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Re: d o n ' t f i g h t b a c k [open]

Postby Cakewalk » Fri Oct 18, 2013 11:59 am

A C H E
"the misfit"

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        male;; one and a half years old;; shinie;; no crush;; alone;; feeling excited;; 461 words
          "ι’ve вeeɴ wαιтιɴɢ тo ѕмιle, ‘αy. вeeɴ нoldιɴɢ ιт ιɴ ғor α wнιle, ‘αy. тαĸe yoυ wιтн мe ιғ ι cαɴ, вeeɴ dreαмιɴɢ oғ тнιѕ ѕιɴce α cнιld. ι’м oɴ тop oғ тнe world."

      A few months ago, Cache's view of the world had been very different. It had been one of overgrown grass and a six-foot stockade fence, which had been badly in need of some repairs. The thick collar that had once been clasped around his neck, so small that his own skin had grown around it, was now gone. A thin, brown leather collar sat there instead, wide enough so that Cache no longer felt uncomfortable while wearing it. Instead of being tethered to a five foot chain in the middle of a backyard, the big wolfhound was free to roam through the small house that belonged to his owner, or, if he so desired, could slip through the over-sized dog door and mull about outside. He much preferred the comfort of the indoors and was currently splayed on the couch, his front and back paws falling from it because of his large size.

      He rose from it, having been there for several hours and now needing to take a break to venture outside. Upon standing, it was clear that Cache had not been in his new home long enough to have fully recovered. A pink scar sat around his neck where the collar had been cut away, leaving a deep gash that completely encircled his neck. While his belly was full, his sides were badly sunken in, ribs sticking out from underneath the well-groomed fur that his owner so dutifully saw to each month. They brown soulful eyes were still bright, however, despite the trials he had already faced in his young life. Now he was free of all of that.

      Slipping through the dog door, he found that it had started to drizzle, muddying the ground and bringing a strange new image to the world. Cache was used to enduring all sorts of weather. He had stayed in that backyard for a year through snow, hail, wind, and rain. Still, he enjoyed each new element, and upon seeing the small drops, the long tail began to wag back and forth, bringing his withers into the puppy-like dance as he tottered through the backyard.

      Cache also found another surprise. One section of the fence was missing - taken down by a set of workers that had left due to the sudden rain. His owner had forgotten to close the pet door, so now Cache was faced with the street, now able to go further into the world than he had ever been by himself before. Taking this opportunity (and quickly, before the elderly retriever he lived with decided to show himself), Cache slid forward, loping across the ground and taking his first steps outside of the safety of his backyard without a leash secured on his collar. How good it felt.
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Re: d o n ' t f i g h t b a c k [open]

Postby bambi, » Fri Oct 18, 2013 12:08 pm

    R I S K ∵ ∴ ∷
        ➳ tαkє α shσt, tαkє α c h α n c є σn .

      A chill ran down her spine when Kade came too close and she took a step back, but not far enough to be comfortable with the space between them. The brute may have been larger than her, but Risk had learned the hard way that size didn't define how strong or aggressive one was, not to say she didn't think Kade could be powerful if he chose to fight. "Flawless, eh?" she questioned him, widening her eyes as she spoke in a semi-snide tone. When he finally stepped away, Risk felt her whole body relax. He obviously didn't have respect for her, or maybe even faes in general, but she still respected his choice of backing off. Perhaps he had some common sense. Risk's face cringed with dissapointment when he mistakingly called her Raisin. "Raisin? I'm not a dried up grape, thank you very much," she scoffed, then shook her head before correcting him, "Risk. Got that?"
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Re: d o n ' t f i g h t b a c k [open]

Postby thejellyfish » Fri Oct 18, 2013 3:13 pm

a few important announcements;
- first off, i wanted to thank all of you. i have tried to run several rps and none have been as active and literate as the group of you. i wanted to sincerely thank you guys, and i don't think this happens enough in rps. you are what makes this roleplay worth the time and effort. thank-you. ;u;
- second, due to confusion, i have decided to move the "meeting" in the garage to tomorrow, at 4:30 to 5 o'clock. (Chicago, USA time) [for the creepy people of the internet, no, i do not live in chicago, but its time zone is conveniently close to mine.] i have found this website to be a good way to convert your timezone and see what time(s) relate to the time(s) mentioned above. if you have any questions/suggestions or can't be online, please PM me (again, do not post here).
- finally, while rereading posts, it has become somewhat obvious to me that i may come across as rude, un-respectful, and a "drama-hog" through my characters crisis, kade, and zee respectively. please know that i am, in fact only posting in character, and in no way would i like to come across as snappy or impulsive as my characters. sorry for any misunderstandings.

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.....[ kade ]
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age;; 2 years.........
gender;; brute.........
relations;; single.........
rank;; skitzee.........

with;; risk
where;; alleyway
when;; late day
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my life will end. i accept that. for now, i will live fearless, for what have i to fear? "

kade's cheeky grin transformed into downright devilish contortion of the face. which is to say, he was thinking his naughty kade thoughts. gotta temper, huh? he asked coyly. kade stood, turning slowly on his paws, and sauntered even farther away. the brute shook his head as a small laugh bubbled from his throat. slowly, the laugh turned into a full-on lung-busting howls of laughter. when he recovered as much composure as possible, kade turned back around, a gleam still in his deep brown eyes. now i know i know you. you're the fae from under the docks. the only one that could beat me in a race, he laughed, the memory flowing back quickly as the words off his lips. he shook his head again, and starring at her, was suddenly lost in thought. i fell for you... the bold words never dared cross his tongue that night, or now. and then i hated you, he thought, only a small wince displaying his thoughts to the world outside.
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Re: d o n ' t f i g h t b a c k [open]

Postby bambi, » Fri Oct 18, 2013 3:33 pm

    R I S K ∵ ∴ ∷
        ➳ tαkє α shσt, tαkє α c h α n c є σn .

      Risk turned her head up at his comment on her temper. I don't have a temper, she thought bitterly to herself. How dare he say she did? She became slightly confused at the sound of him laughing and peered after him, a puzzled look on her face. Startled by his sudden fit of laughter, Risk felt herself retreating backwards, only to come to a stop as he faced her once again in his cheeky state. A small burst of pride caused Risk to puff out her chest. "The only one, eh?" she questioned him, a small gleam in her eyes. She obviously was proud of herself for her success over the brute. She noticed him wince, but figured his pride had probably been hurt that day and the memory only hurt his poor mind. Risk had yet to place his name, but she didn't bother asking, not wanting to go through any sort of embarrassment regarding asking for it. She'd rather he think she knew.
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Re: d o n ' t f i g h t b a c k [open]

Postby Rotten » Fri Oct 18, 2013 4:50 pm

.:Beate Walborg Hannelore:.


|Female|Husky|2 years-old|Single|No Crush|Commoner|Currently- Asking questions|Location- Garage|Feeling- Nervous|Tags- Crisis, everyone in the garage|Word Count- 160 words, 837 characters

:.I'm searching your dark hallways
Trying to find the light
Swimming your sad ocean
I'm drowning in your sea
This will all be over soon
And we'll learn to live again...


Beate finally arrived at the garage, tongue lolling out from her run, however there was a spark in her eye that could not be missed. This cheerful dog was as excited as ever. She looked around the garage for Crisis. She really did like the grumpy dog, even though se was pretty sure he didn't like her. But Beate tried her best to please Crisis whenever she came back. She understood his life had been. They've all had tough lives here.

She saw familiar and unfamiliar faces here in the garage, but no Crisis. That made her frown. She wanted to tell him stuff. Oh well. She looked at the other dogs that were in the garage and decided to ask them where he was with a huge smile.


"Hi everyone! It's been a long time! Do any of you know where Crisis is?" However, Beate notice a tension in the air. A puzzled frown came upon her face.

"...Is something up?" she asked nervously.






.:Korbinian:.

|Male|Czechoslovakian Wolfdog|5 years-old|Single|No Crush|Commoner|Currently- Interacting|Location- Black truck|Feeling- Insightful|Tags- Dani|Word Count- 685 words, 3715 characters

:.We'll rest easy (justified).
I've suffered a swift defeat.
I'll endure countless repeats.
The gift of memory is an awful curse,
with age it just gets much worse,
But I won't mind.

I won't mind at all...


Korbinian was a bit surprised by her words. However, the only indication that he had been surprised was a twitch from his right ear. She was a dog who felt heavy with sin too. She was trying to be optimistic though. She was accepting his words without any real sort of discomfort. This one looked at things in a way he could not understand. Korbinian already knew that this was a dog who had to endure fights in the ring. A lot of dogs in this place had the same past. A past of violence and a look in their eyes. Korbinian always knew when a dog came from the ring, even if their fur hid the scars like his own did. It was in the eyes, a look, one that was dull with a terrible sadness. Something was missing. Something that normal dogs had, that they did not. A humanity of sorts? Maybe you could call it an understanding. They all couldn't understand something that normal dogs could.

But for the case of the dog in front of him, it was obvious she had been a fighter just by her appearance. Scars riddled her body and she was missing a leg. Korbinian had mauled a leg practically off from time to time when he was still a fighter. It happened. She was just lucky to be alive. He wondered a tiny bit about her story, just a tiny bit. That wasn't the only thing he wondered about too. The thing that fighting dogs lack in their eyes, that understanding. She seemed to have a faint glow in them that showed that she understood. Though he could see tired guilt in those beautiful blue eyes too.

Korbinian realized he was spacing out, lost in thoughts. He focused back his attention on her, no emotion on his face except for one full of dissatisfaction. His expression usually never changed. He learned while in the ring to never show your expressions, it was weakness, never try to feel other emotions, it distracted you. That stuck with him. So as usual, he gave her that glare and dissatisfied look. There was something bittersweet in those eyes though...as his response came out.


"....No, it wasn't hard to see. Ive grown use to that. The thing is though.....she died alone...I was too busy killing her attacker a little ways away. I could have been with her though. The attacker did try to escape from me. I could have let him go then stay with her till she died so she wouldn't be alone....Or I could have let the attacker killed her and then kill the attacker afterwards. It's better to die while you are with your killer cause at least then you don't die alone. That's what I always told myself before a fight." he finished explaining, his voice careful to hide his emotions, though the regret was obvious. He kept going, it's been months since he talked this much, but he felt like he needed to get it out.

"Good memories...I don't think Ive ever really had any..." he said and tipped his head a little to the right to show a lack of understanding. He was being quiet honest with her. Actually...maybe that kitten and watching the mother cat with her litter were his good memories. So those were the only good memories he made in his five years huh? With his breed, he'll probably live for another eight if nothing kills him. He was pretty sure that wasn't enough time to make anymore good ones.

Korbinian finally took a deep breathe and decided this dog was somewhat worthy for an introduction, he would feel rude if he didn't. However he still didn't like her, then again he didn't like anyone. But she was decent compared to others that lived here.


"My name is Korbinian, Koro for short. I am a commoner. What are you? I know you are sinned like I am." he introduced, pointed out, and asked. If this girl was a skitzee then this conversation was over. He hated those things. She didn't seem like one though...
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Re: d o n ' t f i g h t b a c k [open]

Postby Cakewalk » Fri Oct 18, 2013 5:59 pm

{Don't apologize! I enjoyed reading it. c: }

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"the fixer"

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        female;; five years old;; com;; no crush;; tagged: Korbinian;; feeling penitent;; 610 words
          "doɴ'т yoυ тнιɴĸ тнαт ιт'ѕ вorιɴɢ нow people тαlĸ? мαĸιɴɢ ѕмαrт wιтн тнeιr wordѕ αɢαιɴ, well ι'м вored. вecαυѕe ι'м doιɴɢ тнιѕ ғor тнe тнrιll oғ ιт, ĸιllιɴ' ιт - ɴever ɴoт cнαѕιɴɢ α мιllιoɴ тнιɴɢѕ ι wαɴт."

      A faint smile curled over Dani's lips as he began to speak again. It was a rare opportunity, catching the female with any semblance of a grin, and he would have had to be quick to catch it. Almost as soon as it appeared, it had vanished, taking a bit of the brightness from her eyes, though that thrill for life still remained. Countless time, she had watched a dog's life drain from his or her eyes. In the end, they always gave that last looking of pleading, wanting to be saved from the fate they had been given. And it was that look that always made the fighter turn away from her victims. There had only been one dog that Dani had wanted to kill, and that feeling had passed with the removal of her leg. The anger had swelled inside her when he had taken a hold of it and tried to rip it from her body. But with time to think on it, she realized that he had been doing his job. How could she hold that against him when she herself had done the exact same thing? So in her eyes, he was forgiven.

      "I can't say I agree with you," her voice finally came. "Better to look up into a murderer's eyes than at the big blue sky?" She shook her head, eyes flicking up to the expanse that stretched infinitely above them. For so long, she had been deprive of the sky. Now it meant freedom. Safety. Standing there then, she preferred its beauty over his. "I much prefer the thought of dying alone. No one to mourn your passing. No one to watch the life fade from your eyes. No one to plead for life to. Just you, death, and the world." Her explanation may not have been great enough for her acquaintance to understand, but she had tried. How could you put something so strange into words?

      His next bout of speaking pulled at her heart. For most strays, good memories were far and few between. Dani had more than most from her time in Mexico. She had spent enough time there to build up two years worth of good memories of soft hands, whispered secrets, and warm nights tucked beside a person. Sure, the memories that came after ruined her pretty picture of humans, but at least she had the first two years to prove that they weren't all bad. In her time as a stray, she had managed to gain a few, though they were small and insignificant to most. Even this conversation would go in her list of good memories, something she would hold onto until the next. It gave her that little push she needed to hold onto life more strongly than any other dog she had met.
      "Everyone has something to smile about," she said softly. "Even if they don't realize they have it. You can be glad about having four legs instead of three." It was rare that she willingly brought her handicap into conversation, but this was a rare exception."Or you can be happy that you can see and hear and speak and learn," she added quickly, not wanting to make him think that she felt sorry for herself. Because she certainly spent no time on crying over her missing leg.

      "I'm Dani. And I also happen to be a commoner, fortunately for you," she quipped. A sharp gust of wind suddenly bombarded her, causing her to shiver and stumble backwards at the same time, catching her body with her splayed back legs and gripping the soft ground with short claws. She hated fall.
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Re: d o n ' t f i g h t b a c k [open]

Postby Rotten » Fri Oct 18, 2013 7:05 pm

.:Korbinian:.

|Male|Czechoslovakian Wolfdog|5 years-old|Single|No Crush|Commoner|Currently- Interacting|Location- Black truck|Feeling- Insightful|Tags- Dani|Word Count- 685 words, 3715 characters

:.Fast open sky could do no harm
Like an embrace of a mothers arms
In sunlight

With every year that came to pass
More clouds appear until the sky went black
And now there's
No sunlight...


Korbinian thought he had caught a smile from the dog. Something small, but he couldn't be sure. She probably thought he was acting like a pup. Good thing she didn't say it. She had thankfully been patient with all of his talking though. He listened to her speak in return. It felt so strange to hold a conversation, he noted quickly that her voice was pleasant...but did he pick up a small accent? He wast sure, probably just his imagination.

She apparently didn't agree with his words about dying with others. Apparently to her it was better to die alone. He felt like the only reason she could say that was because she lost it all and now has a freedom that she feels she doesn't exactly deserve, then again he couldn't speak for her. He thought it was better to die with someone, especially if it's with your enemy, The one who outshine you in battle, who's skills proved to be better than your own, it's honorable to die with them. Poetic even. Why look up at the blue sky by yourself when you're dying? Then you'll just realize how empty and unfulfilling your life had been and wish you could have done more or at least start over. To die alone...meas to be lost in your own thoughts...Korbinian couldn't imagine a worse fate. When you die you are gone from the world and forgotten. But at least with someone beside you they will remember the tale of your death and keep you from the abyss of your mind. And though Korbinian believed this he too hopes he dies alone, a bit of a hypocrite kind of hope. But not because he wants to, but because that's what he feels like he deserves. A punishment for his sins you could say. The dog in front of him envied a path he would never want to walk...yet has to for redemption...or was he just confusing himself? He kept these thoughts to himself and didn't argue back though. To each their own.

Her next words were very positive and Korbinian was surprised once again. She even mentioned her leg, which he decided is tense subject for her. This dog was pretty optimistic, it irritated him a bit even though he felt like he should feel grateful that she was sharing her thoughts with him. It was easy for her to say that. Korbinian could tell this dog was special. She looked like a dog who has had it all and lost it all. Those who are given gifts and lose them can see the blessings. Korbinan feels like those dogs are the ones who have suffered the most. He never had gifts, he always lost. He never really had the tragedy of losing something of great value. How was he suppose to see and feel the positive when he never felt it before? Korbinian kept these words also to himself. Once again he could not deny this dog had an amazing understanding of something he did not have.

She ten introduced herself. Dani appeared to be her name and thankfully she was a commoner like himself. To him her name was quite odd though, but not in a bad way. A sharp gust of wind then passed. Korbinian barely felt it, but he notice it caused Dani to stumble back and make her shiver. It was then that he realized her fur wasn't made for this weather. She must be freezing. He let out a frustrated sigh.


"That was a nice and inspiring talk and all, and you have a lovely name, but why with the howl of Fenrir are you out in this weather? You aren't made for this!" he nagged. Of course it was out of concern, Korbinian was one who always felt like he needed to take control and to make sure all the dogs were okay. He then turned around and started walking off.

"Come on, lets go find some shelter." he said roughly as he walked away, not looking to see if she was following him or not. All he knew was that he didn't want to try and find shelter in that truck. Korbinian could not bare that. He was debating if taking shelter in the garage would be a good idea, though he didn't want to go there. There would be other dogs, and Beate would be there to count it all off. That was a headache just waiting to happen.
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Re: d o n ' t f i g h t b a c k [open]

Postby thejellyfish » Sat Oct 19, 2013 11:30 am

there has been a medical emergency in my family and i will not be able to post until later tonight. yes, i am being an awful butt-brain and i am incredibly sorry for any inconveniences. honestly, i know how frustrating this is. but if anyone can be on later tonight, i will certainly try hard to be online. but please understand, to me, family is always more important than the internet. again, i am so, so sorry for any inconveniences, but this is a completely unplanned and very difficult.
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Re: d o n ' t f i g h t b a c k [open]

Postby Heda » Sat Oct 19, 2013 3:58 pm

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Gunshot Male 3 years

Gunshot. Odd yes but it is his name. He never understood why his old owner called him that but he did, when dogs laugh and ask him how he got the dumb name. He simply shrugs and moves to the next topic, to him the name is unique and different just like himself.
Gunshot is a Pitbull, he's all black except for the white on his chest that sneaks up to the bottom of his chin and the tip of his right paws white, his eyes are a dark brown almost black. His ears a cropped which makes him upset and angry when other dogs ask him, its not his fault. His body is well built and strong, from the years of fighting in "the cage". He won pretty much every fight he got into, there are scars on his back leg, the back of his neck, and small ones on his muzzle where the stitches were. He has a heavy metal chain around his neck from his owner, lots of dogs ask him why he keeps it on. Its another thing he isn't sure about, even though he hated his pass life the cain collar gives him comfort.


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Aggressive Sweet Smart

Gunshot has been moulded into what he is today, well most off him. His aggressing comes from him being trained for the "The Cage" he was taught to be ruthless and love the taste of blood, he doesn't like it though never liked the taste never will but he can't say he doesn't crave the fight sometimes. He doesn't like listening to any dog, he doesn't care if that dogs taller then him or is the boss or any dog for that matter. He doesn't care he knows he can take them down if he has too and he will if needed. He has been misunderstood all his life by everything around him, he doesn't have any friends well maybe one or two but most dogs run or just stay away. Same with the humans, they call him names, try to hurt him. He would never hurt a human no matter what, he is not a fan but he just doesn't see the point.

He is very smart, he is street smart and fight smart, he isn't sure if theres any other smart but to him his smarts is all he needs. He may be ruthless and seems like he has no heart but he does. He never tells anyone that he has a thing for daisies, he has loved them since he was a pup. After the fights he would think about them, think of himself running through a field of them. He knows its dumb but he loves them, he likes the color the way they smell and look. He doesn't tell other dogs because......well really what dogs going to take a daisy loving Pitbull seriously?

He is really soft when it comes to someone he cares about, he will always be there when he can and will try to be a "good dog". Gunshot was always the bad dog, in his owners eyes he was never perfect, he would get beaten after a fight if he did something wrong. It didn't matter if he won or lost he would still be beaten, he had got out when his owner was asleep. The dumb human forgot to close the basement door and Gunshot was gone, he never looked back and he was never going back. He hated hurting innocent dogs, especial dogs he knew and liked.

They think he's vicious, they think of him as a killer, a monster. But he has a heart, he can love, and he can hurt. Even though most big tough dogs who are judged by there breed not who they are don't like to admit it but words like killer,monster, and vicious. All leave a wound that can't be seen by others but can be seined by themselves. He might be a skitzees dog but he isn't all about fight, he likes it by putting the other dog in there place but thats it.

"I'm not the cruel kind of dog but it makes me laugh to see a Doberman, Rottweiler, or German Shepherd any dog really. Walking around saying they can take anything down. To me its a joke, yeah your taller, yeah you got nice fur, but tell me the dogs you don't think you can beat? The dogs you are scared of, the ones you can't stand. A lot of cocky dogs don't answer because they feel weak showing there weakness. All of us have them, so why do we hide them?"


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No Not Yet Nope Some Day

Gunshot has never really thought of a mate, he wasn't really worried about that when he was fighting. He had only started thinking about them after he escaped, he has been thinking a lot in what he looks for, he had never got the chance to look into it really. He looks for someone who isn't afraid, who can speak to him without worries, who can laugh, who can cry when needed. But over all he just want her to be her and to not be scared of him.


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