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Re: BLAZECLAN ▩ ¾literate ▩ CLOSED

Postby MulataMermaid » Tue Jan 07, 2014 1:08 pm

I will get my post up when benny returns, I think we shouldn't
post anymore until she returns}}
The future lies before you;
like a field of fallen snow.
Be careful how you tread it;
for every step will show.

They'll judge you by your past;
Which makes it do or die.
Unless of course my darling;
You spread your wings and flii.

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smallmouse - post who cares

Postby eiznek » Tue Jan 07, 2014 2:08 pm

smallmouse
21 moons
she-cat

crush; no one
mate; no one

gentle, understanding
rank; warrior

mood; laid back
where; camp
with; her patrol

tagged; dapplefur, larkpaw,
rainpaw
        smallmouse loped gracefully next to dapplefur, providing her support whenever the she-cat stumbled. "don't worry about it dapplefur, accidents happen to even the noblest of cats. don't beat yourself up about it, we can always go again." she affectionately nudged dapplefur's side with her tail. knowing dapplefur, she was most likely going to fret on the incident for a while now. smallmouse really wished she wouldn't, but that's just how it was for the she-cat.
        suddenly, something loud started to thunder toward them. alarmed, smallmouse spun around and locked eyes with the ginormous creature that was barreling towards the patrol. instantly she released an ear-splitting screech. "FOX! dapplefur, go! get out of the way! rainpaw, go alarm the camp! tell them to send warriors! go, GO!" with adrenaline pumping through her veins, smallmouse grabbed dapplefur's scruff, attempting to haul her away from the fox and closer to camp, though it was no use, dapplefur was twice her size. letting out a frustrated hiss, smallmouse turned around to face the fox. there was no way she could deal with it on her own, or in that case get out alive. panicking, smallmouse tried to clear her head. think smallmouse, think... the fox was now only 3 feet infront of them, and smallmouse prayed that rainpaw was well on her way to camp. before she knew it, she was face-to-face with the fox's snapping jaws. hissing, she leaped back and dug her claws into it's nose. it wasn't much, but it was enough to distract it. it was the perfect time to climb up the nearest tree, but she couldn't leave dapplefur to fend for herself. willing all her courage and strength, smallmouse turned and faced the fox, snarling and hissing under her breath. you're gonna die, you crazy cat. you are gonna die.
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mistystar V // ashpaw V

Postby benexo » Tue Jan 07, 2014 4:41 pm

    [ thank you Célina! i don't ever want to stop you guys from roleplaying, but i'd prefer it if you wouldn't go more than two pages without me next time i'm gone ~
    so exciting with the fox eee ouo
    also don't mind mistystar's post if you have already left/responded to it/whatever, just quoting it until the patrols return ]

benexo wrote:{. m i s t y s t a r
    ▷ thirty-five moons . leader . tagged ; heatherflare, ravenfeather, northblaze, smallmouse, rosepaw, patchpaw, larkpaw

      -----as heatherflare bounced off in search of swanfeather, mistystar listened to northblaze's questions to ravenfeather and the latter warrior's response as well as his remarks to her. the leader's whiskers twitched; she thought she had made her intentions clear, but she must've caused some confusion. "yes, ravenfeather. i was recommending you join smallmouse's hunting patrol for the first half of your assessments, then split off, but whichever way you see fit is fine with me. i trust your judgement." you should have made it more straightforward. mistystar scolded herself in her mind. every slip-up, no matter how small, affected the white she-cat's confidence, but she always pushed twice as hard to make up for it.

      -----mistystar watched smallmouse and her cats take off just as rosepaw and patchpaw arrived in front of their mentors. with everything pretty much sorted out, the leader looked at the two toms and meowed, "thanks, you two. i appreciate your hard work," before turning around and heading back to her den. just organizing patrols that morning left mistystar feeling worn out, and she padded over to her nest to groom herself for a while.

      -----with new-leaf in full throttle, the she-cat hoped the change of weather would bring some pleasantness back to blazeclan. the cats all looked skinny and could use some fattening up, and the warriors needed to begin training their apprentices harder now that the snow had melted away from the training hollow. speaking of training, larkpaw needs to do learn some more battle techniques, mistystar thought. she swiped her paws over her ears to groom while pondering which moves she would teach him that afternoon.


{. a s hpaw
    ▷ ten moons . apprentice . tagged ; stormfrost

      -----ashpaw meowed a quick greeting in response to stormfrost's, padding behind him as his mentor exited the warrior's den. the apprentice listened as stormfrost told him they'd be battle training that day. ashpaw's ears perked up; he loved battle training, and was always eager to learn new attack moves. but his paw pad ached slightly when he pressed down on it, and ashpaw pulled an unhappy face. however, the tabby tom did not want anything getting in the way of his duties, so he shook his head, as if to disperse the pain and nodded at stormfrost's plan. "sounds great."

      -----ashpaw was four moons into his training, and with hopefully only a few moons left until he would become a warrior, he knew every moment he got to spend with his mentor was crucial. a sore paw pad is nothing, ashpaw told himself. you're going to have far worse injuries to deal with on the battle field when you're a warrior. the lean tom made up his mind. he waited for stormfrost's next instructions, his striped tail waving, and eventually a feeling of excitement began to set in his chest, as it always did when ashpaw went out with his mentor. he was so close to becoming a real live blazeclan warrior, and nothing could stop him from earning that.
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Postby reichenbach falls » Wed Jan 08, 2014 6:24 am

DAPPLEFEATHER

she-cat 26 moons tags;; smallmouse, rainpaw, patrol


      Dapplefur's shoulder bumped with Smallmouse's as she hobbled. Smallmouse reassured her that everything was still okay, and that even the best have accidents sometimes. She even smiled a little. But her smile was short lived. Suddenly, a great crashing and overall chaos erupted behind them. A tawny pelt galloped towards them, and Dapplefur recognized it immediately. It was a big and very angry fox. Smallmouse pushed her towards camp, trying to get her to safety. Like a true leader, the lithe she-cat ordered Rainpaw to camp for help, and faced the fox herself to buy Dapplefur time to escape. She completely froze with fear at how helpless she was.

      Smallmouse struck at the fox, trying to distract it and keep it's attention on her. Trying to think fast, Dapplefur looked at the trees nearby. It would be a challenge, but it would be her best bet. She ran to the nearest tree, and hopped onto the bark. She dug in her hind legs and front right paw. Her left hovered a mouse-length from the bark. Gritting her teeth and summoning all the strength she could muster, she made her way up the tree and onto the branch that hung directly above Smallmouse and the fox. Now that she was safe, she called down to Smallmouse.
      "Smallmouse, climb a tree! Hurry! I'm safe, you don't need to fight it!"
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Re: BLAZECLAN ▩ ¾literate ▩ CLOSED

Postby MulataMermaid » Wed Jan 08, 2014 9:21 am

No problem benny, I know what it's like to miss out, wouldn't wish
the struggle of catching back up on anyone :3 Most of my cats are
just waiting for replies, grrrrrrrrr the suspense}}


εlliε
s h e-c a t : 2 5 m o o n s : r o u g e
t a g s: here

Ellie had been soaking her paws in the water, getting them used to the gentle cool of the lake before she would have to launch her paw in and retrieve a fish. She had already spotted many of the silver creatures, slipping through the water like shining snakes. They were of decent size, surely one would fill her up. After a few moments had passed, Ellie decided to position herself for the actual hunt. She made sure she was facing the sun, that way her shadow wouldn't fall over the water and frighten all of the fish away from her. Just as she was focusing her eyes on the water, she heard rustling in the reeds about ten fox-lengths ahead. She perked her ears towards the noise, and was surprised to see a rather large dark grey and white tom hurtling towards her with great speed. Apparently a male, he let out a fearsome caturwal. Ellie's fur immediately bristled at this apparent threat, she rose to her paws, and stood on the tips of them to make her seem bigger. Just as she thought the tom would collide into her, he stopped suddenly, looking somewhat embarrassed. He smelt like a rouge, but why was he skirting Blazeclan territory? Ellie was now confused. In case this was a trick, though, she stayed on her guard. "Come at me, fleabag, I dare you!" She hissed menacingly, narrowing her eyes. If this guy wanted a fight, then a fight he would get.



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s h e-c a t : 9 m o o n s : a p p r e n t i c e
t a g s: patchpaw, ravenfeather, northblaze

The black apprentice looked around the camp, she was suddenly veyr eager to get started. She was looking forward to training with a den mate, as well as two strong and loyal warriors. Hopefully they could make her a great warrior. Rosepaw thought that she was a decent cat at hunting and fighting, but she could always use improvement. At Patchpaw's question, she turned to the she-cat. "Hopefully soon! Ravenfeather, can we go now please!" She asked jumping to her paws and looking at both of the warriors eagerly. She couldn't wait to get started.



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t o m : 3 0 m o o n s : w a r r i o r
t a g s: here

Northblaze nodded at Smallmouse, that idea was perfectly fine with him. He liked that the patrols would be splitting up, it would allow him to compare his apprentice's skills to that of another. Just as he was about to discuss with Ravenfeather where they should start hunting, Patchpaw and Rosepaw came rushing out of the apprentice's den. Northblaze couldn't help feeling a little bit dissapointed, especially since his apprentice was one of the older ones. They were just apprentices, all the same, though. He didn't think a punishment was in order, since they didn't oversleep very late. "Morning, Patchpaw," He said evenly. "You are a bit late, don't let it happen again," He said firmer than his morning greeting. He looked over both of the apprentices, before he rose to hise paws and said, "Today, Ravenfeather and I will be assessing you. Both of you are drawing nearer to your time as warriors, and this will be a great opportunity for you both. We will start with hunting," He said, glancing at Ravenfeather to make sure his information was correct.
The future lies before you;
like a field of fallen snow.
Be careful how you tread it;
for every step will show.

They'll judge you by your past;
Which makes it do or die.
Unless of course my darling;
You spread your wings and flii.

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Re: BLAZECLAN ▩ ¾literate ▩ CLOSED

Postby | valhalla | » Wed Jan 08, 2014 9:24 am

-- I'm so, so sorry, but I just cannot keep up.
I really think that it's best if I quit. I'm so so, sorry. :c
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Re: BLAZECLAN ▩ ¾literate ▩ CLOSED

Postby benexo » Wed Jan 08, 2014 3:11 pm

    [ no worries, skittles! i totally get that, thanks for roleplaying with us c:
    also, since you're leaving - would it be alright if ravenfeather died somehow due to the fox or another one of morgana's plans? ]
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Re: BLAZECLAN ▩ ¾literate ▩ CLOSED

Postby MulataMermaid » Thu Jan 09, 2014 12:45 am

Just wondering, so now is it just Northblaze taking the two
apprentices out for an assessment?}}
The future lies before you;
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Be careful how you tread it;
for every step will show.

They'll judge you by your past;
Which makes it do or die.
Unless of course my darling;
You spread your wings and flii.

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Re: BLAZECLAN ▩ ¾literate ▩ CLOSED

Postby | valhalla | » Thu Jan 09, 2014 8:20 am

benexo wrote:
    [ no worries, skittles! i totally get that, thanks for roleplaying with us c:
    also, since you're leaving - would it be alright if ravenfeather died somehow due to the fox or another one of morgana's plans? ]



-- That would be fine! Whatever the plot demands c:
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