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Re: BLAZECLAN ▩ ¾literate ▩ OPEN

Postby oh_deer! » Sat Jan 04, 2014 5:15 am

LARKPAW

||tom||apprentice||six moons||tags;; none

the tabby tom rolled over in his mossy nest, yawning widely. he let the sunlight seep into his fur, just like the warmth queens gave him when he was a young kit in the nursery. standing up slowly, Larkpaw padded out of the apprentices den. his amber eyes adjusted to the new light, and he drew in the fresh morning air. the apprentice scratched a piece of stray moss from behind his ear. he wondered if he was training or hunting today, because he'd been excited to become an apprentice for a while now, but now it had come. it was kind of fun being able to fight now, however when he was a little kit, so innocent, maybe that was better. Larkpaw shifted from paw to paw, thinking about how fun the day could be, or how boring. he padded nearer to the fresh-kill pile before remembering he had to hunt first. sighing, the tom sat down and began grooming his tabby fur. his pelt was in bad condition, probably because queens hadn't looked after him for a few days.
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dapplefur-post two

Postby reichenbach falls » Sat Jan 04, 2014 5:21 am

DAPPLEFUR

she-cat 26 moons tags;; mistystar, bearheart, smallmouse


      Dapplefur nodded at her leader. She was hoping to go on a border patrol, but with the lack of prey and the amount of hungry mouths, she was probably going on a hunting patrol. She always liked the thrill of border patrols because they had the chance of a skirmish. And she loved fighting. Glancing between Bearheart and Smallmouse, she waited to be assigned to a patrol. She didn't mind going with either warrior, as they were both nice. "So what's the plan?"
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Re: BLAZECLAN ▩ ¾literate ▩ OPEN

Postby Jinhwan - LEFT » Sat Jan 04, 2014 5:23 am

[Forgot to read the front page...Sorry!]
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Re: fawnpaw 3, heatherflare 1,

Postby susurri » Sat Jan 04, 2014 5:31 am

fawnpaw
location forestdoing gathering herbsrank med cat appage 7 moonscrush --tags ashpaw

    While he dug a bit more yarrow, Fawnpaw sighed. I hope this is the right thing.. Cloverfoot will be upset if it's not. Ashpaw's scent roused him from his thoughts. Turning to meet him, Fawnpaw drew in the scent of the yarrow, stronger than before. Ashpaw dropped some at his paws, asking if he'd gotten the correct amount. Fawnpaw only picked it up with the rest of him yarrow and nodded, dropping some extra for Ashpaw to hold. Being younger than Ashpaw, Fawnpaw found it harder and heavier to carry across the clearing, dropping it once to take a breath. He turned to the other apprentice and said, If you wish to go now, I can take two trips. Fawnpaw brought the yarrow back to his den beside the last of the other yarrow. Before he spun around to retrieve more, he woke up his mentor. With a slight tap on his nose, Fawnpaw said: Wake up, Cloverfoot. I got yarrow. his voice was as soft as his fluffy tail. He sat by his mentor until he woke up, or until Ashpaw arrived if he did.



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Re: mistystar III // ashpaw IIII

Postby benexo » Sat Jan 04, 2014 5:54 am

benexo wrote:{. m i s t y s t a r
    ▷ thirty-five moons . leader . tagged ; bearheart, smallmouse, ravenfeather, dapplefur, rosepaw, northblaze

      -----the hollow began filling up, what with the arrival of ravenfeather and dapplefur. mistystar greeted both of them, then listened quietly as they spoke about patrols. the she-cat smiled gratefully at all of their enthusiasm. "thank you both for your offers. i just told bearheart and smallmouse to begin sorting out two hunting patrols, so dapplefur, why don't you join them?"

      -----mistystar turned to ravenfeather, the jet black tom. "rosepaw's about halfway through her apprenticeship, is she not? perhaps a training assessment is in order." a sudden thought came to mind, and mistystar added, "in fact, it's time patchpaw had her final assessment as well. would you find northblaze and speak to him about testing your apprentices?" mistystar felt satisfied, having figured out the morning's action plan, and purred softly to herself. good work, you.


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    ▷ ten moons . apprentice . tagged ; fawnpaw, stormfrost

      -----"i can take the rest of it," ashpaw meowed, not hesitating to help out. after all, fawnpaw had patched up his paw, which was already starting to feel much better. he gathered up all of the plants, including the extra ones fawnpaw had given him, and followed behind the younger apprentice back to the medicine cat den. as the brown tom entered cloverfoot's den to wake him up, ashpaw dropped his batch on top of the now large pile of yarrow. the sharp smell and taste of it remained in his mouth, so ashpaw meowed a quick goodbye to fawnpaw before exiting camp once more to find a puddle of fresh-water to lap.

      -----the coolness of new-leaf caused the tabby tom's fur to bristle slightly, but sunlight was starting to shine from above the treetops with whispers of a brighter season ahead. bare-leaf was one of ashpaw's least favorite seasons, and the cold was especially tough this time around. some prey were still nestled away in their burrows, but many of the forest's creatures had begun to come outside. ashpaw found a source of fresh water and relished in the feeling of liquid cleansing his mouth from the rancid herbs. after satisfying himself, the tom sat back on his haunches for a second before trotting back to camp. he felt that his duties called, and he hoped he could still be useful, even with his scratched paw pad. ashpaw poked his head into the warriors' hollow, hoping to find his mentor stormfrost.
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Re: BLAZECLAN ▩ ¾literate ▩ OPEN

Postby MulataMermaid » Sat Jan 04, 2014 6:13 am

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s h e-c a t : 2 5 m o o n s : r o u g e
t a g s: open

The she-cat crouched low to the ground, her tail lashing. This mouse wasn't going to escape her claws like the last one had. She had already been awake for a few hours, and her stomach was rumbling. On Blazeclan territory, Ellie thought that the mice were always smarter. That was okay, though, because she also thought they tasted better. The lone she-cat had gotten up early for this occasion, hunting before the patrols were out was the best way to hunt. If she were to get caught, the cats who lived on this land were sure to give her a nasty scar to remember them by. Ellie didn't want to jeopardize her good looks. She did like the risk, though, the adrenaline coursing through her body when she was doing something she knew she wasn't supposed to. Shaking her head to clear, she crept closer to the mouse. Quickly, she lunged. The mouse let out a startled squeak, which was quickly cut off as Ellie closed it's airways. Ellie grabbed her prey, and started heading towards the Blazeclan border so she could eat in peace.



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s h e-c a t : 9 m o o n s : a p p r e n t i c e
t a g s: patchpaw

Rosepaw rubbed sleep from her eyes by licking her paws and wiping her face, but for some reason she was still tired. The thorn she had found in her bedding last night probably didn't help her. The she-cat rolled over, but had forgotten that Patchpaw was right next to her. She rolled onto Patchpaw, but tried to correct herself too late. "Oh! Patchpaw, I'm so sorry, I didn't see you there!" She said. How rude of Rosepaw! She knew that she wouldn't want to be woken up by another cat squishing her, and she had just done it to Patchpaw! She would have to make if up to her some way. Rosepaw never liked being rude to others, especially her friends. Rosepaw did have a feeling that the two of them should get up, anyway. "Patchpaw, it's early morning. Do you think we should start heading out?" She asked sweetly, hoping that Patchpaw would forgive her for rolling on top of her.



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t o m : 3 0 m o o n s : w a r r i o r
t a g s: mistystar, bearheart, smallmouse, dapplefur, ravenfeather

Northblaze's amber optics opened to the lovely glow of early morning light, and he rose slowly, so as not to wake any of the other sleeping warriors. He stepped over tails and past paws, not wanting to injure any of his clanmates. Once he reached the outside of the den, he allowed himself to enjoy a luxurious stretch. The camp was already bustling, cats were gathered around the pitifully small fresh-kill pile, and it appeared that Mistystar was organizing patrols. Wonderful, perhaps Mistystar was considering a hunting patrol? Northblaze thought to himself. He started his way over, eager to get started on the days work. Daylight was wasting, and the clan needed to be fed. Just as the large tabby and white warrior came within earshot, he heard Mistystar say something about assessing apprentices. Northblaze loved to see the clan grow, and apprentice assessments were a huge part of that. "Testing whos apprentices?" He asked, his voice low and smooth. Northblaze wouldn't mind taking some apprentices and their mentors out for some assessing.
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Be careful how you tread it;
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They'll judge you by your past;
Which makes it do or die.
Unless of course my darling;
You spread your wings and flii.

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Re: BLAZECLAN ▩ ¾literate ▩ OPEN

Postby | valhalla | » Sat Jan 04, 2014 6:38 am

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R A V E N F E A T H E R
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mood anxious.
location camp.
doing talking.
tags mistystar northblaze rosepaw patchpaw.
rank warrior.
clan blazeclan.
relationship none.

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Ravenfeather waited patiently while the leader spoke to the other cats. After a short while, however, she did address him. 'Rosepaw's about halfway through her apprenticeship, is she not? Perhaps a training assessment is in order.' the tom nodded, smiling at the fact he was probably overly proud of his apprentice. 'In fact, it's time patchpaw had her final assessment as well. Would you find Northblaze and speak to him about testing your apprentices?' Mistystar added. The large black tom dipped his shimmering head and turned to go and awake his fellow warrior - when a gruff voice spoke, from his right. Ravenfeather smiled to Northblaze as he entered the ring of cats around the leader, and he approached the warrior, dipping his head once again in greeting. "Our's actually, Northblaze. Rosepaw needs and assessment, and so does Patchpaw. Her last one... if I'm correct?" he recalled the leader's words. "Anyway, I was hoping that - once we get them up - we could start off with hunting, before moving on to fighting?" Ravenfeather suggested, green eyes glittered with enjoyment. He'd always loved a good assessment. "I'm going to be more excited then them both!" he muttered, as he attempted to stop his tail swishing about behind him.
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smallmouse - post 3

Postby eiznek » Sat Jan 04, 2014 6:50 am

smallmouse
21 moons
she-cat

crush; no one
mate; no one

gentle, understanding
rank; warrior

mood; laid back
where; camp
with; mistystar, bearheart,
ravenfeather, dapplefur, northblaze


tagged; most of the clan
        happy that mistystar assigned her to lead a patrol, the petite she-cat leaped nimbly to her paws and accessed the cats around her, obviously as eager to get out as she was. "of course mistystar," she said, failing to keep the nips of excitement out of her voice. "dapplefur, you can come with me, we can take the north side of the woods. mistystar, would you like larkpaw to go ahead and come with us?" she glanced over at the small tabby tom, then back at mistystar. it would be a small patrol, but there weren't any other cats awake at the moment. then she looked at ravenfeather and northblaze. "would you two and your apprentices like to tag along with us for the hunting part of the assesment? we could use a few more cats."
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heatherflare 1

Postby susurri » Sat Jan 04, 2014 8:08 am

heatherflare
location campdoing sleepingrank warriorage 35 moonscrush --tags --

    Heatherflare woke up, cursing the breeze that flowed into the den. She didn't want to get up, it was represented in reluctant groan. She peered out of the den and saw two apprentices and a group of warriors along with Mistystar. Heatherflare walked up to Smallmouse and greeted her with a flick of her tail. Good morning, Smallmouse. Patrolling? Heatherflare sat down beside her patiently, noticing she was short of cats. Heatherflare never socialized well, especially with toms. Luckily, Smallmouse was a she-cat and a good leader, most everyone in the clan loved her.

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dapplefur-post three

Postby reichenbach falls » Sat Jan 04, 2014 8:31 am

DAPPLEFUR

she-cat 26 moons tags;; smallmouse


      Dapplefur stepped over to Smallmouse's side. She wondered who else would be joining them on their patrol. When Northblaze and Ravenfeather were assigned to their patrol to test their apprentices, she smiled. Dapplefur loved watching he apprentices train. Especially when they try to show off during their assessments. Her own hunting assessment when considerably well due to a bit of luck, since she wasn't all that great of a hunter. Dapplefur waited for decisions to be so they could head out.
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