Don't you dare go in there!

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Re: Don't you dare go in there!

Postby DandyLoops12345 » Sun Jan 26, 2014 12:27 pm

(Okay! I like the idea, it can make them bond??? :3 )

Storm watched as the fae raced across into the middle of the lake. A low growl whispered behind him. The brute turned around, his jowls opening and his ears pinning. The brute tucked his tail and ran out onto the ice. The cougar right behind him. "What is that thing!?" He yelped, as it gained on him. Storm had his tailed tucked as far beneath him as possible. It growled at him, as Storm skidded to a stop, a couple of hundred meters away from Minis. It stopped and stared, looking behind him. Yellow eyes boring into his very soul. Storm pinned his ear back, fear filling his every move, although he just stood there frozen. Storm sat, falling back as the cougar launched its body at him. Claws digging into his sides and teeth boring holes into his pelt. Th brute yelped loudly, screaming almost. "Minsi!" He cried, shooting pain everywhere.
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Re: Don't you dare go in there!

Postby Valeska » Sun Jan 26, 2014 12:50 pm

Minsi stopped briefly to look behind her. What she saw made her heart stop in its tracks. Storm was just standing there, cowering in front of the big cat. She took off to go back and help Storm but she knew she wouldn't make it in time before the cat made its first attack. Storm's pain filled cries filled the morning air, making her push harder to reach him. If she didn't act quickly the cougar would kill Storm in the blink of an eye. Just as the cougar raised its claws to make its death blow to Storm's throat, she slammed into the cougar's body to distract it. Then to get the cougar's attention put on her, she bit down as hard as she could on the tan cat's tail.

The cougar let out a yowl of pain and rage, quickly turning to face Minsi. It lunged at her out of rage and revenge. Minsi took off towards a nearby cliff she knew would take care of the cougar. Her muscles burned as she ran at her top speed, the big cat hot on her tail. Her legs took her through the forest as she tried to reach her destination. The cliff came into view giving her much relief until she felt a big weight slam into her body. She looked up just in time to see a bunch of claws slash across her right eye. Minsi howled in pain as blood gushed out of her eye and the pain erupting from her body. The cliff was just feet away. In a last ditch effort, Minsi stood to her feet quickly before using all of her weight to throw off the big cat's balance. It was just enough to send the cat yowling in fear off the cliff. She heard a loud crunch, telling her all she needed to know before trotting back through the forest towards Storm. She whimpered all the way because of the pain in her eye, hoping Storm was still alive.
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Re: Don't you dare go in there!

Postby DandyLoops12345 » Sun Jan 26, 2014 1:02 pm

Storm lay on the ice. His shivering body the only sign of life left in him, blood flowed freely from several wounds the cat had caused. His breathing was labored, pain inflicting severe discomfort for the brute. Storm, winced, gritting his teeth as he panted heavily. Storm lay still, the cold seeping through him, engulfing him in numbness, but getting rid of his pain. His ears twitched, ever so slightly as the grey brute listened to the sounds of the ice. Paw steps! He thought, unable to move his lips, due to his weakness.

(Writers block... hope its enough)
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Re: Don't you dare go in there!

Postby Valeska » Sun Jan 26, 2014 3:09 pm

Minsi picked up her pace, knowing it could be a matter of life or death for Storm. She quickly slipped into her den to grab some herbs and cobwebs for Storm. Minsi then rushed out onto the ice where Storm lay very still. The insides of her cringed at the sight of him. He looked like he was on the brink of death. "Well not on my watch!" Minsi growled with determination in her voice, forgetting about the pain in her eye. Her focus completely fixed on saving Storm.

Minsi slammed her hind leg into the ice, giving her a water source. Storm had lost a lot of blood which wasn't a good thing. He looked to be as if he was barely conscious. "Storm stay with me buddy! You have to stay awake. Keep listening to my voice. Whatever you do, don't close your eyes!" Minsi told him with desperation as she began to lick at the worst of his wounds. She dipped her muzzle into the lake once too much blood got in her mouth. She chewed up some leaves to apply to his wounds to help the wound heal better. Once the goop was applied she put a dark leaf on top to keep the goop in place. If the wound didn't stop bleeding she'd apply cobwebs first, then the goop and the leaf on top. She managed to find time to take care of her own eye injury which caused her a lot of trouble. However, she successfully made herself an eye patch. She was pretty positive that she'd never see out of her right eye ever again.

Minsi continued to talk to Storm as she worked, making sure he didn't close his eyes. Minsi had finished dressing the wounds. She winced at what would have to be done next. "Okay Storm, we have to get you back into the den before you freeze your tail off out here. Now I want you to slowly push yourself on your feet. Then lean on me if you have to and I'll help you back to the den." Minsi leaned down towards Storm to give him a reassuring kiss on the cheek. "You can do this! I know you can!" She whispered to him, leaning her forehead against his.
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Re: Don't you dare go in there!

Postby DandyLoops12345 » Sun Jan 26, 2014 10:53 pm

After what felt like hours of darkness, Storm felt all these things being done to him. His ears listening onto Minsi's voice, however faint it was. The brute heard he had to stand, his eyes wandering open and closed, as his cold and numb paws began to shift to try and push himself up. "Minsi..." He whispered, laying up right. The brute was wobbly, the world spinning around him. Eventually when Storm thought he was strong enough, he tried to stand only to fall and abruptly hit the ice with a hard slam. However, the brute was quick to try and get back up. The sound of the wind against his ears only caused more pain, more mentally than physically.

Storm took several minutes to stand, he pressed his weak body against Minsi, his fur intertwining with her, it was like the night she had crept closer to him. "Minsi..." He stuttered, wasting his breath to fall slightly but regaining balance. The sound of his paw steps along with Minsi's were rhythmic and quite soothing. The brute closed his eyes, only to be awoken by a soft jolt from the fae. "Sorry..." He muttered. The grey brute felt the ice turn to snow and knew he was nearly back to "her" den. Storm panted, his breath forming into cloud of mist with every exhale. It danced as the wind pushed until it was out of sight. The tree's seemed to be whistling a sorrowful tune, Storm had been taught to listen to the forest. It will tell you everything you need to know.

Storm basically slid down into the den, the warmth so comforting that the brute no longer had the energy to move out of the way. His out stretched body, engulfing the space. Without meaning to. Storm pulled his legs in as the fae entered the den. His body shivered, cold, numb and in a lot of pain. "Thank you...." He mumbled, before completely blacking out.
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Postby Valeska » Mon Jan 27, 2014 12:46 pm

Minsi let Storm lean on her as they slowly made it to the den. He started a couple times to say something to her but it always ended in silence. When he told her "sorry" she felt like he was trying to tell her more in just that one word. She thought she understood what he was trying to say but she wasn't positive.

Minsi watched Storm fall to the ground of the den in relief and pain, before blacking out most likely from the pain of it all. Minsi decided she'd better wake him up so she could give him something for the pain. She limped over to the prey pile and grabbed two of the most strongest smelling pieces of food she could find. Minsi grabbed the prey then placed the food in front of Storm's nose. Minsi then grabbed a dark leaf that would help with the pain. She placed the leaf beside the prey, then finished her task by curling up around Storm to warm him up. It was awkward at first but then she got used to his touch, letting her relax as well. Her eye was still hurting but it could wait. Minsi rested her head on Storm's broad shoulders, waiting for him to wake up. To pass the time, Minsi looked around the den with her good eye. Her injured eye would be greatly missed.
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Re: Don't you dare go in there!

Postby DandyLoops12345 » Tue Jan 28, 2014 4:23 am

The smell of the prey awoke him, but wait surprised him was the fact that the fae had gotten close to him. His still shivering body had warmed and was shaking less violently. All though his stomach did not want or need the prey, he still ignored it and ate the leaf beside it. It was tacky and had a tart and plant like taste. Storm didn't like it. Minsi's head was undisturbed, for her tried to move little to stop it. Storm raised his head, allowing the faes to slip form his broad shoulders. Her narrow body, enclosed in his own, Storm only added by wrapping his tail around her, forming a barrier from the outside world. A sign that he would protect her from anything, The brute winced in pain as he moved himself closer to the fae, he enjoyed her company and didn't want her to go. Resting his head in the crook of her neck, made him feel comfortable and safe. Minsi's fur rolled over and up onto the edges of his face, the long, loose curls soft and supple to the touch. "Thank you..." He mumbled contently, in the presence of the fae.
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Re: Don't you dare go in there!

Postby Valeska » Thu Jan 30, 2014 4:15 pm

Minsi's eyes were starting to droop, when she felt her head start to slide off Storm's back. She was shocked into stillness when Storm moved closer to Minsi. She felt him wrap his tail around her in a protective manner. She watched as Storm placed his head in the crook of her neck. His touch sent electricity through her body making a shutter take over her body, followed by a small groan. Minsi closed her eyes briefly, letting Storm's body warmth take over her body. She opened her eyes once more when Storm told her "Thank You." "You won't be done saying that when I'm done with you!" Minsi told him in a whisper as she bent down to kiss Storm's muzzle. Once she started she didn't want to stop. "Storm," she mumbled between kisses that were quickly moving down his neck. "If you do something stupid like that again...I'll kill you myself!" She told him with a playful growl as she continued to shower him with kisses. Letting her instincts take over.
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Re: Don't you dare go in there!

Postby DandyLoops12345 » Fri Jan 31, 2014 5:16 am

Storm allowed a smile to cross his face at Minsi's remark. Her kiss along his muzzle, sent an odd sensation running up his spine. Making him shudder slightly. Storm pawed at the ground lightly, "If you do something stupid like that again...I'll kill you myself!" A light chuckle emanated from Storms jowls. "Oh really..?" The brute smirked, he stopped the shower of kisses and rolled her onto her back. Storm growled playfully, lowering his muzzle next to his and sneaking a gentle kiss onto her muzzle. "I'll have to be careful then.." He whispered.
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Re: Don't you dare go in there!

Postby Valeska » Sat Feb 01, 2014 8:04 am

Minsi let Storm take full control of the situation. She was flipped onto her back somewhat gently, with Storm standing on top of her. "Very..." Minsi told Storm with a small moan as he kissed her scarred muzzle from the day before, when he had dug his teeth into her flesh. Minsi looked up at Storm with her one good eye. She smiled weakly, waiting for his reaction at seeing her injured eye from the cougar. He hadn't seen her face fully since he'd awakened. She just hoped Storm wouldn't blame himself for her injuries. Minsi let herself fall into the submissive position, with her tail tucked between her legs and her neck fully exposed. She willing submitted to Storm fully this time. She belonged to him now and he could do whatever he pleased with her.
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