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Re: ↬the prophets ;; closed

Postby Greenleaf » Mon Nov 25, 2013 8:24 am

Sparrowpaw


Sunlight streamed through the entrance to the cave, alighting the pelts of the sleeping warriors and apprentices. A stray beam happened to fall right upon Sparrowpaw, striking his muzzle and figuratively nudging him awake. Sharp amber eyes opened and his jaws stretched wide in a yawn.
The nest beside him was cold and empty; Smokepaw had probably gone out earlier, as was his wont. Some other cats were starting to stir as Sparrowpaw carefully picked his way around the slumbering bodies, muttering an apology when he trod on someone's tail. As always in the morning his breath felt a little raspy, so he paused at the entrance and licked the dew off some of the leaves.

He emerged blinking in the bright sunlight, eyes narrowed against the glare; he waved his tail briefly at Dawnstar in greetings to the old leader. He spotted Crowfoot and his eyes brightened; his paws quickened and he bounded over, following his mentor.


(asdf. I've edited out the mistakes in this, sorry.)
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Re: ↬the prophets ;; closed

Postby Keriae » Mon Nov 25, 2013 8:35 am

DAWNSTAR

    The soft sound of paw pads hitting the well-trodden earth caused the older cat to pivot her skull and set her lanterns on the black and silver tabby tom as he arrived at her side. Fluffing up her fur to try and keep warm in the coolness of the morning, she dipped her head in a silent morning greeting and wrapped her thick, plumy tail over her nimble, petite paws. One ear flicked towards her deputy as he spoke, telling her that he had already ordered a border patrol, for her head had already turned back to watch the activities of her young - and in her own view - sometimes naïve clanmates.

    "Thank you Crowfoot," she meowed a gentle reply, voice tinged with warmth, "Who is on the border patrol? I have the urge to accompany one of the hunting patrols. Cinderpaw will come with me. I'd prefer to go on patrol with another mentor and apprentice pair, to assess their training; you'll have to stay in camp to keep things under control," perhaps, in another time, her words would have been purred but all the events of the past moons weighed down on her shoulders. "everyone else is to stay in camp; the second patrol can go out when we return, and then I'll assess another apprentice. They're all nearing the end of their training." Dawnstar would not risk sending out too many cats at once.
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Re: ↬the prophets ;; closed

Postby wolfie. » Mon Nov 25, 2013 11:22 am

firelight


    Firelight awoke from her slumber when rays of sunlight glared through the opening of the den and onto her face. She blinked, momentarily blinded by the bright welcome to the day, and then drew her ginger and white body to her feet, knowing that she she needed to find Robinpaw and get to training soon. As she stepped out of the den, Firelight's gaze took in the cats already awake, seeking out her apprentice in the bunch as she did so. Robinpaw's black, white, and orange pelt soon entered firelight's vision, and she decided that after the dawn patrol had returned, she might ask who would like to join her and Robinpaw. In the meantime, she stepped towards the fresh-kill cave and glanced into the darkness. The pile is dreadfully low, she noticed with an unhappy frown, retreating from its depths. As she did so, her stomach growled in protest, but she could wait.

    Having nothing better to do with herself, Firelight turned from the cave and instead walked toward Robinpaw. She hadn't been called to join the dawn patrol, and while she wanted to ask Crowfoot about joining the next patrol, he and Dawnstar seemed to be rather busy talking. Not wanting to interrupt them, she settled for waiting with her apprentice. "Good morning, Robinpaw." She greeted warmly, sitting down next to her and wrapping her plume-like tail around her paws.
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Re: ↬the prophets ;; closed

Postby nefertiti, » Mon Nov 25, 2013 11:39 am

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Name
Ravenpaw
Age
6 moons
Rank
Medicine Cat Apprentice
Crush
None
Where
Camp

R A V E N P A W

Ravenpaw walked over to the fresh kill cave, picking up a mouse and a vole he took the vole to his mentors nest and dropped it beside him. Then going back outside he dropped the mouse in front of himself he began to eat. He wondered what it would be like to be a warrior apprentice, every now and then he asked himself that but he could never answer, he watched the camp grow busier as he ate his mouse. No one talked to him or came near him, he wasn't surprised he was a medicine cat apprentice and blind. The reason he had gotten up so early was he still wasn't used to sleep in the medicine cat den, he had only been a medicine cat for two days and was still getting used to an almost empty den.








Name
Robinpaw
Age
10 moons
Rank
Apprentice
Crush
None
Where
Camp

R O B I N P A W

Robinpaw turned around when her mentor came over. "Are we going training today, it's only two moons till I become a warrior and I want to know everything by then." She said it all in a rush, she always loved training, it made her feel good when her claws sunk into prey or she successfully did a new fighting technique. Sometimes she badgered her mentor about it to much and she knew that but she just wanted to become the best warrior she could be and maybe even one day leader. She sometimes wondered what it would be like leading your clan into battle or leading your clan by the warrior code.
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Postby Z4XX0N » Mon Nov 25, 2013 9:43 pm

COALFUR
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Warrior || Female || Tags; Snowdrift, Smokepaw

    Looking up, Coalfur returned Crowfoot's warm smile, listening as she assigned him to a patrol. "Of course," she replied, rising to her paws and looking around. Snowdrift, Tumblestep and Smokepaw wasn't a bad selection for a border patrol, in the dark she-cat's opinion. All were extremely intelligent and observant felines, which meant that they would do perfectly fine in spotting any anomalies. Rising to her feet, the dark she-cat made her way over to where she saw Smokepaw and Snowdrift conversing, clearing her throat before she spoke. "Apologies for interrupting you two," Coalfur spoke, twitching her tail. "But Crowfoot wanted you two and Tumblestep to come with me on a quick border patrol," The she-cat turned her head to hear Dawnstar speaking, and she nodded. The leader had it rather difficult. After all, many cats were looking for her to account for the recent losses of warriors, and the ash appearing everywhere. The thought made Coalfur bristle, but she shook the thoughts away, looking to Snowdrift and Smokepaw.



SMOKEPAW
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Apprentice || Male || Tags; Snowdrift, Tumblestep, Coalfur

    Smokepaw closed his eyes, taking in a few quick breaths, before jolting in surprise when something prodded his flank. "Oh, good-morning, Snowdrift," he greeted pleasantly, the grey tom flicking his ears in response. Upon his mentor asking if he slept well, the tom inwardly groaned. There was no point in being dishonest with his mentor; he would get told off for lying, as well as going out of camp without another cat. "Honestly? No, I did not. But I have not slept decently for a very long time, to be quite honest with you." He opened his mouth to speak again, before the apprentice was cut off by Coalfur, who explained that they were to go on a border patrol. "Well, I'll go and wake Tumblestep, then," Smokepaw chimed in, rising to his paws and nodding to both his mentor and the dark she-cat, before slipping back into the den, which warriors and apprentices shared.

    The ginger tom was far from difficult to find, he tended to sleep near the back of the den, from memory. Padding over, Smokepaw peered over the warrior, who was asleep in his nest. "Tumblestep," he murmured, prodding the tom with a paw in his side. "Crowfoot wants you to come on a border patrol. Up ya hop."



WOLFSPECKLE
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Medicine Cat || Male || Tags; Ravenpaw

    Something being dropped next to his nest woke the tom, Wolfspeckle opening his eyes and looking around, catching glimpse of a vole next to his nest. Ah, Ravenpaw must have gotten it for him. Rising to his feet, the tom shook out his pelt, yawning and blinking a few times to wake himself up. Where was his apprentice, anyway? It hadn't been too long ago that Wolfspeckle had actually become the full Medicine Cat, upon the death of his mentor, Beetlefoot. Wolfspeckle sighed at the thought, climbing out of his nest, and picking up the vole. Ravenpaw would be his first apprentice, and it was only two days ago that the young tom had been sent to become a medicine cat, and Wolfspeckle was awfully nervous. How was he supposed to teach a blind cat how to sort herbs, and where they were to go? Sure, he'd give it a shot, but he wasn't completely sure that he'd succeed. Wolfspeckle padded out of the den, the thoughts clouding his mind as he found his apprentice, and padded over.

    "Hello Ravenpaw," Wolfspeckle greeted pleasantly. "Thank-you for my vole, I appreciate it." The Medicine cat placed the vole down, before sitting, and looking at the tom. "So, we need to go and fetch a few things, today. I was thinking we might go with one of the patrols, and get them. Does that sound good?"



DARK
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Loner || Male || Tags; Linden

    The stocky tom's green gaze pierced the ash as he growled under his breath, trudging along the forest floor. Once again, his friend had been unable to provide him with the food he wanted, but Dark didn't blame the poor tom. It was hard being a Medicine Cat, and keeping your loyalties to the clan, as well as looking after someone that gave you information from the outside. So far, the two of them had been unable to meet, mainly because cats from his clan weren't allowed to leave the camp alone, and if the two were caught, they may have gotten into trouble. It wasn't that they were conspiring against the clan or anything, it was just that the two wanted to work out where the ash was coming from, and sharing information was always the way.

    A figure raced past him, and Dark's gaze followed a lithe feline darting further into the forest. They seemed to be chasing something; but it was none of his business to pry. But, he was indeed curious. So, the tom followed the fresh scent trail at a brisk trot, scanning the area for any possible threats, but thus far, there were none. He came to a stop, noticing the feline had stopped in her tracks, clearly oblivious to the scent markings that they had passed. Or, perhaps they simply did not care. But Dark was not an uncaring feline, and it was always nice to make sure.

    "Hey, ya might wanna be careful there," he spoke, flicking his tail. "That land yer own is clan territory, and they don't take too nicely to strangers, y'know."
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Re: ↬the prophets ;; closed

Postby wolfie. » Tue Nov 26, 2013 5:38 pm

FIRELIGHT
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warrior // shecat // tagged: robinpaw


    Firelight smiled down at the eager apprentice, giving a nod of her head. "Yes, and I think we should start with hunting to get warmed up for the day. I just need to speak with Crowfoot and ask if we can join a hunting party." She replied with warmth in her tone. She liked Robinpaw's enthusiasm for training and felt very fortunate that she was given such a compliant apprentice. She had been worried at first that being a mentor would be a difficult task, and while it certainly required patience, it wasn't as wearisome as she had originally expected it to be. Firelight touched her nose to the shecat's shoulder affectionately. "Be patient Robinpaw. You're going to be a great warrior someday, just give it a lot of effort and a little bit of time." Hearing herself say this words reminded Firelight that sometimes she too needed to practice patience. It was easy to get frustrated, especially considering the recent developments in the clan. The ash-covered forest, the disappearances and the deaths, and the rotten, wasted prey lying inside the clans borders were all weighing on the minds of her and the rest of the clan. She tried to imagine what could possibly be doing this, but she could barely wrap her mind around it still. What animal killed prey and left it there for crow-food? Why were cats dying unexpectedly? Where was the ash coming from? Firelight felt her pelt bristle as a cool breeze sent shivers up and down her spine. She didn't know much yet, but she knew there had to be a cause for all of this, and somehow they needed to figure it out, and fast.
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Re: ↬the prophets ;; closed

Postby nefertiti, » Tue Nov 26, 2013 6:15 pm

Name
Ravenpaw
Age
6 moons
Rank
Medicine Cat Apprentice
Crush
None
Where
Camp

R A V E N P A W

Ravenpaw walked over to the fresh kill cave, picking up a mouse and a vole he took the vole to his mentors nest and dropped it beside him. Then going back outside he dropped the mouse in front of himself he began to eat. He wondered what it would be like to be a warrior apprentice, every now and then he asked himself that but he could never answer, he watched the camp grow busier as he ate his mouse. No one talked to him or came near him, he wasn't surprised he was a medicine cat apprentice and blind. The reason he had gotten up so early was he still wasn't used to sleep in the medicine cat den, he had only been a medicine cat for two days and was still getting used to an almost empty den.








Name
Robinpaw
Age
10 moons
Rank
Apprentice
Crush
None
Where
Camp

R O B I N P A W

Robinpaw liked her mentor, she was kind and taught her all she needed to know, she couldn't wish for a better mentor and one day wanted to be a warrior just like Firelight. She felt warm in her mentors confidence that she would become a warrior, every apprentice had fears that they wouldn't and all they needed was their mentors confidence in them to push those fears away. "Okay Firelight." She sometimes preferred it when they hunted in a hunting patrol because it made her feel more like a warrior and as the moons flew by she got more and more excited and nervous.
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Re: ↬the prophets ;; closed

Postby foxflight, » Thu Nov 28, 2013 4:12 pm

SNOWDRIFT
age; 24 moons
gender; she-cat
rank; warrior
status; single
tags; smokepaw & coalfur
    Snowdrift's tail tip twitched as she listened to her apprentices response, a faint frown appearing on her face. It seemed both Smokepaw and herself hadn't slept well, for quite a while. But then again, a couple of the other warriors had been restless just as much as she had. The loss of a few warriors could account for the fact that other cats were growing worried within the clan. Snowdrift released a soft sigh, "well that makes two of us." She murmured, referring to the fact that neither of them had a good sleep. Smokepaw looked as if he was going to say something else, but was interrupted by Coalfur who had come over to join them. The black she-cat quickly apologised before informing the two that they were to join the border patrol, led by Coalfur herself. Snowdrift gave a small nod of her head, allowing her body to relax as Smokepaw quickly chimed up that he'd go get Tumblestep. Snowdrift blinked her pale blue eyes, watching as her apprentice slipped into the darkness of the warriors den.


TUMBLESTEP
age; 22 moons
gender; tom
rank; warrior
status; single
tags; smokepaw
    Tumblestep groaned quietly, tucking his muzzle further underneath his paw as he heard a faint voice calling him, closely followed by the prod to his side; effectively jolting the tom awake. He blinked his amber eyes several times, removing the blurriness that clouded his vision. He was use to awakenings like this, since his younger sister tended to wake early and would always disrupt his sleep. But what surprised him awake even further was that instead of a small ginger figure standing in front of him, there was a grey and white figure whom he quickly recognised to be Smokepaw. The white and ginger pelted tom's jaws widened as he yawn and he quickly stretched out his limbs before answering. "A patrol heh?" He muttered groggily. "surely that could have waited until I finished my dream." He teased, standing up in his nest. "I was so close to catching a nice plump mouse." He added, his stomach grumbling quietly at the mention of food. Tumblestep bumped his shoulder against Smokepaw as he walks past the apprentice, "hurry up, the quicker we finish this patrol the quicker I can have something to eat!" He meows, exiting the warriors den quickly.
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Re: ↬the prophets ;; closed

Postby Keriae » Wed Dec 04, 2013 3:57 am

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Re: ↬the prophets ;; closed

Postby Tremayne » Wed Dec 04, 2013 6:26 am

Crowfoot
      xxx deputy xxx tags; sparrowpaw, dawnstar
    Crowfoot listened intently to Dawnstar, wanting to know everything she had to say. At her proposal of going on a hunting patrol with another mentor-apprentice pair, his eyes darted across camp towards Firelight and Robinpaw. He looked back to Dawnstar to hear the rest of what she had to say, he nodded, signifying his agreement. "Firelight and Robinpaw can go with you, and when you return I will take Sparrowpaw and you can stay here, or you can take Sparrowpaw and I will stay here," he looked down at his tabby apprentice and smiled a warm greeting, and then he turned back to Dawnstar. "And on the second patrol, Wolfspeckle and Ravenpaw can go as well." He looked at Dawnstar, hoping she a approved of his plans. All the apprentices were being sent out on a patrol with the plan he had set.


Linden
      xxx loner xxx tags; dark
    Linden nearly jumped out of her skin when she heard a sudden voice, sounding as if it belonged to a tom. Her eyes widened in fear: was this one of the fierce warriors that she had heard so much about, who would willingly tear another cat to shreds? She turned slowly, ears pinned to the back of her head. A large tabby tom with a white patch on his chest stood before her, his green eyes watching her. His words held no threat, but more of a helpful warning. Her ears lifted, and she angled them towards the tom. He didn't look like he wanted to eat her alive. At the mention of her being on a clan's territory, she looked at the ground beneath her as if she had stepped in ice-cold water. Prancing away from the spot, she turned around to look at the tom inquisitively. "A clan? What is a clan?"
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