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BLAZECLAN cloverfoot & patchpaw

Postby xayah » Tue Dec 31, 2013 11:01 am

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name; cloverfoot received his name shortly after birth due to the clover patch he was born in
age; recently turning fifty-nine moons makes this fellow nearly ancient
gender; quite obviously a tom
rank; he holds the honorable position of medicine cat to his clan

family; eaglestone rivernose ravenpaw spottedpaw
mate; mates are forbidden
crush; n/a

appearance; cloverfoot is nothing special, really. he has the height and weight of an average cat.
his pelt is short and soft, accompanied by a fitting black and white pattern throughout. his eyes are
a sweet pale green and match his fur almost perfectly. as for his build, cloverfoot has broad shoulders
and a sleek body. four average sized legs help carry him and a long black tail provides balance. the
only thing that sets cloverfoot apart from his clanmates is the subtle limp in his front left leg. other
than that, he is just an ordinary member of Blazeclan.

personality; if cloverfoot hadn't suffered from a life changing injury in his younger moons he's sure the
ladies would be crawling all over him as a warrior. he seems to have the perfect personality, though, like
any other, he has his faults. for example, cloverfoot is quite a humble cat. he always puts others
needs before his own, even if it means suffering through immense pain and possibly death, and is always
looking out for his clanmates no matter their views on him. he is also very wise, as to be expected
of the medicine cat. starting at a young age cloverfoot was continuously drinking in knowledge of nearly
everything around him and still does so in his current state. overall he is just a kind cat. however,
cloverfoot, despite what others may think, is not nor anywhere near perfect. he is quite a soft spoken
cat. as far as he can remember he has never raised his voice towards another and is not one to argue.
cloverfoot is generally just a quiet and gentle tom.

history; cloverkit was born the second out of three and the only tom. shortly after birth his mother,
rivernose, passed and left her kits in a dangerous state and her mate, eaglestone, in a bought of depression.
however, the warrior pulled through and was able to begin raising his offspring to the best of his abilities with
the help a foster mother. without doubt, the kits grew into healthy, playful balls of energy and no sooner did
they become apprentices. cloverkit became cloverpaw alongside his sisters, ravenpaw and spottedpaw. they
were a happy family for awhile and all three siblings were shaping up to be strong warriors. then the incident
occurred. eaglestone and a few other warriors had taken the apprentices out on a hunting patrol when a rogue
badger appeared. it had taken the party by surprise and the three warriors willingly flung themselves into harms
way for the apprentices sake. cloverpaw and his sisters attempted to climb a nearby tree in seek of refuge but
only little cloverpaw had begun to climb when the badger turned tail and swatted furiously at them. his sisters
were thrown aside as if they were just dead prey and cloverpaw desperately dug his claws into a weak branch.
two of the warriors were only able to distract the badger for what seemed like seconds while eaglestone curled
over his limp daughters. cloverpaw hung onto the branch as if his life depended on it and it did. but he was
growing tired with all the panic and his claws were slowly giving way. the apprentice made a final attempt to
save his life by calling out to his father but the tom was occupied with the balls of fur below. cloverpaw yelled
out in an ice shattering cry as he fell to the ground. as he hit the hard earth his ears rang with the sound of
snapping bone and he lay there, terrified and surging with pain. luckily the other warriors returned just in time
to take the disgruntled group back to camp before the badger returned. but it was no use. cloverpaw's sisters
only ended up dying hours later and his father sank back into his depression, only leading to his death of starvation
a few days later. as for cloverpaw, well, with time his broken leg healed and after several moons he was able to
move on from the deaths of his family members. he was changed into the role of medicine cat apprentice and
eventually the time came for him to receive his medicine cat name: cloverfoot. there are times when he still has
nightmares of that fateful day, though he never regrets the choices he made. now he's quite happy with the life he
leads and even if they aren't by his side he knows his parents and sisters are watching him from starclan and they
are swelling with pride.

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name; patchpaw was named by her father for the patches of tabby fur throughout her pelt
age; she is a young and healthy twelve moons
gender; of course a she-cat and nothing more or less
rank; the 'paw' in her name suggests her rank as an apprentice

family; birdtalon leafbreeze
mate; she is too young for a mate
crush; n/a

appearance; like most apprentices patchpaw is quite small. her height and weight are perhaps a little
less than average for her age. the majority of her pelt is a sweet honey color with darker tabby
markings
and a large splash of white on her chest and side. her eyes are a deep hazel and fit in
with her pelt magically. she has the perfect build for a cat of her age and gender. a very slender and
sleek body accompanied by a smooth tail and four long legs allow her to excel at running and squeezing
into smaller spaces. young patchpaw isn't much different from her clanmates and she's quite happy with her
looks as they are.

personality; patchpaw really isn't anything spectacular. she's a member of Blazeclan and nothing more or less.
she does have a gentle, loving nature, and because of this she sometimes finds it hard to participate in warrior
training or hunting. however, this doesn't make her weak, or a wimp. patchpaw is just as determined and strong
as her fellow apprentices if not more so. behind her shy and quiet appearance is a feisty young cat blazing with
strength. if anyone has something to say about anything its her. she may not be built with muscles and sharp claws
but she comes ready and equipped with a sharp tongue and wits.

history; patchkit was born a single kit to two great warriors of Blazeclan. she was a blessing, truly, but poor
birdtalon wanted more than just one kit. he begged and pleaded with his mate, leafbreeze, trying to convince
her to try for another littler. but she was content with her little patchkit. birdtalon of course threw a fit of fury
and ran out of the camp without warning. his clanmates expected nothing less of him, as he was famous among
them for his temper tantrums, and guessed he'd be back before nightfall. however, when nightfall finally came
and birdtalon still had not turned up they decided to wait until morning. surely he'd have wandered back into camp
by then, wouldn't he? despite a bit of confusion and worry leafbreeze continued on with her day caring for patchkit.
when morning came the clan was baffled as there was still no sign of the warrior tom. now a bit of panic was
setting in. a small search party was sent out that afternoon and they returned moments later with some news.
behind them was leafbreeze's beloved mates body. upon examination it appeared he had swallowed a pawful of
death berries. of course leafbreeze spent the rest of the day grieving for her lost birdtalon but by nightfall she
was surprisingly calm and collected. nobody ever questioned her about it, though, in fear they may upset her
further. instead the cats of Blazeclan continued on with their daily lives almost acting as if nothing happened.
moons later patchkit became patchpaw and although she's never asked about her father she doesn't doubt he
was an amazing warrior.
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come join!

Postby benexo » Wed Jan 01, 2014 2:17 am

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Re: BLAZECLAN ▩ ¾literate ▩ OPEN

Postby | valhalla | » Wed Jan 01, 2014 5:13 am


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you can't have a rainbow
without the rain and the rain is just part of
life...
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the basics. » Hello, nice to meet you. I'm Ravenfeather, if you must know but who are you? I'm an accomplished warrior of Blaze clan and at 27 moons I'm healthy and young. My talent lies in battle, but I guess I'm not to bad at hunting. I'm a male without a mate, and kits. However, I would love to have a family. Eh, my dreams never seem to come true!

personality »
i could be described as not one for dilly dally, idle chitchat. once i start something, i finish it and i refuse to halt or rest until i do so - a stubbornness that won't let much slip. i take every opportunity to improve my skills - which i am determined to hone to perfection - and to help my friends out. in anyway possible. with my rank there is an air of sensibility, responsibility and pride that surrounds me. i demand a lot but break past my barrier and there is a willing and undying loyalty and a good shoulder to cry on. With the way I hold herself, there is an air of sensibility, responsibility and pride that surrounds me, even though I'm not something special. Well, to much, anyway!
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my story » As a kit, one of the main reasons that I was so angry and violent and irritated people was that I was never had a good role model. My mom and dad were very distant from the each other and fought constantly. When my mother died in a freak accident as I was an apprentice, my father changed... he became threatening and violent. It mean't one thing - he had still loved her all along. He loved her so, that when she died, he threw himself into an abyss and died. Time passed and I got worse. As my parents had both 'given up' on everyone, most treated me differently. Except one, a she-cat whom I loved. But she didn't share my love. When she was killed, I felt my heart shatter into a million shards.

Leaving me as the only person to pick up the pieces.

Then, about a moon ago, I changed. With the new threat, I realised that my clan was in jeopardy. I forced myself to get up after so long... and when I did, it was great.
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Re: come join!

Postby benexo » Wed Jan 01, 2014 5:12 pm

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→dapplefur the outgoing

Postby reichenbach falls » Thu Jan 02, 2014 2:35 am

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DAPPLEFUR


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walkxxxxxxmilexxxinxxxtheirxxxshoes;
nowxxxyou ' rexxxxxxmilexxxawayxxxfrom
themxxxandxxxyouxxxhavexxxtheirxxxshoes.


looks;;
Dapplefur is a pretty
tortoiseshell she-cat. She has
well muscled legs. And her
eyes are a pale green color.

crush;;
{ pm me }

apprentice;;
xxx
name;;
dapplefur

age;;
twenty-six moons

gender;;
she-cat

rank;;
warrior
personality;;
Dapplefur is a robust, friendly she-cat that loves to have fun and talk. Even though she is very friendly, don't get her wrong, she can pack a punch. She is muscled, even though it doesn't show on the outside. Her fighting skills are in fact her most prized attribution. She likes to have order, and apprentices had better show her respect, or they'll have sore paws for moons from doing chores. Her hunting skills are nothing special. You can hardly ever see Dapplefur by herself. She's usually surrounded by her friends or apprentice, (?). She is most always happy and talkative, but sometimes, she can be snappy.
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please read --

Postby benexo » Thu Jan 02, 2014 1:11 pm

    [ not long until we start now ^^

    important things to note :

  • reading the entire front page is crucial to this roleplay - please do so if you have not already (this means the intro, history, important information, and rules.)
  • because there will be one rogue planning to destroy blazeclan, he/she will be recruiting. this means other rogues and even warriors are subject to her scheming. (actually still in need of someone who can rp this role! pm me if you're interested!)
  • don't be afraid to create subplots - just pm me first before creating huge drama
  • mentor & apprentice assignments have been added under 'the cats' page

    looking forward to roleplaying with all of you <3 ]
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Re: BLAZECLAN ▩ ¾literate ▩ OPEN

Postby MulataMermaid » Thu Jan 02, 2014 2:08 pm

can't wait to start! bump}}
The future lies before you;
like a field of fallen snow.
Be careful how you tread it;
for every step will show.

They'll judge you by your past;
Which makes it do or die.
Unless of course my darling;
You spread your wings and flii.

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Re: come join!

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small but mighty

Postby eiznek » Fri Jan 03, 2014 3:33 pm

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I'M ONLY A GIRL WHO WISHES FOR THE WORLD

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NAME

    "my name is simply smallmouse. i've been told that it suits me."

    worry clouds blossomsong's eyes as she stares upon the small kit squirming beneath the medicine cat's gaze. she was the smallest of the litter, therefor the weakest. a small mew escapes the little scrap's mouth and her heart flooded with emotion. "she'll survive," the medicine cat confronted her. the light feeling of relief seemed to sweep her off of her paws, officially naming her daughter smallkit.




AGE

    "well, i'm certainly not old yet!"

    smallmouse still has a long lifetime ahead of her, as she is a young warrior at 21 moons.


GENDER

    "i'm a she-cat, thanks. i sure hope i don't come off as a tom to you!"

    smallmouse is most definitely a she-cat, from her feminine frame to her graceful strides and soothing purrs.


DESCRIPTION

    "i'm alright, i guess. some people have called me pretty, other's plain."

    ahhhh, smallmouse. so simple, yet so complex. you may even think that it's her simplicity that makes her beautiful. no one knows for sure what it is about her that seems to make your heart skip a beat when you gaze into those round hued eyes. maybe it's her soft gaze, or her beautiful tabby fur. she's definitely not one of the prettiest cats of the clan, though she is definitely something. she's an eye opener, a beautiful cat nonetheless with her simple structured body and narrow shoulders. her body is lined with wiry muscles for hunting, giving her a great advantage over those with stocky bones. lined over her muscles is her gentle fur, like a fresh breeze lightly blowing against your face, giving you a taste of freedom. then you notice her size. her size is what makes her.... well.... smallmouse. it's pretty self-explainable. other warriors seem to tower over her, though she doesn't mind her size. she takes advantage of it. she has a small head to go with her limbs and body. her muzzle is well-framed, giving smallmouse a cunning or sharp look to her. she has long, graceful white whiskers like the snow dappling the green grass and an adorable pink nose to top it off.

    now for what makes this feline different from the rest- her fur. smallmouse's fur is tabby- no. not the usual tabby. not the bold tabby that often appears on other cat's pelts. not the perfect tabby with the bold stripes and short, coarse fur. this feline's fur is the color of a majestic oak tree, maybe lighter. there are tints of auburn mixed in to her soft fur making it look brassy and reflective. she has white paws, as if she were wearing socks. she also has a white strip that travels from her nose to her round, curious eyes. her muzzle is also white, aswell as her underbelly. her markings are more of a rich coffee color, not black, but not brown either. if you run her hand through her stunning fur, you will find that it is not coarse but soft. her fur isn't short, but it isn't long. it's in the middle of the two. it's sleek, making her an admirable swimmer and a beautiful sight to see.

    now for her eyes, the thing that ties her whole appearance together. smallmouse's eyes may not look breath-taking when you first look at them, but if you look closer you may think twice about that opinion of yours. they are a light cocoa brown, soft and hued. if you look close, you'll be surprised to see streaks of gold, silver and green, all mixed together to make that soft cocoa brown. definitely breath-taking, smallmouse is not your average she-cat.


PERSONALITY

    "i see myself as gentle and understanding, though other cats may say something different."

    smallmouse is very gentle and understanding. her patience level is over the top... it's amazing how well she can deal with obnoxious cats. she takes in everybody's opinion in something, and tries to think of something or a way that everybody will approve of. she can't stand it when other cats dislike her, and tries her best to be on everyone's good side. she's very popular in the clan because of this. she's a silent leader, meaning that cats look up to her because of her silent, yet strong commands. most cats wouldn't even know that she is urging them on. she is sensible, meaning that she takes in other cat's feelings other then her own and tries to feel what they do and help them out. she's very convincing and chooses her words carefully. smallmouse is very clever and uses common sense with every step she takes. since her size is such a disadvantage, she often has to figure out reversible battle tactics when fighting larger and more stocky warriors. she's wise for a warrior as young as she is. smallmouse has no ambitions and only does what she does for the best of her clan.


RELATIONSHIP

    "no tom has really caught my eye yet...."

    smallmouse currently has no love interest.
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