The Lost Clan ➳ ᵃᶜᶜᵉᵖᵗᶤᶰᵍ

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Re: The Lost Clan ➳ ᵃᶜᶜᵉᵖᵗᶤᶰᵍ

Postby Froas » Fri Sep 06, 2013 9:09 am

I have picked out mentors for the apprentices. if you have a problem with the list, then pm me and I may be able to work it out.

We can start, but I don't want to pick a deputy till we have a few more cats and we've roleplayed a little. Here's Froststar's post, I'll have Sofpaw's up in a minute


      froststar

      ᴍᴏᴏᴅ: happy, slightly unrestedᴡʜᴇʀᴇ: Highrock/her denᴡɪᴛʜ: nobody
      A beautiful day, especially for early new leaf. The air wasn't chilly as it had been for the past few days, and it was crisp. The sky was clear and blue, only a few cotton-like clouds drifting past. The sun was bright, but it didn't make it too hot. Froststar loved new-leaf, for this very reason. It was always perfect to her , and peaceful. It was also a great time for kits, and Froststar loved kits. Someday, she thought it nice to have some of her own, but certainly not during times like these, when there are greater things to worry about.

      She stepped up onto Highrock and looked down at the camp, a vast, bowl-like clearing in the woods, surrounded by tick cedar trees, protecting it safely from view, and keeping most of the harsh winds out. Sometimes, a faint breeze would drift inside, but Froststar didn't mind the breeze. She couldn't help but give a warm smile as a flicker of pride rolled into her stomach as she watched her Clan.
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Re: The Lost Clan ➳ ᵃᶜᶜᵉᵖᵗᶤᶰᵍ

Postby RustHeart » Fri Sep 06, 2013 9:17 am

(I do have a problem with the apprentice/mentor stuff because Fawnleap is expecting kits and cannot be training Oddpaw. Can you change it to Twinstripe?)
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Re: The Lost Clan ➳ ᵃᶜᶜᵉᵖᵗᶤᶰᵍ

Postby Froas » Fri Sep 06, 2013 9:29 am

Oh yeah, sorry about that, I'll change it right now
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Re: The Lost Clan ➳ ᵃᶜᶜᵉᵖᵗᶤᶰᵍ

Postby ayomi » Fri Sep 06, 2013 10:22 am

name;; applepaw tags;; berryfang,froststar where;; camp words;; mentor;; berryfang


applepaw woke up and yawned. she arched her back and slowly made her way out of the apprentices den. not trying to, but not really caring if she stepped on the variety of ears and tails in the den."oops! sorry, i really did not mean to do that!"she muttered to herself and then chuckled. when she got out of the den, she saw froststar on the high rock, looking all high on the rock... she chuckled to herself at the bad joke. one day, she would be on on that high rock, leading her clan. applestar, she thought. it just had a ring to it. applestar, she sighed. that day was a while from now. she looked around for her mentor, berryfang. she must not be out yet, i guess. she shrugged,"the lazy furbrain", she snorted. then seemed to realize she said it out loud. she tried to melt back into the crowd of the few that were awake. she looked at the fresh kill pile, her stomach grumbling. she would feel guilty to take something from it before everyone else had eaten. she looked at flamepaw, and he had the same longing in his eyes. she went over to him,"flamepaw, seeing as none of are mentors are up yet, do you want to go hunting? we could eat when we get back.without waiting for the tom to respond, she headed over to froststar."can me and flamepaw go hunting?"she paused, waiting for an answer.
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Re: The Lost Clan ➳ ᵃᶜᶜᵉᵖᵗᶤᶰᵍ

Postby belle noire » Fri Sep 06, 2013 11:58 am

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Re: The Lost Clan ➳ ᵃᶜᶜᵉᵖᵗᶤᶰᵍ

Postby Len. » Fri Sep 06, 2013 4:27 pm

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Skyfire

gender
Skyfire is fully female.

age
18 moons young, just enough for a warrior.

clan
Cedarclan

rank
Warrior


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{ p e r s o n a l i t y }
        Skyfire was given her name for her personality. Well, the second part anyway.
        She has a fiery personalty, with a sharp tongue and cutting remarks. She has a habit of being sarcastic even if she doesn't mean to be. She is still young, still learning, but then again, who isn't?
        She isn't always like this though, she's kind of half and half, depending on her mood.
        At other times she can be sweet and helpful with a passion for caring. She loves helping cats, even if it doesn't show all the time.

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{ a p p e a r a n c e }
        She is a long haired grey calico with a splash of black on her nose. She keeps her fur neat and clean as best she can. Her long fur gives the appearance that her tail is quite long, hen it's just about average.
        However her eyes are the most beautiful thing about her, they are a crystal clear sky blue that seem to have the power to mesmerize you.

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{ h i s t o r y }
        Pretty much normal clan-born cat history, not a very eventful kit hood...

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{ l o v e l i f e }
        She has no crush.





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Slientpaw-->Silentscream

gender
She-cat

age
11 moons

clan
Cedarclan

rank
Apprentice


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{ p e r s o n a l i t y }
        Silentpaw is a very shy she-cat. She doesn't get into anyone else's business and always obeys what she's instructed to do. She hates stepping out of line or disobeying her mentor. This doesn't mean she can't or won't, she will if she needs to, she just hates doing it, t feels wrong to her.

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{ a p p e a r a n c e }
        Silentpaw is a pretty grey tabby she-cat, and her fur is somehow still nursery soft.

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{ h i s t o r y }
        Silentkit was born with a vocal cord defect, she has never been able to utter a sound. She was born with two brothers, one stillborn, which her mother named Lifekit, and the other was called Ebonykit, for his black pelt. Ebonykit and her mother both died of the same bought of green cough, and her father left out of grief. No cat knows what happened to him, they just woke up one morning and he was gone. He left his newly apprenticed daughter, for he didn't want to have to watch her die as her mother and litter mates. Silentpaw feels a strong sense of abandonment towards her father, and she still grieves for her family.

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{ l o v e l i f e }
        Who could love an orphaned mute kit? She has no crush, for she thinks no one could ever love her in return.






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Stormkit-->Stormpaw-->Stormfeather

gender
tom

age
Not born yet
Fawnleap's kit.
clan
Cedarclan

rank
Kit


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{ p e r s o n a l i t y }
        A very playful kitten, Stormkit loves pouncing on balls of moss, and hisr littermates. he is quite loud, and troublesome.

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{ a p p e a r a n c e }
        Stormkit is a calico kitten, with beautiful grey-blue eyes. he will be the runt of the litter, so he is quite small, he doesn't let his littermates pick on him though.

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{ h i s t o r y }
        Will be role played, nothing has happened yet.

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{ l o v e l i f e }
        Too young
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Re: The Lost Clan ➳ ᵃᶜᶜᵉᵖᵗᶤᶰᵍ

Postby Pandle » Fri Sep 06, 2013 8:40 pm

    berryfang
Details wrote:Mentors -> Applepaw
Location -> in camp
Tags -> Applepaw, Flamepaw, Froststar
      Slumber had given up its ghost a will ago, Berryfang had slipped out from the warriors den to empty her bladder, and was slinking back into view when her gems caught sight of Applepaw. Her lenses narrowed on the impish she-cat. Berryfang had learnt very quickly that mentioning Applepaw was going to be anything but easy, but she relished the challenge. She was her first apprentice and Berryfang was desperate to prove herself as capable of teaching everything she knew to someone else. Padding swiftly up behind Applepaw and Flamepaw, she flicked her banner over her apprentice's flank. "Not planning a great escape are you?" Her mew was soft and warm, just as the honey tongue of the sun was as it fell over the camp, warming the clan with its gentle heat. "Northblaze wouldn't be too impressed if you got Flamepaw into trouble," she chided, swinging back around into camp and gesturing for the apprentice to follow. Plonking herself into the sot flora of mother nature's rug, she drew a paw across her face and twitched her whiskers. "I want you to clear out the elders den before we head out, I thought we could do some hunting practise today," new-leaf's arrival had provided the ideal opportunity for the pair to practise; prey was becoming bountiful and after a long leaf-bare the extra food wouldn't go amiss. "I'll head up and check with Froststar, just in case she wants us for patrols," and with that Berrypaw rose to her feet, abandoning her grooming, to speak with the clans leader.
      She scrambled up the rocks, peering up at the ivory leader. Berrypaw could remember being an apprentice, how she'd admired their leader and vowed to be just as patient and wise as she. Dipping her head in respectful greeting, the young warrior bid a good morning, "Morning Froststar! I was wondering if I could take Berrpaw out for some hunting practise today, unless you wanted us for patrols or anything," she shifted her paws, still nervous about approaching their leader alone.


    wrenfeather
Details wrote:Mentors -> Softpaw
Location -> in camp
Tags -> Softpaw
    The tender tom-cat blinked against the growing light. Slumber faded from his mind, leaving him curled up and snug, reluctant to pry himself upright. Nevertheless, the warrior knew that getting up was a necessity; Softpaw was a new apprentice, only a moon into her training, Wrenfeather couldn't deny he had a particular soft spot for her in his heart. He adored the young cat's determination and her ability to adhere to his lessons, more than that he loved her personality. If he could have had a kit like Softpaw he'd have the proudest father ever to have walked through the clan. He'd get her over her low self-confidence one day. Of that he was sure. Stretching the kinks from his spine out, the tabby beast ambled from his nest out into the morning light. He rolled his tongue across his tawny pelt, grooming it carefully as he searched the camp for signs of Softpaw. If she didn't wake soon he would trundle off to bid her good morning; there was work to do, sleeping in wasn't something they had time for. Not today. As he groomed his pelt he watched the bubbly Berryfang approach her own apprentice Applepaw, and the equally lively Flamepaw. He flashed his eyes up to spy Froststar on high rock. Still no deputy, he noted. Starclan must be getting disgruntled, concerned at the least. Wrenfeather didn't mind, sooner or later Frotstar would make her decision and Wrenfeather felt confident that the cat she chose would be someone he could follow without issue.
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    Re: The Lost Clan ➳ ᵃᶜᶜᵉᵖᵗᶤᶰᵍ

    Postby MulataMermaid » Sat Sep 07, 2013 1:20 am

    Sorry for short post guys, I will lengthen my post in the future, it's just that I was very tired from school and practice}}

    Northblaze

    Northblaze padded out of the warriors den, a yawn showing off his sharp white teeth. He stretched, and then sat upright and perked his ears. It seemed that some of the clan was already awake, chattering like blackbirds. He ambled over, giving a nod of respect to a fellow warrior, Berryfang. Helping out the elders sounded like a great idea to Northblaze, Flamepaw needed to do some clan service. Afterwards he would take his apprentice out hunting. He nodded to his apprentice. "Flamepaw, I wanted to take you hunting today as well. Once you finish your apprentice chores, it will be time to go." He said, looking expectantly up at Froststar. "If it's okay with Froststar, of course," He said with a respectful nod to the clan leader.
    The future lies before you;
    like a field of fallen snow.
    Be careful how you tread it;
    for every step will show.

    They'll judge you by your past;
    Which makes it do or die.
    Unless of course my darling;
    You spread your wings and flii.

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    Re: The Lost Clan ➳ ᵃᶜᶜᵉᵖᵗᶤᶰᵍ

    Postby Keriae » Sat Sep 07, 2013 1:54 am

    WILDPAW


      The pale torbie-pelted apprentice jolted awake as sunlight shone in her closed eyes, illuminating her eyelids. Blinking rapidly as she got used to the bright light, she sat upright and then stretched out her jaws in a yawn. Snapping them shut, she hastily groomed her fur free of moss and scraps of bedding before rising to her white paws and slipping out of the den. Looking around camp, it didn't take long to spot the white fur of her mentor and leader, Froststar. It was such an honour to be the apprentice of the leader, and even after four moons of training with the white-furred she-cat, Wildpaw still felt a little overwhelmed and in awe of the older she-cat, although she did feel very comfortable to be training with her and learning from her.

      Trotting over and noticing the many pelts of some of her clanmates, Wildpaw sat down and curled her tail over her paws, dipping her head in a silent greeting. Obviously her two denmates, Applepaw and Flamepaw, had asked something; she could see the glimmer in their eyes. Their mentors, Berryfang and Northblaze, were already there. Kneading her paws on the ground, Wildpaw let her cool green optics drift around the camp as she waited for her mentor to finish talking.
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    Re: The Lost Clan ➳ ᵃᶜᶜᵉᵖᵗᶤᶰᵍ

    Postby MulataMermaid » Sat Sep 07, 2013 2:13 am

    Oddpaw

    Oddpaw padded into the clearing, he had already been up early to go for a walk, and now he flicked his ears in interest at the gathering of cats in the clearing below Froststar's highrock. He padded over silently, not seeing his mentor Twinstripe anywhere. His tail drooped. He had hoped to start some early battle training to improve his skills, he was an older apprentice and needed to sharpen his skills for practice. He sat down, noticing some of the warrios, Northblaze and Berryfang, as well as fellow apprentices Flamepaw, Applepaw, and Wildpaw. He sat down next to Wildpaw and wrapped his tail neatly around his paws, looking up expectantly at Froststar.
    The future lies before you;
    like a field of fallen snow.
    Be careful how you tread it;
    for every step will show.

    They'll judge you by your past;
    Which makes it do or die.
    Unless of course my darling;
    You spread your wings and flii.

    Eld CS
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