lightclan ;; semi lit ;; open

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Re: lightclan ;; semi lit ;; open

Postby belle noire » Mon Nov 25, 2013 11:50 am

FRECKLE

she-cat pregnant queen nursery amused vaporstrike, littlekit & lionkit
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      freckle chuckled at the two kits, knowing that it was for the best if they were disappointed by not being able to go to the forest instead of found hurt inside of it. at their next question, she couldn't help but roll her eyes, in good-natured amusement, of course. she, too, loved to listen to the elders tell their stories, and when she first joined the clan she had spent a long time getting to know the elderly cats of the clan. "well, as long as vaporstrike doesn't mind then i suppose it's just fine." she leaned close to the siblings, blue gaze flicking over to the warrior before she whispered conspiratorially with the kits. "and i'm sure if you ask really nicely, that ol' tom-cat won't be able to say no."




NIGHTPAW

tom apprenticed to skysong territory relieved skysong & snakefang
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      nightpaw was, to say the least, extremely relieved that skysong allowed him to stay outside of the camp. he chuckled nervously though when she pointed out that they actually needed yarrow, and he couldn't help the twinge of guilt that made itself known in his chest, a result that always happened when he told even the smallest of lies. clearing his throat, the black apprentice's wide eyes turned to the bush skysong had just pointed out. frowning, he got close enough to sniff, but not touch, and recoiled accordingly. "d-deathberr-ies?" he questioned, yellow eyes saucers in his angular face as he looked between his mentor and the warrior that accompanied them.



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Re: lightclan ;; semi lit ;; open

Postby bambi, » Mon Nov 25, 2013 12:48 pm

s n a k e f a n g
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name; snakefang

gender; tom

rank; warrior

crush; ---

tags; Skysong, Nightpaw
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        Relieved that he didn't have to make a fool out of himself by searching aimlessly, he quickly made his way over to the medicine cat and her apprentice. As soon as Nightpaw spoke, Snakefang stopped in his steps, his face distorted into a concerned and slightly frightening look. "Those aren't good news, are they?" He took in a deep breath, catching the scent of the berries just slightly, but enough to make him cringe and scrunch up his nose. Snakefang didn't know much about the berries, but remembered tales of cats dying after coming in contact with them. It wasn't often he had come face to face with a bush full of them.

r a v e n p a w
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name; ravenpaw

gender; she-cat

rank; apprentice

crush; ---

tags; ---
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Ravenpaw sat in her nest in the apprentice den, nearest to the back and isolated from the other nests, just the way she liked it. She sat straight, with her tail curled neatly over her paws. She quietly watched her den-mates exit and enter the den. Her yellow eyes gleamed just slightly in the light that managed to slip into the closed space. Out of her current den-mates, Ravenpaw was the youngest, having only recently been made an apprentice. Being the youngest of the apprentices, Ravenpaw did a lot of watching. She wanted to be like them and fit in, but at the same time she didn't want to interact with them at all, which was unusual for a clan cat. Ravenpaw stood out in a contradictory sort of way. In a sense Ravenpaw is "invisible" since she's so tiny with her small body and stubby little legs. She could be mistaken to be only a kit still. In this way, Ravenpaw stands out because she acts and looks different from the other apprentices, but yet nobody notices her because she's well, too small for anyone to be able to see her at eye-level.
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Re: lightclan ;; semi lit ;; open

Postby despairz » Mon Nov 25, 2013 12:59 pm

"Of course." Vaporstrike nods. "Come, kits." He murmurs, flicking his tail to them as he exits the den, heading over the cliff's large ledge to the elders' den. The ledge wasn't too high up, though. If the kits were to fall, they would be alright. "I'll stay for the story, so I can walk you back." He says to the kits, Littlekit and Lionkit. As he enters the large den, he nods to the elders. "Hello, Troutsplash, Badgerclaw." He smiles. They both finish chuckling form the joke one of the toms had told, and nod to the warrior and kits. "The kits have come for a story." He says, allowing the kits to pad in.

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Re: lightclan ;; semi lit ;; open

Postby nefertiti, » Mon Nov 25, 2013 1:16 pm

Name
Dawnlight
Age
24 moons
Rank
Warrior
With
Alone
Where
Camp

D A W N L I G H T

Dawnlight nodded to the deputy. "Sure Coalfoot." She said glad to be leading a boarder patrol. She stood up looking for the two warriors, seeing Stormfur she walked over to him. "Hey Stormfur, Coalfoot wants you to come on a patrol." She felt a bit uncomfortable leading a patrol with a warrior old than herself in it but she had learnt to deal with it.





Name
Skysong
Age
15 moons
Rank
Medicine Cat
With
Nightpaw
Where
Medicine Cat Den

S K Y S O N G

Skysong nodded. "Yes Nightpaw and no Snakefang, it's not good. Can you make sure no cat comes near this while Nightpaw and I go and tell Owlstar and see if she agrees that we should barricade this off or destroy it." She padded off into the trees summoning her apprentice with the wave of her tail. She wanted her apprentice to know what they could be used for. "Those berries are used by some medicine cats to aid cats on the way to StarClan when they are to sick to be healed or to kill another animal that is a danger to the clan. I hate using them and never will, I want to destroy the bush but I have to ask Owlstar first."





Name
Jaypaw
Age
7 moons
Rank
Apprentice
With
Alone
Where
Camp

J A Y P A W

Jaypaw had been awake for a while when his clan mates started waking up. He had always been an early riser and nothing would or could change that. No matter how hard he tried he could not sleep in past dawn. As the camp grew more and more active with each passing heartbeat he looked around for his mentor, yes he had only been an apprentice for a moon but he felt like it had been at least one season since he received his apprentice name alone. He didn't have much in common with his fellow apprentices being half rogue sort of cast him out, or that is how he felt anyway. He had always wondered what his mother was like but no one in the clan had met her except his father who was now hunting in StarClan, the only kin he had left was his fathers sisters Dawnlight and Skysong but he felt like they were not related at all.
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Re: lightclan ;; semi lit ;; open

Postby stricklyspagetti » Mon Nov 25, 2013 1:23 pm

Littlekit & Lionkit
The two kits cheered as they followed Vaporstrike out of the nursury. "Bye Freckle!" Littlekit said, her body dissapearing as she climbed down the rocks. Lionkit just flicked his tail as he folowed. He actually felt like a warrior. As they entered the elders den, Littlekit smiled, and Lionkit just looked around. These cats where old. Lionkit nodded to all the elders, and Littlekit said hello to them. "Hello Troutsplash, Badgerclaw!" she said in her usually happy voice.

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Re: lightclan ;; semi lit ;; open

Postby despairz » Mon Nov 25, 2013 1:54 pm

[ @facepi- i have owlstar and snowpaw open c:
and accepted. ]

Vapostrike smiles, flicking his tail. "Well, what story will you tell?" He asks, glancing between the toms. "How about the story about how the two leaders before Owlstar di-" Troutsplash starts, but Vaporstrike cuts him off. " How about you tell them about what it was like before Lightclan?" He asks, giving the two toms a hard glare. They nod quickly. "Well, before the cans there was Bramblestar, the son of an evil cat. He was known of this. He looked like that evil tom, but I knew his other son, Hawkfrost. I was a kit when this was, but-" Vaporstrike cuts him off again. "But I though Hawkfrost was killed before this?" He asks. "Oh no. Now be quite or I won't finish!" The old tom hisses.

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Postby Z4XX0N » Mon Nov 25, 2013 8:25 pm

WOLFSPECKLE
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    Wolfspeckle didn't even flinch at his apprentice's words, calmly turning his head to look at Bearpaw, his gaze seeming rather bored. "Well, once you can actually complete my task efficiently, then yes. Or, would you prefer to go and help out with the elders? I really don't mind delaying your training, Bearpaw." the tom replied, flicking his tail. "You don't position yourself correctly when you fight, your hits are sloppy and my father can dodge blows better than you, and he's crotchety on his paws. Your fighting is nothing but inefficient, and you're two moons away from becoming a warrior. I don't want you turning into mousedust, just because you can't fight properly. And besides, we've spent the majority of last quarter-moon hunting and correcting your hunting skills, as well as yesterday." Wolfspeckle glanced over at Snowhawk, who gave him a rather harsh look.

    "Anyway," Snowhawk chimed in. "Don't make assumptions. They're not very good." she offered a small smile to Bearpaw, silently reprimanding Wolfspeckle. "Today, we were actually planning to do something different, mainly because I was getting bored with what we were doing, too. We were going to focus on team combat. You're not always going to have three-hundred and sixty degree views of your opponents, so the best way to tackle that it by working in a team, or in your case, we'll be working as a pair." The she-cat twitched her ears, before deciding to continue. "And afterwards, I will take you hunting. Sound decent?"
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Postby button. » Tue Nov 26, 2013 4:59 am

    Birdpaw couldnt help but to flinch at the hard words. They werent even being directed at her, but it hurt her to see anyone being yelled at. She didnt dare glance at Bearpaw, for she knew he was probably wearing a smirk on his muzzle, something that would greatly annoy Birdpaw. He was already in enough trouble. When the scolding was over, Birdpaw looked up at her mentor to listen to the plans for today. It sounded good to Birdpaw, and she was glad she would be fighting with Bearpaw and not against him. "Yay i love hunting!" Birdpaw purred when Snowhawk finished talking.
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Re: lightclan ;; semi lit ;; open

Postby stricklyspagetti » Tue Nov 26, 2013 5:52 am

Littlekit & Lionkit
Littlekit listeneds fassinated, and plops herself down beside Vaporstrike. Lionkit sits down beside her, and they listen closely.

>>Terrible wb for Littlekit and Lionkit. Brackenpaw is open<<
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Re: lightclan ;; semi lit ;; open

Postby despairz » Tue Nov 26, 2013 9:25 am

Bearpaw couldn't help but allow a large growl to rise in his throat. "My father's dead to indignant fox-heart!" he yowls, only after his mentor and snowhawk were done talking. He snarls and leaps, catching the tom right on his shoulders, toppling him over with such brute force, since the tom was angry. "You should know that, shouldn't you? Your a senior warrior and you act like you know everything, but you don't and you never do!" He snaps, his teeth bared. His father had been the closest thing to family for the apprentice, and nothing- nothing ever got him riled up. Except that one thing- his father. He leaps off, his tail lashing as he listens for the tom to get up, alert. He had come only a mouse-length to ripping out the toms throat, but he didn't. Only because he wasn't going to be... a murderer.

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