by Leviathan~ » Sun Oct 06, 2013 3:04 pm
((...okay so this is weird, you take the Percy Jackson series, manipulate it harshly, add the concept of power through belief into the mix and then you create a freak storm and don't even point out which Titan it is? Oceanus, if you weren't aware. Wouldn't it make more sense to just work a normal Camp Half Blood situation? Get a quest etcetera? At this rate I don't see the plot going past this freak storm. The Dean and this unspecified guard are going to attempt to fight off Titans, apparently without student assistance, even though the Titans haven't even shown themselves and so far all we're dealing with is a heavy tidal wave. On top of that, you singled out your own character as special by giving her some special association to this situation, which needless to say is a bit unfair to the rest of us. Just a thought, you may want to rethink your approach to this))
A lone rook sits poised at the edge of a cliff, sword drawn, eyes open. Against him, an army, its size near unfathomable. The rook smiles.
If only it were a fair fight.