might be able to catch a patrol or something. how does that sound?" brightpelt titled his head in question, perking his ears up at his apprentice. brightpelt had never really liked having the weight of an apprentice on his shoulders because he always felt like he was doing something wrong. owlpaw was good for him though, young, but not energetic like some apprentices. it gave brightpelt a headache thinking about what some of the other warriors must have to deal with, but not him.
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Re: sedgeclan ➢ semi-lit+ ➢ limited places ➢ high ranks open

Postby Mufa » Tue Sep 01, 2015 9:48 am

sparrowpaw // tom // twelve moons // mentor: rookfang // location: clan camp // tagged: swallowpaw


    Sparrowpaw looked over at Swallowpaw, his eyes filled with disbelief. "You've never been on a dawn patrol before?" he asked abruptly. The tom collected himself and straightened up. "I guess your still new to apprenticeship, so it's not too bad. You'll probably go on a dawn patrol sometime within the next moon," he said reassuringly. When she asked about his patrols, he shrugged. Sparrowpaw didn't want to brag, but since she had asked, he wasn't not going to tell her. "I've been on quite a few, especially since I'm nearing the end of my suns as an apprentice." He glanced away from Swallowpaw when he saw his mentor, Rookfang, approach Bramblepaw. He watched with a close gaze as his mentor punished the apprentice. Sparrowpaw was quite confused why his mentor had done this, for he knew that it couldn't have been about the prey. Maybe it was his attitude or posture? His eyes trailed back to Swallowpaw a few moments later. His face was scrunched in curiosity.


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