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smallmouse - post 7

Postby eiznek » Mon Jan 06, 2014 1:23 pm

smallmouse
21 moons
she-cat

crush; no one
mate; no one

gentle, understanding
rank; warrior

mood; laid back
where; camp
with; her patrol

tagged; dapplefur, larkpaw, rainpaw
        the tension in the air was beginning to bother the small she-cat. dapplefur was blundering blindly behind her, causing somewhat of a racket and most likely scaring away their prey. suddenly, the she-cat tripped over a peeking root and was flung on her face. her shriek echoed through the forest, and smallmouse could just feel all the little animals fleeing from their previous doings. but, that didn't matter. dapplefur needed to be taken to cloverfoot, wether she liked it or not. in a firm voice that demanded authority, smallmouse confronted the injured she-cat. "dapplefur, you need to go see cloverfoot. come on, i'll help you, you can lean on me if you need to." honestly, smallmouse wasn't much to lean on, considering she was half of dapplefur's size, but she could find a way, she always has. besides, even if dapplefur wanted to stay and hunt, she could just hurt it more, and smallmouse knew that dapplefur wouldn't want that, and hopefully dapplefur was smart enough to see that.
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Re: BLAZECLAN ▩ ¾literate ▩ CLOSED

Postby MulataMermaid » Mon Jan 06, 2014 1:27 pm

Célina wrote:
εlliε
s h e-c a t : 2 5 m o o n s : r o u g e
t a g s: open

Ellie had crossed the border swiftly, and now started to dig into her mouse. The first bite was wonderful, delight coursed through her body as she licked her whiskers and glanced around her. She was surrounded by grass here, if someone tried to sneak up on her she would be able to hear them before they could pinpoint her location. Ellie took another bite, savoring the flavors of the forest. She then took another bite, leaving the tail of the mouse on the ground. She had never been fond of mouse tails. Ellie twitched her whiskers, and narrowed her eyes. The sun was just starting to come up, and Ellie was beginning to wonder more and more about Morgana's plan. Ellie did like the idea of tearing the clan apart, leaving all of that territory free for the taking. Maybe the rouges could ban together and form a group of their own, enforcing their own rules in this part of the forest. The silver she-cat purred, and rose to her paws. She started heading towards the stream, maybe she could practice some fishing.



яσsεραω
s h e-c a t : 9 m o o n s : a p p r e n t i c e
t a g s: northblaze, patchpaw, ravenfeather

Rosepaw padded out of the apprentice's den quickly after Patchpaw, she can't believe she had overslept! She just hoped that their punishments wouldn't be to severe. She now walked up to the two toms who were hers and Patchpaw's mentors, she met her own mentor, Ravenfeather, and lowered her eyes in dissapointment at herself. "Sorry for being late, Ravenfeather," She said. Hopefully they would still get to do something fun like battle training or hunting, because Rosepaw was really looking forward to stretching out her legs and using her claws today. Her warrior ceremony wasn't too far away, now. She couldn't wait for that day to come.



ησятнвlαzε
t o m : 3 0 m o o n s : w a r r i o r
t a g s: smallmouse, ravenfeather, patchpaw, rosepaw

Northblaze nodded at Smallmouse, that idea was perfectly fine with him. He liked that the patrols would be splitting up, it would allow him to compare his apprentice's skills to that of another. Just as he was about to discuss with Ravenfeather where they should start hunting, Patchpaw and Rosepaw came rushing out of the apprentice's den. Northblaze couldn't help feeling a little bit dissapointed, especially since his apprentice was one of the older ones. They were just apprentices, all the same, though. He didn't think a punishment was in order, since they didn't oversleep very late. "Morning, Patchpaw," He said evenly. "You are a bit late, don't let it happen again," He said firmer than his morning greeting. He looked over both of the apprentices, before he rose to hise paws and said, "Today, Ravenfeather and I will be assessing you. Both of you are drawing nearer to your time as warriors, and this will be a great opportunity for you both. We will start with hunting," He said, glancing at Ravenfeather to make sure his information was correct.
The future lies before you;
like a field of fallen snow.
Be careful how you tread it;
for every step will show.

They'll judge you by your past;
Which makes it do or die.
Unless of course my darling;
You spread your wings and flii.

Eld CS
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dont judge a book by its cover

Postby eiznek » Mon Jan 06, 2014 2:33 pm

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basics wrote:
    name: tawnyheart
    age: 28 moons
    gender: she-cat
    rank: warrior

the outside wrote:
    pelt: ginger tabby w/ white
    underside, fluffy, mid-length

    eye color: amber/gold
    build: small, slender, lean
    traits: noble, hardworking,
    innocent, leader

the inside wrote:
    strengths: clever, sly, witty,
    limber, agile, fast, manipulating

    flaws: narrow-minded, selfish,
    vengeful, cold-hearted,
    not very strong

relationships wrote:
    crush: none
    mate: none
    kits: none
    family: rainpaw/niece
      tawnyheart, the loving, noble, hardworking warrior of blazeclan that would give her life for the good of the clan. am i right? no. i am entirely wrong. tawnyheart is a sick, manipulating feline that has plans to destroy blazeclan, ripping it limb by limb until blazeclan is once again in the ashes. her thirst for revenge has blinded her and it won't be quenched until she has ruined blazeclan and avenged her sister. you see, days after her sister moonpelt gave birth to her three kits, the nursery was attacked by badgers while tawnyheart was out hunting. no cat had helped moonpelt, and had left her and her mate to die. only rainpaw survived. ever since tawnyheart has hated mistystar and her clanmates. while working with morgana, tawnyheart plans to take over blazeclan from the inside. she plans to become deputy, then murder mistystar so she can become leader. as i said, she is very ambitious and will not rest until she has achieved her goals. tawnyheart is very dangerous, as she is very clever and witty. she is also very manipulating and can make you believe anything she wants. overall she's just a pretty little cat on the outside, but on the inside she has the mindset and the ability to destroy blazeclan once and for all.
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fawnpaw 3, heatherflare 3

Postby susurri » Mon Jan 06, 2014 3:55 pm

fawnpaw
location campdoing uh.. sitting?rank med cat appage 7 moonscrush --tags cloverfoot

    The corners of Fawnpaw's mouth pulled up slightly at his mentor's irritated humor. As he turned to leave, Fawnpaw checked to see if Ashpaw had brought the herbs or not, and he had. The medicine cat apprentice sighed at Ashpaw's hard work, and hoped to have that trait in others eyes. Fawnpaw set out of the den after his mentor and sat beside him. What will we do today, Cloverfoot? Fawnpaw's eyes were glued to the patrols of cats exiting camp momentarily, and got an idea. If we need herbs, we could go with a patrol. He never got the sweet opportunity of a patrol and could feel the crisp morning air and the border scents in his mouth. Please? I never get to go on patrols- maybe I could even learn to hunt for you! Fawnpaw suggested, now facing Cloverfoot with wide eyes of excitement. We have to hurry, before they go, he pleaded, his paws working quickly and his fur boiling over the top with sheer excitement.




heatherflare
location campdoing leavingrank warriorage 35 moonscrush --tags swanfeather, bearheart

    Heatherflare nodded at Bearheart's command to go and watched him brush Smallmouse with his tail. It was obvious they would someday be together, it shone in their eyes. Hearing padding behind her, Heatherflare turned her head and saw the form of Swanfeather rushing to meet them. You're late, Heatherflare muttered, although it was so low it was inaudible to her clanmates. As if in answer, Swanfeather apologized and asked the patrol leader where they would be headed. Yes, Bearheart, I hope we can hunt a bit, I'm starving. Heatherflare yawned largely and stretched her long, slender limbs. Her tone was so serious, and almost awkward. She always sounded so serious, and was always worrying about her 'mistakes'.

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Re: BLAZECLAN ▩ ¾literate ▩ CLOSED

Postby | valhalla | » Mon Jan 06, 2014 10:00 pm

    [ooc; argh! i'm sorry for not replying sooner. can i have a repost for ravenfeather? thanks! c:]
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Re: BLAZECLAN ▩ ¾literate ▩ CLOSED

Postby reichenbach falls » Tue Jan 07, 2014 12:46 am

DAPPLEFUR

she-cat 26 moons tags;; rainpaw, smallmouse, patrol


      Dapplefur looked at Smallmouse, surprised at the tone the little she-cat was taking, in telling her she needed to return to camp and visit Cloverfoot. Sure, her foot hurt, but it was all her fault that she had injured it, and she needed to bring back some prey. But seeing the determined look on Smallmouse, she had no choice by to agree. Then Rainpaw added that she'd bring back enough prey for both of them. Dapplefur couldn't help but overcome her anger at the little she-cat. But before she could say anything to her, Rainpaw bounded away to bother poor Larkpaw.

      Laughing a little, she turned to Smallmouse again.
      "Thanks Smallmouse," she meowed quietly, as to not scare anymore prey away. "I-I think I can manage it by myself." She felt a little bad to turn down the she-cat's offer, but she could make it. Dapplefur hobbled experimentally on her two back legs, and her right front paw. She wondered aloud to Smallmouse. "You can stay on the patrol if you'd like since I can make it to camp," she said sheepishly. She didn't want to mess up the patrol anymore than she already had.
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smallmouse - post 8

Postby eiznek » Tue Jan 07, 2014 4:39 am

smallmouse
21 moons
she-cat

crush; no one
mate; no one

gentle, understanding
rank; warrior

mood; laid back
where; camp
with; her patrol

tagged; dapplefur, larkpaw,
rainpaw
        smallmouse felt bad for the she-cat. as she listened to dapplefur's embarrassed responses, she just shook her head. 'i can't let you go alone," she said kindly. "the patrol doesn't matter, bearheart has his." she looked at rainpaw who would most likely be very disappointed that they weren't hunting anymore. "rainpaw, i buried a mouse over there by the brush, could you grab it for me then catch up to us on the way back to camp?" it wouldn't be a difficult fast, because they'd most likely be traveling at a slow pace. "alright, come on dapplefur," she said softly, positioning herself next to dapplefur so she could put some weight on her if it was needed.
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Re: BLAZECLAN ▩ ¾literate ▩ CLOSED

Postby reichenbach falls » Tue Jan 07, 2014 4:59 am

DAPPLEFUR

she-cat 26 moons tags;; smallmouse, patrol


      Dapplefur sighed and turned towards the direction of camp. Thankfully, they hadn't made it too far out into the forest before Rainpaw came running. After that, they still hadn't walked very far. She started to hop along with Smallmouse beside her. She was grateful that the she-cat had offered to help her back to camp. If she'd been by herself, she may have depressed herself too much for messing things up. But she gritted her teeth and tried to keep a straight face instead of grimacing in pain. She looked over at Smallmouse. "Again, I'm really sorry for messing up this patrol," meowed with her ears flattened, still hopping towards camp.
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Re: BLAZECLAN ▩ ¾literate ▩ CLOSED

Postby MulataMermaid » Tue Jan 07, 2014 9:20 am

skittles. wrote:
    [ooc; argh! i'm sorry for not replying sooner. can i have a repost for ravenfeather? thanks! c:]

Here is the repost for you:
яσsεραω
s h e-c a t : 9 m o o n s : a p p r e n t i c e
t a g s: northblaze, patchpaw, ravenfeather

Rosepaw padded out of the apprentice's den quickly after Patchpaw, she can't believe she had overslept! She just hoped that their punishments wouldn't be to severe. She now walked up to the two toms who were hers and Patchpaw's mentors, she met her own mentor, Ravenfeather, and lowered her eyes in dissapointment at herself. "Sorry for being late, Ravenfeather," She said. Hopefully they would still get to do something fun like battle training or hunting, because Rosepaw was really looking forward to stretching out her legs and using her claws today. Her warrior ceremony wasn't too far away, now. She couldn't wait for that day to come.



ησятнвlαzε
t o m : 3 0 m o o n s : w a r r i o r
t a g s: smallmouse, ravenfeather, patchpaw, rosepaw

Northblaze nodded at Smallmouse, that idea was perfectly fine with him. He liked that the patrols would be splitting up, it would allow him to compare his apprentice's skills to that of another. Just as he was about to discuss with Ravenfeather where they should start hunting, Patchpaw and Rosepaw came rushing out of the apprentice's den. Northblaze couldn't help feeling a little bit dissapointed, especially since his apprentice was one of the older ones. They were just apprentices, all the same, though. He didn't think a punishment was in order, since they didn't oversleep very late. "Morning, Patchpaw," He said evenly. "You are a bit late, don't let it happen again," He said firmer than his morning greeting. He looked over both of the apprentices, before he rose to hise paws and said, "Today, Ravenfeather and I will be assessing you. Both of you are drawing nearer to your time as warriors, and this will be a great opportunity for you both. We will start with hunting," He said, glancing at Ravenfeather to make sure his information was correct.



And for Eagle:
εlliε
s h e-c a t : 2 5 m o o n s : r o u g e
t a g s: eagle

Ellie had been soaking her paws in the water, getting them used to the gentle cool of the lake before she would have to launch her paw in and retrieve a fish. She had already spotted many of the silver creatures, slipping through the water like shining snakes. They were of decent size, surely one would fill her up. After a few moments had passed, Ellie decided to position herself for the actual hunt. She made sure she was facing the sun, that way her shadow wouldn't fall over the water and frighten all of the fish away from her. Just as she was focusing her eyes on the water, she heard rustling in the reeds about ten fox-lengths ahead. She perked her ears towards the noise, and was surprised to see a rather large dark grey and white tom hurtling towards her with great speed. Apparently a male, he let out a fearsome caturwal. Ellie's fur immediately bristled at this apparent threat, she rose to her paws, and stood on the tips of them to make her seem bigger. Just as she thought the tom would collide into her, he stopped suddenly, looking somewhat embarrassed. He smelt like a rouge, but why was he skirting Blazeclan territory? Ellie was now confused. In case this was a trick, though, she stayed on her guard. "Come at me, fleabag, I dare you!" She hissed menacingly, narrowing her eyes. If this guy wanted a fight, then a fight he would get.
The future lies before you;
like a field of fallen snow.
Be careful how you tread it;
for every step will show.

They'll judge you by your past;
Which makes it do or die.
Unless of course my darling;
You spread your wings and flii.

Eld CS
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Re: BLAZECLAN ▩ ¾literate ▩ CLOSED

Postby xayah » Tue Jan 07, 2014 12:06 pm

    cloverfoot
    ___________________________________________
      ; tom ; medicine cat ; 56 moons ; tags : fawnpaw ;
      Cloverfoot licked a paw and drew it over his whiskers in a failed attempt to clean himself when Fawnpaw came bouncing over. He blinked at all the excited toms questions and simply raised his tail to silence him. "Clam yourself, Fawnpaw, I'm getting old you know, I can't keep up with everything anymore." He suppressed a sigh as he realized how old he really was. His time was drawing near and he knew it, but his apprentice was still so young and new. If I die soon only our warrior ancestors will be able to help him. Cloverfoot shook the thought away and rose to his paws, tossing a look at the medicine den behind him. "We could definitely use more tansy. I think we used nearly all of it last leaf-bare. And the cobwebs in the store have grown old and dusty, hardly of any use now." He turned to lock eyes with Fawnpaw. "Well?" He growled with only a hint of irritation. "Go find a patrol to join and we'll see what we can get done. Hurry now!" The old tom sank back onto his haunches, letting the younger cat trail off.


    patchpaw
    ___________________________________________
      ; she-cat ; apprentice ; 12 moons ; tags : northblaze, patrol ;
      Patchpaw's eyes grew wide when her mentor mentioned her final assessment. She tossed an unbelieving look to Rosepaw and turned back with a wide grin. "Really? Oh I can't believe it!" She bounced around the tom, excitement rolling off of her in thick waves. Her once tired paws were now itching to run out of camp, not caring if she scared off all the prey within miles. "When are we leaving?" She asked, finally managing to settle herself enough and meet Northblaze's eyes.

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