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How semi-lit should this be? Vote the two that go together best.

Poll ended at Mon Sep 23, 2013 2:14 am

150 words.
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On wb, 80 words.
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25%
10 sentences.
2
25%
On wb, 7 sentences.
2
25%
 
Total votes : 8

Re: Sᴜʀᴠɪᴠᴇʀ WIP

Postby derision » Sat Sep 07, 2013 7:25 am

<< Now Open!! >>
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Re: Sᴜʀᴠɪᴠᴇʀ

Postby howl' » Sun Sep 08, 2013 10:00 am

    name . skaduwee [s-caw-do-we] shadow in africa.
    nickname . kawdu [caw-do]
    age . 6
    sex . male
    rank . a loner perhaps
    voice . jack sparrow. captain jack sparrow. c:


    traits . quiet, sly, cocky, rude.
    likes . flying, swimming, teasing, quiet.
    dislikes . loud, annoyances, being alone.

    eyes . red
    coat . black
    wings . feather, black
    height . 34 inches
    weight . 144

    family . skoonheid[mother], jagter[father], vegter[brother], sonskyn[sister]
    mate . n/a
    pups . n/a

    name . rayne [rain]
    nickname . rayne
    age . 4
    sex . female
    rank . lead hunter
    voice . ariana grande.


    traits . sweet, shy, fun, loving.
    likes . talking, having fun, adventuring.
    dislikes . storms, being alone, rude wolves.

    eyes . blue
    coat . white
    wings . feather, hawk
    height . 32 inches
    weight . 123

    family . alice[mother], tenso[father], bleu[brother], teal[brother], viper[brother]
    mate . n/a
    pups . n/a

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    name . viper
    nickname . viper
    age . 3
    sex . male
    rank . fighter
    voice . robert downey jr.


    traits . jerk, hateful, flirt, rude.
    likes . sleeping, fighting, ignoring others.
    dislikes . working, playing, loving, commitment.

    eyes . neon green
    coat . black and neon green
    wings . n/a
    height . 33 inches
    weight . 132

    family . alice[mother], tenso[father], bleu[brother], teal[brother], rayne[sister]
    mate . n/a
    pups . n/a

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    name . phish [fish]
    nickname . phish
    age . 4
    sex . male
    rank . a hunter
    voice . orlando bloom


    traits . sweet, nervous, shy, stuttering.
    likes . being around others, watching others fly, talk.
    dislikes . fighting, rude wolves, braggers.

    eyes . blue
    coat . red and tan
    wings . n/a
    height . 34 inches
    weight . 125

    family . ariel[mother], hawkeye[father], roman[brother], bear[sister], jupiter[sister]
    mate . n/a
    pups . n/a
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Re: Sᴜʀᴠɪᴠᴇʀ

Postby derision » Sun Sep 08, 2013 11:12 am

((This is fantasy. He can be rainbow neon, for all I care. Skaduwee and Rayne are accepted. I'm putting them up right now..))
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Re: Sᴜʀᴠɪᴠᴇʀ

Postby `kosmic » Sun Sep 08, 2013 8:18 pm

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    NAME - Toxic Cinder
    NICKNAME - just call her Cinder
    AGE - four
    GENDER - she-wolf
    RANK - beta female

    DISLIKES - water - loud - rude - annoyance
    LIKES - the dark - moon - flying - having fun
    FEARS - failing - captured - betrayed - killed

    BAD TRAITS - stubborn - short-tempered - hot headed - nonfriendly
    GOOD TRAITS - funny - caring - brave - dare devil

    COAT - dark & ashy black & dark green
    WINGS - feathery dark black & green
    EYES - toxic green [glows in the dark]
    WING MARKINGS - green sun sign on top - arrow mark on every feather [glows in the dark]
    BODY MARKINGS - Green twirl on tail - green ridged lines under each eye - green paws [glow in the dark]
    ashy black under belly that forms into winged type w/halo markings on chest - dark green bangs and tip of neck fur - ashy black from nose to bridge of her muzzle

    KIN - Toxic Waste [ father - deceased ] - Ash [ mother - deceased ]
    MATE - None
    PUPS - None
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Re: Sᴜʀᴠɪᴠᴇʀ

Postby insult+injury » Mon Sep 09, 2013 12:20 am

((I'd like to make the lead fighter, but I won't be able to start my form for two hours))
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Re: Sᴜʀᴠɪᴠᴇʀ

Postby derision » Mon Sep 09, 2013 1:17 am

((Okay, lead fighter is now reserved. CapnNova;; your pic doesn't work. Accepted when you fix that, I'm not trying to be mean..))
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Re: Sᴜʀᴠɪᴠᴇʀ

Postby insult+injury » Mon Sep 09, 2013 2:07 am

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Basics>>

I'm a female winged wolf. My name is Malum. It means "bad", but really, I'm OK. I usually go by Mal. I think it fits me better. Anyway, I'm still young, three years old, and I don't care for older wolves. They creep me out a little. Then again, I don't like very young wolves either. Moving on to my looks. Everyone says I look sophisticated and "elegant" but I think they are just trying to spare my feelings. I know I'm not very pretty, and it kills me sometimes. I wish I were the bright blue color my sister was, or I wish I had some unique marking that would differentiate me from the night sky. But I don't. I'm all black.Black fur. Black wings. Except for my eyes, which are reddish purple. My grandmother said red eyes were a sign of future betrayal, but I don't believe her. No one is close enough to me to hurt me. Speaking of hurting, I'm the lead fighter of this pack. If you have any questions about me being a girl and not able to handle it, drop by my den. I'm sure we can "work it out" somehow.

The Inside>>
I'm sure you've already gotten a little bit of a taste for my personality, but I'll let you in on a little secret. I wasn't always this way. I used to be carefree, happy, sweet, generous,and helpful. I used to be innocent and trustworthy, honest even. Then, I fell in love. I won't get to that right now, but he changed me. I became hard and brittle. When my family talked to me about it, I did something I will never forgive myself for. Anyway, even though I'm better than I was while with him, I've never changed back into me. I've evolved into some kind of monster. Now,I'm cranky, short tempered, and mean. I have no friends but plenty of enemies. Most wolves avoid me. I'd really like to change, but I just need someone to help me.

Past>>
I've had a rough life, and I often blame a lot of things on what happened back then. Anyway, I was raised with my mother, father and one sister, Rica. My parents had had more children, but only my sister and I survived after a very large storm. Because of this, my parents were very protective. Needless to say, later, when I fell in love, they were naturally suspicious of the guy. I got bitter with them, told them they should just leave me alone and let me live my life. Well, they loved me so much that they did just that and decided to trust me. I grew farther and farther away from them, believing I was truly in love. Eventually,I could tell that I was changing, but I kept pretending I wasn't and that I was in love. When my family talked to me about it, it drove me crazy that I knew they were right. That night,to get out my anger, I killed them all. My mother, father, sister, and "love." It is my greatest regret. Nowadays, I'm just trying to forget. Looking for love isn't really something that's important anymore.




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Re: Sᴜʀᴠɪᴠᴇʀ

Postby insult+injury » Mon Sep 09, 2013 2:08 am

((I accidentally submitted it, and it said it had to be checked by a mod. I'm not done yet, though. Hopefully it will be up soon.))
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Re: Sᴜʀᴠɪᴠᴇʀ

Postby derision » Mon Sep 09, 2013 2:09 am

((Okay. C:
You know, I am thinking about changing ten sentences,
to 150 words. I'm going to put a poll up.))
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Re: Sᴜʀᴠɪᴠᴇʀ

Postby derision » Mon Sep 09, 2013 2:44 am

((Bump. <3

We can start if you want.))
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