HEARTS BURST INTO FIRE

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Re: HEARTS BURST INTO FIRE

Postby Bolt1784 » Thu Oct 03, 2013 7:43 am

"R A V E N"
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I'ᴍ ʙᴜʀɴɪɴɢ ᴅᴏᴡɴ ᴇᴠᴇʀʏ ʙʀɪᴅɢᴇ ᴡᴇ ᴍᴀᴋᴇ
I'ʟʟ ᴡᴀᴛᴄʜ ʏᴏᴜ ᴄʜᴏᴋᴇ ᴏɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛs ʏᴏᴜ ʙʀᴇᴀᴋ
I'ᴍ ʙʟᴇᴇᴅɪɴɢ ᴏᴜᴛ ᴇᴠᴇʀʏ ᴡᴏʀᴅ ʏᴏᴜ sᴀɪᴅ
Gᴏ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇʟʟ ғᴏʀ ʜᴇᴀᴠᴇɴ's sᴀᴋᴇ

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Raven growled and took a step back, lowering his head a little with his ears pricked. "He was never your son." He stated with a grin, curling his tail slightly. "You just found him one day and decided to keep him, didn't you?" He paused for a moment, inspecting one paw as he held it up before his face. There was blood on it. "Anyway, I digress. You kill me, you kill your stupid 'son', as you call him." Then he turned his attention to Curse. The pup looked the other wolf up and down, taking in his height, build and threat level. This one was of no significance, so he looked to Illusion again.
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Re: HEARTS BURST INTO FIRE

Postby rottenmutt » Thu Oct 03, 2013 7:48 am

Illusion. Male. Chooser.

Illusion pinned his ears back. That was right. He was hurting Merle. "Damn it Curse, you had to mention that." he mumbled and looked at him. His face strained and his eyes hurt. He turned to Raven and he growled."watch your mouth Birdy." he said and he turned away. His ears pinned to his skull. Only one way to get Merle back, only if its for a few minutes. "Merle, I know your in there. Fight back, Raven may be strong to you, but scream. Let everyone in this place know. Don't let him stand in your way! Let him hear every word you say, and let it be your turn to shine!" he turned to Raven. Grabbing the pup, and pinning him down. "You have to return, you can't let his spirit take over," he growled staring at Raven. "Merle! Be strong like your father damn it!" he snarled.
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Re: HEARTS BURST INTO FIRE

Postby Bolt1784 » Thu Oct 03, 2013 8:00 am

(( feeling the emotionals of this right now haha c': ))


"R A V E N"
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I'ᴍ ʙᴜʀɴɪɴɢ ᴅᴏᴡɴ ᴇᴠᴇʀʏ ʙʀɪᴅɢᴇ ᴡᴇ ᴍᴀᴋᴇ
I'ʟʟ ᴡᴀᴛᴄʜ ʏᴏᴜ ᴄʜᴏᴋᴇ ᴏɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛs ʏᴏᴜ ʙʀᴇᴀᴋ
I'ᴍ ʙʟᴇᴇᴅɪɴɢ ᴏᴜᴛ ᴇᴠᴇʀʏ ᴡᴏʀᴅ ʏᴏᴜ sᴀɪᴅ
Gᴏ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇʟʟ ғᴏʀ ʜᴇᴀᴠᴇɴ's sᴀᴋᴇ

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Raven had tuned out to what Illusion was saying, and he yawned again, rather loudly actually. But in the back of his mind, another soul was listening intently. Raven was suddenly snapped back to alertness when he was abruptly pinned down by Illusion. At first, Raven just snarled and tried to push Illusion off of him. But the little pest that was still stupidly clinging to life was...Fighting back?!

Listen to him, Raven. You don't belong here.
Shut up, stupid runt! I don't care! I hate him! I hate him!!
Perhaps you do. But this is useless, isn't it? The hatred that you feel.
It's not useless!! All I want to do is watch him crawl and beg for mercy!
But then what? When you're done? What would you do?

Raven visibly relaxed a little, stumped. He was stuck on this one.

Exactly. You do not know.
HE KILLED ME IN COLD BLOOD!
Listen to me, Birdy. There is no point in this. Nothing gets forgotten.

That. Was. It. Raven started to shake violently with the pure hatred coursing through him. He kicked Illusion in the stomach, knocking him off, then he stood up again, panting hard.
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Re: HEARTS BURST INTO FIRE

Postby rottenmutt » Thu Oct 03, 2013 8:12 am

Illusion. Male. Chooser.

Illusion was kicked off the pup but not hard enough to hurt him since Merle.. Or Raven was smaller then usual. He pinned his ears to his skull. And growled. "Merle, you have to fight! be like your father! You gotta keep fighting, don't give up no matter what!" the large brute said. He stared at Raven and blinked a few times. "Raven. I know I killed you, but you don't belong here. Your not suppose to be here, you should be passing on and moving on to a different place." he said and lashed his tail around. "Come on, there is no point to try to fight me, and try to kill me. Your better then that," said the brute. He stood there and tilted his head and narrowed his eyes and licked his own uzzle. "By you doing this, your just a monster, like I am." he said and then sat down.
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Re: HEARTS BURST INTO FIRE

Postby Bolt1784 » Thu Oct 03, 2013 8:22 am

"R A V E N"
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I'ʟʟ ᴡᴀᴛᴄʜ ʏᴏᴜ ᴄʜᴏᴋᴇ ᴏɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛs ʏᴏᴜ ʙʀᴇᴀᴋ
I'ᴍ ʙʟᴇᴇᴅɪɴɢ ᴏᴜᴛ ᴇᴠᴇʀʏ ᴡᴏʀᴅ ʏᴏᴜ sᴀɪᴅ
Gᴏ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇʟʟ ғᴏʀ ʜᴇᴀᴠᴇɴ's sᴀᴋᴇ

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Raven still fought against Merle's growing force of control, pretending to act like he didn't care. "Pah, why would the kid want to be like you, may I ask, Delusion? If I am a monster, then so be it. I do belong here. Everything happens for a reason, and some deity had sent me to this specific body for some reason. Your stupid son was not meant to be here, clearly." He gave a mocking smirk and inspected both front paws, feigning interest in them. Then a cruel thought popped in to his head, and he started to slowly circle Illusion. "Actually, I wouldn't be here right now if the kid hadn't died. You failed to protect him." The pup stopped with his back to Illusion, standing in front of him. But then he turned around to face him, grinning. "This is your fault, not mine."
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Re: HEARTS BURST INTO FIRE

Postby rottenmutt » Thu Oct 03, 2013 8:28 am

Illusion. Male. Chooser.

Illusion snarled and he lashed out at the kid. "Your nothing but a pathetic pup, you were back then and still are birdy!" he said with a laugh and he turned his back to walk away. "You will never make me beg and plead, your a wasted life form. You shouldn't be here." he said and he wagged his tail at the thought. Turning his glance back to Raven. "Oh my, I remember when I was killing you. The look on your face, as YOU begged." he said and laughed. Turning to walk away. "Merle, if you can't fight this, you aren't really my son are you?" he questioned and walked off. He didn't mean it, but maybe it'd get to Merle and make hi fight more to prove himself to his father.
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Re: HEARTS BURST INTO FIRE

Postby Bolt1784 » Thu Oct 03, 2013 8:42 am

"R A V E N"
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I'ᴍ ʙᴜʀɴɪɴɢ ᴅᴏᴡɴ ᴇᴠᴇʀʏ ʙʀɪᴅɢᴇ ᴡᴇ ᴍᴀᴋᴇ
I'ʟʟ ᴡᴀᴛᴄʜ ʏᴏᴜ ᴄʜᴏᴋᴇ ᴏɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛs ʏᴏᴜ ʙʀᴇᴀᴋ
I'ᴍ ʙʟᴇᴇᴅɪɴɢ ᴏᴜᴛ ᴇᴠᴇʀʏ ᴡᴏʀᴅ ʏᴏᴜ sᴀɪᴅ
Gᴏ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇʟʟ ғᴏʀ ʜᴇᴀᴠᴇɴ's sᴀᴋᴇ

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Raven snorted and trotted off, limping slightly from his encounter with the bear earlier.
And thus began the mental 'war' between 'Birdy' and Merle.

So, looks like i'm stuck with you, you annoying pest.
Aw, chill Birdy. Did Illusion hurt your big fat ego already?
Ego?! Well, I am quite handsome.
Wait, was that a compliment, Birdy?
No! I meant me! In my own body!
I am truly flattered, Birdy.

Do not call me that, runt. My name is Raven.
Wow, such an original name.
Well, you're the one who said what my name was earlier!
Actually, you were controlling me. So don't pull that trick.
Oh, and did you call me fat earlier?!
Well, I said that your ego is fat, but if the shoe fits, feel free to-
Alright alright, I get it, brat. Did I mention that you need to put on weight?
Ha, touché to that buddy. I know. Kinda lived alone for months.
And you're very short. Can't you just grow taller for me please?
No-can-do buddy. I'm a pup. Pups are small. Newsflash, ding ding.
Your fuse is short too, I noticed.
Yeah, and your ego is fat. Touché.

The two continued this for what seemed to be hours, just
aimlessly wandering in the forest.
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Re: HEARTS BURST INTO FIRE

Postby rottenmutt » Thu Oct 03, 2013 8:48 am

{I don't know what to do with Illusion now.xD}
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Re: HEARTS BURST INTO FIRE

Postby Bolt1784 » Thu Oct 03, 2013 8:50 am

S y k e s wrote:{I don't know what to do with Illusion now.xD}


(( perhaps illusion could run in to raven/merle again and notice that raven is a lot calmer and not killing anyone or anything etc etc c; ))
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Re: HEARTS BURST INTO FIRE

Postby rottenmutt » Thu Oct 03, 2013 8:52 am

{Sure.c:}
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