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Re: lightclan ;; semi lit ;; open

Postby belle noire » Mon Nov 25, 2013 7:29 am

FRECKLE

she-cat pregnant queen nursery unknown vaporstrike, lionkit & littlekit
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      freckle groaned inwardly, as this was a question she had been asked many times before. sighing, she looked at the two pleading kits before her. then, her clear blue gaze flicked to vaporstrike, arching her brown in a "well now what am i supposed to do" look. turning back to littlekit and lionkit, she situated her body so that she was closer to their height. "now, you two know that you aren't allowed to go into the forest until you're apprentices, remember? if you snuck out, or if one of the warriors or apprentices took you, it would be breaking the warrior code. and if you broke the warrior code as kits, owlstar might decide to delay your apprentice ceremonies, hmm?" the she-cat's voice was gentle but firm as she spoke. "when you're apprentices, i'm sure your mentors will take you all over the territory, but until then you must be patient, okay?" the queen hoped desperately that the two kits would understand that the forest was a dangerous place, and that even if they had a warrior with them, it didn't guarantee their safety.
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Postby Z4XX0N » Mon Nov 25, 2013 8:01 am

WOLFSPECKLE
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Warrior || Male || Tags; Birdpaw, Bearpaw, Snowhawk

    The enthusiasm of the apprentices was most entertaining, and without casting a second glance back into the camp, Wolfspeckle leaped into action, quickly catching up to the apprentices. But being a fitter and more developed feline had it's advantages, Wolfspeckle putting himself ahead of the two cats. "You kits hardly make it a challenge." Wolfspeckle snorted, slowly coming to a stop at the edge of where the forest met the beach, and motioning for the two apprentices to do so, also. "Now, always remember that though we may believe we own the forest, the forest owns us," he spoke, looking back at the two apprentices. "But she will help us in our time of need. The bushes, trees, the twigs we step on, all can be of assistance to us, especially in combat."

    "Though your focus may be on a battle, do not allow it to compromise your focus on your surroundings," the tom continued, "Even as I speak to you now, I'm listening and keeping track of my everything, trying to check for any anomalies, in the hopes that I can defend myself from any approaching threats."

    As if on cue, Snowhawk lunged out of the bushes from Wolfspeckle's flank, the tom whirling around and jumping up in time to pin the black and white she-cat to the ground, before looking back to Birdpaw and Bearpaw. "That entire time, Snowhawk was circling you. If you were aware, you could have taken her by surprise," he spoke, allowing the she-cat to stand up and shake herself off.

    "This also means it's good to confuse your opponent when you're on the other end," Snowhawk added, flicking her tail as she nodded to Birdpaw and Bearpaw in greeting. "Hanging around you two means that I can attempt to mix my scent in with yours, to confuse Wolfspeckle. But he's too good at this." Wolfspeckle snorted, earning a look from his fellow warrior. "Anyway, I did a quick patrol of the area whilst you lot were making your way over here; there's a couple of two-legs not too far away from where we're training, so we'll have to be on guard." Snowhawk looked to the apprentices. "I expect you to be on guard the most; it'll help with your training."

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Re: lightclan ;; semi lit ;; open

Postby despairz » Mon Nov 25, 2013 8:42 am

Bear paw had heard the she cat already, but dared not to blow her cover and ruin it for Birdpaw. Plus, Wolfspeckle wouldn't believe him anyways. Barely flinching as she jumps out. "Yeah. We know, guys. We go over this all of the time." He chuckles, flicking his tail. "Can't we learn something else?" He asks. They alwYs started with this, and the. They redid everything they went over before, which took up the whole class.

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Re: lightclan ;; semi lit ;; open

Postby nefertiti, » Mon Nov 25, 2013 9:05 am

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Name
Dawnlight
Age
24 moons
Rank
Warrior
With
Alone
Where
Camp

D A W N L I G H T

Dawnlight nodded to the deputy. "Sure Coalfoot." She said glad to be leading a boarder patrol. She stood up looking for the two warriors, seeing Stormfur she walked over to him. "Hey Stormfur, Coalfoot wants you to come on a patrol." She felt a bit uncomfortable leading a patrol with a warrior old than herself in it but she had learnt to deal with it.




Name
Skysong
Age
15 moons
Rank
Medicine Cat
With
Nightpaw
Where
Medicine Cat Den

S K Y S O N G

Skysong lead the way out of camp. "Yes thanks." She said flatly not really wanting to talk. She made sure she looked out for other herbs as well. "If you see any other herbs you think I might use can you tell me?" She asked, finding a scent she followed it dodging past trees and bushes. She came upon a bush that was dark leaved and covered in bright red berries, but of course she could not see that.






Name
Jaypaw
Age
7 moons
Rank
Apprentice
With
Alone
Where
Camp

J A Y P A W

Jaypaw had been awake for a while when his clan mates started waking up. He had always been an early riser and nothing would or could change that. No matter how hard he tried he could not sleep in past dawn. As the camp grew more and more active with each passing heartbeat he looked around for his mentor, yes he had only been an apprentice for a moon but he felt like it had been at least one season since he received his apprentice name alone. He didn't have much in common with his fellow apprentices being half rogue sort of cast him out, or that is how he felt anyway. He had always wondered what his mother was like but no one in the clan had met her except his father who was now hunting in StarClan, the only kin he had left was his fathers sisters Dawnlight and Skysong but he felt like they were not related at all.
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Re: lightclan ;; semi lit ;; open

Postby bambi, » Mon Nov 25, 2013 9:07 am

s n a k e f a n g
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name; snakefang

gender; tom

rank; warrior

crush; ---

tags; Skysong
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        Snakefang nodded to the she-cat, "I'll let you know." Snakefang then turned and looked around, his nose raised in the air slightly, searching for a scent. He wasn't really familiar with herbs, but he was sure he'd recognize some, or be able to guess. After a few minutes of searching, Snakefang had managed to collect nothing. Slightly embarrassed, the tom decided to keep his distance from the medicine cat until she was ready to return to camp. Snakefang continued to search for herbs, now completely unsure of what he was looking for.

r a v e n p a w
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name; ravenpaw

gender; she-cat

rank; apprentice

crush; ---

tags; ---
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Ravenpaw sat in her nest in the apprentice den, nearest to the back and isolated from the other nests, just the way she liked it. She sat straight, with her tail curled neatly over her paws. She quietly watched her den-mates exit and enter the den. Her yellow eyes gleamed just slightly in the light that managed to slip into the closed space. Out of her current den-mates, Ravenpaw was the youngest, having only recently been made an apprentice. Being the youngest of the apprentices, Ravenpaw did a lot of watching. She wanted to be like them and fit in, but at the same time she didn't want to interact with them at all, which was unusual for a clan cat. Ravenpaw stood out in a contradictory sort of way. In a sense Ravenpaw is "invisible" since she's so tiny with her small body and stubby little legs. She could be mistaken to be only a kit still. In this way, Ravenpaw stands out because she acts and looks different from the other apprentices, but yet nobody notices her because she's well, too small for anyone to be able to see her at eye-level.
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Re: lightclan ;; semi lit ;; open

Postby belle noire » Mon Nov 25, 2013 9:29 am

chateau wrote:
COLDPAW

she-cat apprenticed to owlstar camp irritable open
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      coldpaw rolled over in her next, sighing as she blinked up at the roof of the apprentice's den. though they hadn't been loud, the ruckus that the kits and whomever happened to be playing with them at the moment made, had woken the already grumpy she-cat up. glowering, her cold sea-green eyes blinked once, then twice, before she rolled herself to her feet, shaking bits of moss and dust from her pelt. this, of course, cause the unruly mass of white, orange, grey, and black to tuft together, standing out in places and kinking in others. not surprising in the least, the apprentice didn't bother to attempt taming her fur before stepping out into the camp just in time to snap angrily at a certain medicine cat apprentice as he darted past her, his wiry form nearly bowling her over. ah, and there it was, the mouse-brained stuttering reply, thrown over one black shoulder as he made haste for the entrance of camp.




STORMFUR

tom mentor to smokepaw camp entrance impacient smokepaw
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      stormfur frowned heavily as he waited by the camp's entrance. where in the name of starclan was his apprentice at? smokepaw had been instructed to meet him here at sunhigh, and she was late, something that was quite unusual for the young apprentice. sighing, the warrior shook his head, making his way over to the apprentice's den. of course, as he padded across camp he noticed nightpaw nearly barrel over coldpaw, and couldn't help the small chuckle that escaped him as he watched the irritable she-cats mouth move with obvious curses. clearing his throat to hide his amusement, stormfur gave a brief nod to coldpaw before peeking his head into the apprentices den. "hello? smokepaw, are you in there?" he called, waiting to see if he would get a reply or not. if not, he would ask foxstride, for the grey apprentices older brother would surely know where his sibling was at such an hour, right?




NIGHTPAW

tom apprenticed to skysong forest anxious skysong
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      nightpaw had woken up to the sound of skysong talking with one of the warriors, who, he couldn't pinpoint. however, when it became apparent that his mentor was leaving, the medicine cat apprentice shot to his feet. wide yellow eyes darting back and fourth, his black paws moved in place for a moment before he made up his mind. the felines lithe form darted out of the medicine den, skirting around the fresh-kill pile and nearly running straight into coldpaw. throwing a "sorry!" over his shoulder, the apprentice continued his sprint out the camps entrance. once there, he paused, sniffing lightly. aha! he'd definitely caught skysong's scent, and it was still fresh. following it, nightpaw dodged trees and bushes, and when his mentor was in site he allowed himself to slow down marginally. "s-skysong wait for me-e" he called, soon coming to the older felines side. once stopped, the tom panted heavily, speaking when he regained his breath. "i-i-i ah i remembered that uh we-e need so-m-me more burdock rood?" his voice lilted slightly at the end and he cringed openly, knowing the blind she-cat was unable to see him. he prayed desperately that she wouldn't know that the true reason he had come along was not for burdock root, which they'd had plenty of last time he checked, but that because if she was out of camp, it meant he might have to talk to the other cats in the clan, and, well, that was simply something he did not want to do.
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birdpaw | post five

Postby button. » Mon Nov 25, 2013 10:05 am

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    feeling ; excited
    location ; camp
    crush ; x
    mentor ; snowhawk
    tagged ; Bearpaw, Snowhawk, Wolfspeckle
    post number ; 5

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                  Birdpaw laughed as Wolfspeckle raced ahead of them, unable to keep up with the grown warrior. She slowed as they reached the beach, happy that they were coming down here. The beach was a fun place to be during the day when the tide was low. Birdpaws attention was pulled back on Wolfspeckle again when he started speaking, listening intently, and nodding along. Her eyes grew wide as Snowhawk lunged out, and nearly gave the she-cat a heart attack. "Oh my.." Birdpaw gasped, jumping out of her ginger pelt. She knocked into Bearpaw slightly when it happened too. Bearpaw had been completely unaware of the she-cat circling them, and was a little embarrassed that she hadn't scented her mentor. If she wanted to be a warrior, she would have to start paying more attention. When bearpaw started speaking, Birdpaw couldn't help but be annoyed with the tom. He was being quite rude according to the she-cat, and Birdpaw thought he shouldnt talk to their mentors that way. "Oh hush" she said good naturedly. "they're just making sure we're paying attention to their lessons." She finished softly, her voice nothing but kind.
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Re: lightclan ;; semi lit ;; open

Postby despairz » Mon Nov 25, 2013 10:21 am

Bearpaw flicks his tail, "But we do always learn the same thing." he mutters, flicking his tortoiseshell tail. "Can we actually learn some moves today?" He asks politely. He would rather be hunting, though he didn't want to say anything because he didn't like hunting alone, especially with only his mentor. "Or we could go hunting down by the moor...." He murmurs, though it slipped out.
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Re: lightclan ;; semi lit ;; open

Postby nefertiti, » Mon Nov 25, 2013 10:43 am

chateau wrote:
chateau wrote:
COLDPAW

she-cat apprenticed to owlstar camp irritable open
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      coldpaw rolled over in her next, sighing as she blinked up at the roof of the apprentice's den. though they hadn't been loud, the ruckus that the kits and whomever happened to be playing with them at the moment made, had woken the already grumpy she-cat up. glowering, her cold sea-green eyes blinked once, then twice, before she rolled herself to her feet, shaking bits of moss and dust from her pelt. this, of course, cause the unruly mass of white, orange, grey, and black to tuft together, standing out in places and kinking in others. not surprising in the least, the apprentice didn't bother to attempt taming her fur before stepping out into the camp just in time to snap angrily at a certain medicine cat apprentice as he darted past her, his wiry form nearly bowling her over. ah, and there it was, the mouse-brained stuttering reply, thrown over one black shoulder as he made haste for the entrance of camp.




STORMFUR

tom mentor to smokepaw camp entrance impacient smokepaw
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      stormfur frowned heavily as he waited by the camp's entrance. where in the name of starclan was his apprentice at? smokepaw had been instructed to meet him here at sunhigh, and she was late, something that was quite unusual for the young apprentice. sighing, the warrior shook his head, making his way over to the apprentice's den. of course, as he padded across camp he noticed nightpaw nearly barrel over coldpaw, and couldn't help the small chuckle that escaped him as he watched the irritable she-cats mouth move with obvious curses. clearing his throat to hide his amusement, stormfur gave a brief nod to coldpaw before peeking his head into the apprentices den. "hello? smokepaw, are you in there?" he called, waiting to see if he would get a reply or not. if not, he would ask foxstride, for the grey apprentices older brother would surely know where his sibling was at such an hour, right?




NIGHTPAW

tom apprenticed to skysong forest anxious skysong
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      nightpaw had woken up to the sound of skysong talking with one of the warriors, who, he couldn't pinpoint. however, when it became apparent that his mentor was leaving, the medicine cat apprentice shot to his feet. wide yellow eyes darting back and fourth, his black paws moved in place for a moment before he made up his mind. the felines lithe form darted out of the medicine den, skirting around the fresh-kill pile and nearly running straight into coldpaw. throwing a "sorry!" over his shoulder, the apprentice continued his sprint out the camps entrance. once there, he paused, sniffing lightly. aha! he'd definitely caught skysong's scent, and it was still fresh. following it, nightpaw dodged trees and bushes, and when his mentor was in site he allowed himself to slow down marginally. "s-skysong wait for me-e" he called, soon coming to the older felines side. once stopped, the tom panted heavily, speaking when he regained his breath. "i-i-i ah i remembered that uh we-e need so-m-me more burdock rood?" his voice lilted slightly at the end and he cringed openly, knowing the blind she-cat was unable to see him. he prayed desperately that she wouldn't know that the true reason he had come along was not for burdock root, which they'd had plenty of last time he checked, but that because if she was out of camp, it meant he might have to talk to the other cats in the clan, and, well, that was simply something he did not want to do.


Name
Dawnlight
Age
24 moons
Rank
Warrior
With
Alone
Where
Camp

D A W N L I G H T

Dawnlight nodded to the deputy. "Sure Coalfoot." She said glad to be leading a boarder patrol. She stood up looking for the two warriors, seeing Stormfur she walked over to him. "Hey Stormfur, Coalfoot wants you to come on a patrol." She felt a bit uncomfortable leading a patrol with a warrior old than herself in it but she had learnt to deal with it.




Name
Skysong
Age
15 moons
Rank
Medicine Cat
With
Nightpaw
Where
Medicine Cat Den

S K Y S O N G

Skysong sniffed around the bush. "No we need some yarrow." She corrected her apprentice. "Snakefang, come here." She called, this bush would be bad news especially so close to camp. She would have to tell Owlstar about this so no apprentice or warrior would get some on themselves and when clearing would lick any of the juice. She really didn't want any poisoned cats in her den. "Nightpaw can you tell me what this is? What ever you do don't touch it though." She said.





Name
Jaypaw
Age
7 moons
Rank
Apprentice
With
Alone
Where
Camp

J A Y P A W

Jaypaw had been awake for a while when his clan mates started waking up. He had always been an early riser and nothing would or could change that. No matter how hard he tried he could not sleep in past dawn. As the camp grew more and more active with each passing heartbeat he looked around for his mentor, yes he had only been an apprentice for a moon but he felt like it had been at least one season since he received his apprentice name alone. He didn't have much in common with his fellow apprentices being half rogue sort of cast him out, or that is how he felt anyway. He had always wondered what his mother was like but no one in the clan had met her except his father who was now hunting in StarClan, the only kin he had left was his fathers sisters Dawnlight and Skysong but he felt like they were not related at all.[/quote]
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Re: lightclan ;; semi lit ;; open

Postby stricklyspagetti » Mon Nov 25, 2013 10:58 am

Littlekit & Lionkit
Littlekit's ears pinned to her head as she padded away. Lionkit looked at Vaporstrike, and got a idea. "Can he take us to the elders to hear a story!?" he and went to Vaporstrike. Littlekit stood up, and bounded over. "Yeh!" she said, and looked around. The nursury could be so dull. Just rock walls and some moss. She looked over at him, but Lionkit was focused on Freckle.

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