THE POISON OF LOVE [warriors] taking one apprentice

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Re: THE POISON OF LOVE [warriors] taking two apprentices

Postby adcatfish » Sat Oct 19, 2013 7:20 am

~ Shrewnose ~
-- Warrior -- Tom -- 21 moons -- Life-mate: Frecklefoot -- Apprentice: Breezepaw--
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Shrewnose watched as the apprentices had padded off, and he wondered how much prey they'd be able to catch. Soon, he heard the quiet voice of Frecklefoot at his ear, and he nodded slightly. I wonder what she wants to speak to about; perhaps something having to do with the training. The brown tabby thought, glancing over at Frecklefoot as the she-cat had smiled before completely leaving the camp. Shrewnose glanced around the clearing before heading to the camp entrance, padding outside and soon catching up to Frecklefoot. "You wanted to speak to me about something?" Shrewnose mewed, keeping his voice quiet in case the apprentices were nearby and Frecklefoot had wanted to speak to him about them. The tabby waited for Frecklefoot's response, still curious about what the she-cat would next say.

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~ Dovepaw ~
-- Apprentice -- She-cat -- 9 moons -- Life-mate: Breezepaw -- Dovepaw: Frecklefoot--
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Dovepaw glanced up at her mentor, seeing her say that it was alright to go. She still was wondering what exactly would happen during the training, though turned towards the camp entrance. Breezepaw had flicked her with his tail before heading out into the forest, and Dovepaw padded after him. Hearing Breezepaw speak, Dovepaw nodded, quietly moving around so that she'd be downwind of any potential prey. She scented the air, trying to determine if there were any prey nearby. At first, she couldn't scent anything besides the forest, though the gray-and-white she-cat soon caught the scent of a vole and saw some bushes moving close by. Dovepaw's blue eyes glanced towards Breezepaw, trying to catch his attention, before she nodded in the direction of the vole to see if he wanted to go after it.

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Re: THE POISON OF LOVE [warriors] taking two apprentices

Postby crowley, » Sun Oct 20, 2013 1:58 am

➳BREEZEPAW
• tom • 10 moons • apprentice • mentor: shrewnose • lifemate: dovepaw • crush: none •
tags;; dovepaw

Thankful that no further instructions were needed, he, too, kept on alert; constantly tasting the air for any smell of prey. When Dovepaw pointed out the rustling bushes, a whiff of vole came towards him too. She didn't need to say a word. He nodded, accepting the first hunt. Breezepaw crouched down on his haunches like he'd been taught, tail pointed. He slowly crept forward, making sure to avoid sticks or anything that could snap and give himself away. And, waiting until the vole scuttled out of the bush, he lunged at it. Managing to pin the prey beneath his paws, he sunk his fangs into its neck, killing it instantly. Contently, he picked the vole up in his mouth and turned to show off his kill to the other apprentice.
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Re: THE POISON OF LOVE [warriors] taking two apprentices

Postby grizzly. » Sun Oct 20, 2013 2:36 am

((Sorry I wasn't on yesterday, I had school then I ended up going to our homecoming game and tonight I won't be on since I'm going to the dance.))

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FRECKLEFOOT

ɢᴇɴᴅᴇʀ. she-cat.
ʀᴀɴᴋ. warrior
ᴛᴀɢs. Shrewnose.
ᴄʀᴜsʜ. Shrewnose
ʟɪғᴇ-ᴘᴀʀᴛɴᴇʀ. Shrewnose
ᴋɪɴ. none.


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Frecklefoot waited until Shrewnose had caught up to her and looked around, her ears perked for any possible sign that a cat had followed them. Hearing no movement she looked at Shrewnose and her ears pressed flat against her head, trying to think up of a way to start out her line of questions.
"I know it might not be my place to ask this, but are you for this no-love rule? And be honest...I won't tell either way."
She asked awkwardly, not knowing how to exacty ask it straight up, and knew that they should be focused on their apprentices, but maybe if they got too comfortable and thought that they would have no problem keeping away from their mentors to have a successful hunt, then it would only give them a better lesson.
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Re: THE POISON OF LOVE [warriors] taking two apprentices

Postby Taiyo » Sun Oct 20, 2013 2:53 am

(( oooh :O this looks so interesting! Can I reserve an apprentice's spot please?
*edit* actually xDD I just finished my form! I hope she's okay! ;') ))



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P e t a l p a w
if you love until it hurts,

there can be no more hurt,
only more
love.




Name; Petalpaw >> Petaldash
Age; 8 moons
Gender; She-cat
Clan; Pureclan
Rank; Apprentice
Status; Single

Coat; White
Eyes; Blue
Fur; Short
Markings; Light siamese points








    D E T A I L S

      Appearance;
        Petalpaw's fur is short and silky. Light white pelt, dusted with faint siamese points which adds to her feminine appeal. She is quite small for her age though her lithe form didn't take away her natural appeal. Though lacking in size Petalpaw makes up with speed, excelling in swift turns and dashing.
      Personality;
        Petalpaw is a soft-spoken she-cat that hides her natural curiosity under a facade of timidness. Being a cat brought up in a strict environment, Petalpaw is careful not to break any rules - when being watched. She shies from negative emotions and tries her best not to displease others as she is a cat that thrives on positive emotions. Though cheerful and outgoing, Petalpaw rarely raises her voice over her normal volume, finding loud noises an irritation that grates on her nerves. She is not much of a leader and finds comfort in others leading and taking control, trusting that the seniors would know what's better. This makes it hard for her to refuse commands and though she might disagree, she would never openly disobey an order - even if it crushes her.
      History;
        Petalkit was born to a litter of four being the only she-cat of the litter. It had been a rough start from the very beginning for her family shared no love. Her parents were bound together due to an oath but with their duty done they rarely shared a glance with each other. Her father never visited them. Their mother took care of them but her motions were mechanical and not one drop of love was felt, it was an exchange of movements and when her duty was done - her mother left just like that. The lack of love left Petalkit confused but never put a dent in her optimistic personality as she grew from a bouncing kit to an apprentice. Without knowing the true meaning of love she felt no lingering connection to the dens that once held a family. It wasn't until a secret outing she went on that Petalpaw began to doubt and question the concept of 'love'. She had escaped on a star studded night, slipped passed the guard because she couldn't sleep. It was that night during her aimless wanderings did she come across a loner. Being the curious young apprentice she was, she approached the senior tom with enthusiasm and the loner seeing that she meant no harm questioned where's the rest of her family. 'Family'? The concept was foreign to her for all she had was a mechanical mother, an unnamed father and three brothers that shared no love between them. The loner was shocked upon hearing that and shook his head. When Petalpaw questioned him about 'love' the old tom laughed and his eyes twinkled with something she couldn't name. "Something that will make your heart soar and break at the same time. It is when you feel strongly for another - so strongly that you would sacrifice your own life for them."

        When she returned to camp that night she couldn't sleep, thoughts churning within her small head as she tried to grasp the meaning behind the loner's words. "It'll hit you with the force of a running badger little one. You won't be able to stop it and you won't be able to run from it. Call it fate or destiny, you can't run away from love. It will chase after you until you tire and give up."

        The next day when Petalpaw when back to the place she met the loner, the tom was gone. That day, Petalpaw swore a secret oath and decided to find out the meaning behind the old loner's words as her duty to the friendly tom.
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Re: lionheart - you're my king, i your lionheart

Postby indecisive. » Sun Oct 20, 2013 5:15 am

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    As Vinestar walked past the tom cat at a brisk pace, he frowned and watched her leave. When he was alone, he sat under the Highrock and hung his head and looked straight ahead glaring at nothing in particular. There was nothing to do, and this bothered him. Lionheart was used to always having something to do, and when he didn't it made him feel like dead weight to the clan. While the aggressive look on his face probably warded others away from him, he still sulked, not really caring. The orange cat flexed his claws, sinking them into the dirt and then retracting. The feeling of the cool dirt running between his toes sent shivers up his spine.

    When Vinestar came back and asked him about not having a mate, he sat up straight, but continued to keep his aggravated, sulky self present. "No. I have not been assigned a mate quite yet. Please, do not go out of your way to pair me. I'm a bit too young to be fathering anyways." While his word choice was colourful, and made his speech more interesting, his tone was flat and uninterested.


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Re: THE POISON OF LOVE [warriors] taking one apprentice

Postby crowley, » Sun Oct 20, 2013 5:18 am

[ That's fine, corgi. And accepted, Taiyo. c: ]
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Re: THE POISON OF LOVE [warriors] taking one apprentice

Postby seargent strigiforme » Sun Oct 20, 2013 3:47 pm

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Re: the broken one

Postby seargent strigiforme » Sun Oct 20, 2013 4:06 pm

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ASPENPAW

name;; aspenkit > aspenpaw > aspenclaw >
age;; 12 moons
gender;; male
rank;; apprentice
birthplace;; clan nursery
handi-caps {if-any};; left eye can not see-happened in a fox fight.
clan;; PureClan
pelt color;; a dark brown
markings;; beautiful black stripes that mottle his body
eye color;; a light amber color-darkens when he's angry
personality;; aspenpaw is a spiteful, dark, brooding tom. when he began to lose sight in his left eye it was like losing a part of himself, now he could not see as well as the other apprentices; so he had to work harder than anyone. he's not vain b/c the answer is simple he does not value his looks in fact he coyld no less. his carelessness is a problem-which brings me to his next personality trait, he is brash and impulsive maybe a little head-strong. before his accident the tom was very different, kind, playful. now that has all changed, there isn't any kindness in his eye or his face or even his demeanor. all that there is hollowness. he was hollow before, as a kit he had lost his mother and little sister to greencough. maybe-if-if they had been strong enough then they would have survived. Dappleheart and Willowkit. now all he had was his father Birchtail, who wouldn't even look at him. his father became a shell of his former self. then one day-he was gone, everyone panicked; everyone except aspenpaw. he knew his father had left, left him like a coward. b/c ofbthis he has trust issues, he can never fully trust anyone unless he knows them very well.
weaknesses;;
    his harshness-blunt personality
    tendecy to freeze up in battle
    b/c of his hard life he is prone to making others feel bad

strengths;;
    the ability to block out everything and focus on that moment Iin time
    hunting
    fighting techmiques
    his scary, wary intelligence of others-he's a watcher

crush;; N/A
mate;; N/A
status;; bored, perpetually lonely
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Re: Work In Progress

Postby crowley, » Sun Oct 20, 2013 10:33 pm

[ There's actually only a male apprentice spot left. ]
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