AUTUMN → OPEN [Remake]

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Re: AUTUMN → OPEN [Remake]

Postby stricklyspagetti » Wed Aug 28, 2013 11:46 pm

BUTLER

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Butler smiled. "Yeah- I do." she said, and looked at the hoirzen. Was that Tophat? No.. It was Treacle Tart!B That meant.. "Kaz!!" she screamd, and stood up. "Thats my friend Kaz." she said a little appologeticly to Anthony for being overly excited. But, Kaz was her old friend. They had been friends.. since they where little! She used to have a crush on gim, but as she got older she saw them as friends.. and then she started developing the crush again. Her life was so confusing.


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Re: AUTUMN → OPEN [Remake]

Postby fawkes. » Wed Aug 28, 2013 11:51 pm

Kaz del Ray ;; Outside ;;Tags: Treacle Tart, Butler, Antony

The boy grinned as he heard his name being screamed by his old friend Butler. ''Butler!'' he yelled back, less loudly. The boy started trotting with Treacle alongside him as he reached the girl. '''Ello, 'ello'' He smiled, waving his hand. the boy chuckled, ''What's with all the excitement, eh?'' he asked Butler, inclining his head in curious manor.
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Re: AUTUMN → OPEN [Remake]

Postby Elillium » Thu Aug 29, 2013 1:27 am


Evangelica
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Evan had a couple second delay of fixing her shoe before walking,
but caught up to Wednesday quickly. Evan inspected her surrounding,
watching the odd leaf fall from a tree in the distance. "Does it
snow in the winter here?" That would be Evan's joy, she hadn't seen
much of snow in two years.
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Re: AUTUMN → OPEN [Remake]

Postby Elillium » Thu Aug 29, 2013 1:48 am

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Nathan || 19|| Straight
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Basics;;
Full name ; Nathan Richands
Nicknames ; Nate
Gender ; Male
Age ; 19


The people around you;;
Best Friend ; Anthony and Kaz Del Rey?
Enemies ; No one
Crush ; He has a couple, can't decide which to act upon.
What You Want In a Person ; Someone who can make him laugh
but is also serious and knows when it is a bad time
for something. Someone who thinks before they act
or speak.


What They See;;
Height & Weight ; 5.9, 170lbs
Distinctive Features ; N/A
Body Modifications ; He has a tattoo sleeve made up of black dragons on his
left arm



What You See;;
Social Ranking ; Just a normal person.
Personality ; Smart, brave, strong, rebellious,
curious, stubborn, quick, bright, understanding,
kind and bubbly.

History ; Nathan was born in Toronto Ontario,
on Christmas eve while his parents were visiting
family for Christmas. Nathan grew up here, and when
he was four, his little sister. Leah was born. Since she
was born Nathan has looked out for her, even through
their mother's passing. Their mother died with breast
cancer when Nathan was 12 and Lead was 8. Their father
is always away for work, and now that Nathan is 18 he
let them stay here without supervision of their aunt and
uncle. Nathan ran away from home a couple times before,
because of silly reasons and takes it back now. He does
not like being a bad person.



Others;;
Talents ; Skateboarding, playing the guitar, running
Pets ; Two husky's, Bella and Bluno
Car ; He has a black ford truck of some sort.
Phone ; Iphone 5, black and a neon green case.
Apartment ; Two Story, three bedroom two bathroom with finished
basement brick farm house on the outskirts of the main town.

Job ; He is an assistant mechanic.
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Re: AUTUMN → OPEN [Remake]

Postby october. » Thu Aug 29, 2013 8:18 am

ooc/ suddenly seems like there's a ton of new people! yay! /ooc

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Anthony startled as Butler suddenly yelled, relaxing as she explained who it was. The teen wondered about simply leaving, but figured he might as well stick around for a bit to get to know this person. Besides, it wasn't like he had anything planned and it would be nice to have a couple of friends in town. As Kaz came over, he smiled at him and introduced himself, "Hey, nice to meet you. I'm Anthony."

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Re: AUTUMN → OPEN [Remake]

Postby Elillium » Thu Aug 29, 2013 8:41 am

Evangelica
Evan spent most of the time walking admiring
the things around her. Her boots made a muffled
thumping sound but the bottoms of them remained
clean. Evan was thinking about movies too. She
wondered to herself if Wednesday would like to
see Sahara. It was from 2005 but it was her favourite
movie. Or Pirates of the Caribbean 4. That brought
Evan to think about it there will ever be a number
5. She sighed, beginning to get over whelmed in her
own thoughts. She glanced up from her hands, were
her eyes had been fixed and held her breath.
Nathan
Nathan stood at the end of his driveway reading a
letter he had retrieved from the mail box. It was
from his father and it stated he would not be returning
any time soon like he was supposed too. Another six
months it said. Nathan was only thinking about how
distraught his sister would be. Nathan had to tell her,
he didn't like lying or keeping things from her. So he
wouldn't keep it from her, he would delay telling her.
Nathan grabbed his jacket from inside, sliding the folded
letter inside and slid it over himself. He went to find
someone to be with, other then his sister.
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Re: AUTUMN → OPEN [Remake]

Postby L0v3 I$ Rar3 » Thu Aug 29, 2013 9:41 am

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    You could say like most stories they all start out pretty good. In
    a tiny hospital in the back country of Tenseness the screams of
    pain echoed in the tiny operating room and pertraied the vague
    idea of pain. The next thing you heard were the high pitched cry's
    of a baby coming from where the doctors stood, and a tiny baby
    was being wiped down with rags, and given a soft pink hat. The
    baby was set delicately in the arms of the mother with sweat running
    down her check and a tear in her eye. Her dark brown hair was
    pulled up into a disheveled pony tail, but a large smile appeared
    on her cherry red lips. The baby was taken away from her so they
    could put the identification band on her. Then the door swung open
    and a tall dark haired man rushed in with worry in his face, then
    he spotted the baby girl and frowned. He then began to yell at his
    wife," You told me it was a boy, thats the only reason i'm still
    married to your ugly *ss! I'm done!" the women wasn't even crying
    though, happy to be loose from the reins of her abusive husband
    on the happiest day of her life. She took her baby in her arms and
    squeezed the skinny girl tightly before whispering " I love you...."

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    The girls full name became Polaris Demi Harriet, which is very
    pretty for this brown eyed girl. At school she was already what
    some would call ugly at age 13 with tiny red bumps on her face
    and fine black dots clogging her pores. she would look at the tiny
    mirror in her locker and pop the puss filled pimples between classes,
    the kids that passed made faces and laughed at her, they called
    her Puss face Polaris. With her shy nature about herself she was
    a target of bullies, the perfect poster child for the bullied kid.
    They pulled her down the climbing rope in gym by grabbing a
    large clump of her hair and tugging savagely, pulling out some
    hair. Her scalp was bleeding as she ran out of gym class crying
    her eyes out, she loved her hair and it was the only pretty thing
    she had left, but it was ruined. So she died her beautiful dark hair
    a light sea blue, when she came into school the next day kids claimed
    she had become emo because of her choice in hair color. they
    also assumed it because she was quiet and kept to herself, not
    caring if they bullied her, not flinching at the words that stung
    like being branded or bit by an animal. She looked to food for
    comfort gaining 30 lbs to bring her wight to 130 lbs. She tried
    to ignore people calling her fat,ugly, the most likely to win an
    eating contest. you have no idea how much this hurt her, it
    damaged her so much it drove her to becoming anorexic. Her
    mother really didn't notice her daughter dropping pounds, her
    clothes becoming baggy and loose, and her bones began to
    appear. she once dropped below 100 lbs and decided that was
    too much weight loss and she looked to gaunt. She kept on
    doing this until her mother caught her throw away her entire
    dinner. so her mother put a little bit of weight on her so she
    didn't look so much like a skeleton, or the walking dead.So she
    finally became content with herself when she was at the weight
    of 102 lbs and stood 5''5, she was very skinny and gaunt. So
    when she turned 14 she was tiny , had long sea blue hair, no
    more pimples and was finally being laid off by the bullies. she
    knew it was only because she had grown from her awkward stage
    where she looked like a tiny troll from the movie that had dug
    itself from the ground. she grew out her nails that had been
    stubs before because she had chewed them raw out of nerves
    and fear. Her mother was loving the new young girl that stood
    before her, all beautiful and delicate with her thick black eye
    liner and beautiful blue eyes. she started her a facebook page
    and posted tons of pictures of her daughter, but a strange man
    with dark colored hair was following the page closely until
    Polaris's mother said what school her daughter went too.

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    An old red truck pulled up to the tiny brick school where Polaris
    was in art class, she was sitting in the corner working quietly
    on a colorful vase of flowers. A tall man with dark hair got from
    the truck quickly before heading to the building, he walked in
    quietly before talking to the secretary and telling her to call
    for Polaris. The secretary called the girl from class, and the
    skinny blue haired girl came quickly asking who the man was.
    the man ignored the question before thanking the secretary
    and pulling Polaris hard by her arm to the truck. Polaris
    started to struggle, hitting him hard in the face with her hands,
    but he took tape from the back of his truck and taped her
    mouth shut before shoving her into the truck. this man didn't
    want to hurt her, but rather her mother, because he was
    after all her father and hated to be ignored. When he got
    in the truck he looked at Polaris before rummaging through
    her back pack, there he found the address to her house. The
    man made her open the door with her free hands before
    thrusting a gun to the back of her head. Her mother was
    home sitting at the table eating some crackers as her duck
    taped daughter walked into the door crying, behind her
    was her father with a gun pointing at her head. The mother
    screamed loudly before running down the hall because the
    man had pointed to gun on her. Polaris was thrown on the
    ground roughly and shot in the leg so she wouldn't get up,
    her scream could be heard through the tape that covered
    her mouth. The rage in the mans eyes lit up like fire as he
    chased the mother down the hall to a door, he noticed it
    was closed and when he tried to open it it was locked. With
    a grunt he ran into the door a few times before it flew from
    the hinges.Her plea for mercy was heard by her screaming
    daughter , but the mans eyes lit up as he pulled the trigger
    and shot her in the head. Polaris knew she was next, so she
    began to limp out of the open door.

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    The man didn't notice his daughter slip from the door and
    limp frantically to the neighbors who were already calling
    the police, he was just staring at the body of his wife.He
    began to feel deep sorrow and regret, but he could never
    take away the hurt he had just caused, the unnecessary
    death. The police arrived quickly and took him to jail,
    he was charged with life. Polaris made a full recovery
    physically, but never made it up mentally. She is now more
    shy then ever, and began to become a pyromaniac, she
    set fires until she was caught by the law and talked to, she
    even had to serve a few days in jail. now she is the broken
    15 year old teen with a circular scar on her leg to remind her
    of that day, the day of dearth..........

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WRONG TURN ON A DUSTY ROAD...
polaris◄ demi◄harriet◄
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ʟɪᴛᴛʟᴇ ᴍɪss sɴᴀᴋᴇ ᴇʏᴇs wrote:name- polaris demi harriet
gender- female
age- fifteen & three quarters
nickname- airy
mother- Nicole Rose Harriet
father- unknown.
sisters- eden
cousins- aaron & marilyn
theme song- natalie

-- ʀᴜɪɴᴇᴅ ᴍʏ ʟɪғᴇ--

hair- was a rich black but currently a sea blue.
eyes- light caramel brown
figure- tall and skinny
skin- translucent
scars- scattered about her back but the
serious ones ate on her neck.
tattoos- only one
piercings- ears
birthmarks- on her ear, half
of the lobe is a light brown.
eyesight- black raybands

-- ˁᴴᴱ ᴮᴱᵀᵀᴱᴿ ᴿᵁᴺ--

positive- intelligent, down to earth,
sometimes happy.
negative- clandestine, quiet, keeps to herself.
problems- anorexia & was a past pyromaniac.
orientation- heterosexual
crush- no one
label- the quiet one, the mysterious.
social rank- loner.
popularity- dig five feet underground, take
a right. see there she is.
secrets- her anorexia and history
other- quote box was made by pumpkin queen.
credit to her. It was filled in by brittle forum credit to her!!!! pictures to owners.

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Re: AUTUMN → OPEN [Remake]

Postby stricklyspagetti » Thu Aug 29, 2013 9:46 am

BUTLER

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Butler smiled. "Oh, you know." she said, and sat back down, blushing just a bit. "Anthony, this is Kaz." she said. Wait.. I just yelled his name! Stupid! she told ehrself, but took in a breathe as Tophat came back purring. Tophat's back arched, as she loved Treacle.


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Re: AUTUMN → OPEN [Remake]

Postby polaroidpizza » Thu Aug 29, 2013 11:29 am

Wednesday || Wednesday smiled, "Well- Yeah." She finished. Before they reached her house. She opened the door, as two rats scattered across the floor. "Home Sweet Home." She said to her three story home. She built it herself.















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Re: AUTUMN → OPEN [Remake]

Postby Elillium » Thu Aug 29, 2013 11:49 am


Evangelica
Evan didn't want to be rude and point anything
out so she kept quiet, even though she was
very startled by the tail of a rat she had seen.
"It's Marvelous" She said, admiring the size of it.
She stepped in gently, like if she was quick she'd
set something off.
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