
LISTEN
1. play one of the girls and one of the lads, also please be able to roleplay the lads.
2. if I see you not playing your boy as much as your girl, I will not be afraid to kick you out.
3. reservations last five hours, no longer and I will make no exceptions.
4. please be active try to post once a day or at least once ever two days, if you can't then please don't bother joining.
5. be able to post two small paragraphs, more then seven words per sentence and also more than six lines per paragraph. not sentences, lines
6. no swearing or over drama, which to me is getting beaten up or practically "Lilly couldn't find her car keys, she went outside and slipped on the ice making her have a bloody nose. she got back up and went inside but found herself locked out." no, no, no...that's some pretty bad luck but pretty much stupid. that can't happen within a couple of minutes, also you can be more descriptive.
7. don't fight in ooc, also please don't use big face claims besides the lads because...just no.
8. I'm going to be tough because I want it to be active, and I will make this an active roleplay.
9. if you're leaving, please tell me but if you aren't going to be here for more than a week then I will kick you out unless I make an exception as a friend died, mother is in hospital, ect. but nothing like...I'm going to my friends house for two weeks, she doesn't have internet. I will not accept.
10. more will be added.
this is what I do and don't expect per post, just a small paragraph as I'm not going to write a full post since this should just give you an idea.
what I don't want
lilly woke up to a cold room and it was normal, she got up out of bed and went over to where her clothes were. she slipped on some of her casual clothes and then looked for her ponytail, she looked around and found it within moments with her eyesight. lilly put her hair in a bun like what she normally had done, she walked around over to her door so she could go outside. she opened the door and went into the hallway so she could get ready to go.
1. lilly did this and lilly did that, that's a big no 3.where did she find the ponytail? 4.what does her casual wear look like 5. use descriptive words 6. rather boring with she did this and she did that, put some heart into it
and there is much more wrong in that
what I do want
Lilly woke up to the coldness of her small room, she shivered and slowly got out of bed so she could get ready for her job at the nearby coffee shop. she got up and walked over to her dresser and her small feet felt the hard, cold, wooden floor touch her feet as she was not wearing socks. Lilly opened the third drawer down and pulled out a blue sweater, she put it on over her white t-shirt she had been wearing last night for her sleep wear. After that Lilly looked at the very bottom drawer and picked out some black skinny jeans, she dressed into the skinny jeans and looked for her warm white flats. They were fuzzy and rather warm, they covered her whole feet too which was an advantage since most flats never did. Finding the white flats that were leather on the outside and fuzzy faux fur on the inside she gently slipped them on as she then started to search for her flower ponytail, she glanced around the room and saw the ponytail around her lamp bottom. Walking over to it she lifted the lamp up and took the pony tail, placing the lamp back down that was gray and had a couple of scratches here and there as Lilly wasn't the most calmest sleeper. She put her hair up in a messy bun, her hair was like dirt but, like pretty dirt as her grandmother always told her. Lilly smiled and walked out of her small white painted room that was freezing cold, like the north pole.
there are probably things still wrong with this, but...it's better than before so please...try to be more descriptive. also remember, two paragraphs with six or more lines.